Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Loved how you gave in Arnav's insight, more so, about his denial about his so called feelings of Khushi.

And I also like Aakash's characterization! I feel that quiet people have more of a potential to be better characters, such as reading into their thought set.

Beautifully put!

Edited by Rhysenn - 12 years ago

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Just found this by accident and just loved it
Please write more

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome update! Loved it! Thanks for the update and PM! Can't wait to read more!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

You call those spoilers? Thats as vague as it gets! :p

Waise I think you got Arnav in denial down to the T. I mean with every sentence of his, I went Yeah right!:p

I loved how you focused on the bromance between Akash and Arnav. So blatantly ignored on the show but you did absolute justice to it. Akash was geeky and adorable, like his thoughts..

Arnav's feeling of hilarity creeping up on to him- that description was so amazing Nafi!! I loved those lines.

Can't wait for the next update. :D No confrontation in this one, just a mountain of Jalebis. :D Shubh Aarambh to the new year indeed! :D

Update soon! <3

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Thank you! That was awesome!

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Lovely long update ...loved it !

Thnx for the pm.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

loved the update thanks for the pm

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

amazing chapter as always! the details with which you write are just so damn good! they just capture you right into the story, as if your right there with the characters feeling everything they are and seeing everything they are!

your an amazingg writer!

Akash was so cute at how scared he was at Arnav's reaction to being dragged in the middle of the night because of him

and then how dumbfounded he was when Arnav didn't yell at him

hahaah

and Arnav trying to convince himself that he doesn't care of Khushi one bit! When will he realize!!

and hmm wonder why Khushi ran out of Shantivan so quickly..

awesome update! excited for the next one :D

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

That was brilliantly written. How long will Arnav Deny Khushi affects him?

Thanks for the pm.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

akash is scared that he will be caught if he stays too long
and yet he can leave his bhai behind either
of course he isnt really all heartless monster he protrays himself to be akash
ahh hope to god that situation doesnt arrive that you have to do what arnie said he would do to marry khushi marry him in the show
as you as well as her knew you would so do what arnie asked you to do
oh these raizada borthers they have me in fits for sure
where did he come from all of a sudden
awww arnie is laughing his head off and can you blame him we so would do the same if we saw akash like that
infact thats what i did do when i read of akash's description by arnie
keep telling yourself that arnie
it sure will stop you from thinking about why you are behaving in this manner
oh dear looks like he is back our ASR with mention of khushi
well she gets to him every time even there or not in front of him
arrey she is khushi she can do a lot if she puts her mind to it
speaking of her what her reaction like after this whole meeting of arhi in her bedroom
god question arnie's conscience why and the day he answers these innumerable whys then he will know the truth of his feelings for khushi
once again in denial mode arent we dude
and thats where he is wrong once again and you cant run from this again
well lets see what the next one brings us