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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Yep! I agree with Rasgulla_sp Arnav needs to verbalize his love. That is one aspect he really needs to work on!

Wonder how Indira is going to respond to the family when Bhavna comes to know all the whereabouts!

Arnav seems to be bogged down with the family burden and Arjun seems to be hell bent on self goal!!!

The narration is poised at a very interesting point and wonder how things will sort out/turn out.

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sahada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

K this Ch is MAGNIFICENT!!!!!! Awestricken with how this story is beeeautifully progressing!!! You are an exquisite writer!!! I love love LOVE your Arnav n Khushiii!!! ❤️

I jus LOVE how they know n accept eachother's way of expressing love twds the other.. No reservations or doubts.. they're so clear about their feelings twds eachother.. n theirs is anyth but a difficult realtionship K.. you make it seem sooo easy n simple even in midst of all this shit.. they make it easy for eachother..Theirs is the easiest! Loving the other.. This is how it should be.. love!

Learning lots n pots from these 2- YOUR Arnav n Khushi!

You write their comforting-eachother n love scenes so aesthetically.. And as it is Arnav's way of expression I'm glad that YOU are the writer of this FF n these love scenes!

And my brave girl Indira.. I so admire her for her strength n taking charge of this mess her husband's created for her n her family.. She's been shown very strong n determined up till now.. i think she should get some mommy time- if her mommy's as we hope she is |= Khushi is sooo right about supporting Arjun n Indira but not interfering... But in matters of the family it is very hard to do so.. But they must let them do the work as Khushi suggested... That's how I would do it too.. I do.. But I can never make the other person understand my take n views and suggest n explain smth as beautifully n convincingly as she did to Arnav... She voices her understanding of a situation n her view on how to go abt it impeccably.. to perfection! You're a beautiful writer K!!! ❤️

Aww Bhavna is handling being kept from the truth so well... And I'm glad for her tht she saw Arnav n Khushi like tht.. She needed to.. N they needed her to know this too so she won't b pushy in revealing the truth sooner thn they can manage n intend to..

Loved it!

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LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

its too good to see they came so far in their relationship...shared a bond which is so strong though they have started on wrong foot...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Was waiting for our update since ages. It's beautiful how their relationship is growing.

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

I don't agree with what Indira did, though I understand. And when one has been covering for a sibling/relative one's entire life, it becomes 2nd nature.

I hope there is no fall out. It's beautiful to read about Arnav and Khushi at the eye of this storm; an oasis of calm that is always being intruded upon by their silly and oblivious family.

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

This is one messed up family. Indira, what are you doing? But I think she did it out of guilt and not to protect Arjun, because somewhere inside her she knows if she had put her foot down on his behaviour before, things wouldn't have come to this. And Khushi is right, let them deal with their own mess.

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neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

they stand together for their family.hope everything gets alright soon...

don't want to see family breakup

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IshaniSinghh

@IshaniSinghh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Nice update... loved the way khushi is so understanding toward everyone be it arnav, indira or bhavna... god forbid out arshi from evil eyes... dont let suraj issue create misunderstanding between them... Post next part soon...

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Awww...
such a sweet n nice update dear...
jxt amaxng...
lovd it...

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Sarina2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Brilliant! Everything about this plot is brilliant. Precision, consistency.: its all there.

Indira... I m not sure.. I feel there is mor to it then meets the eye. Is she really just covering up for what her hubby did or is this her way of indirectly sabotaging him? I m not sure at this point where Indira is gonna take it.

Arnav understanding that khushi is his strongest ally is such a classic point. It's just amazi g how u wrote it! Lovig every bit of this story.

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