Raizada and Sons - Thread 4 - Page 18

Originally posted by: vgedin

@Bold - Yes, a big fat yes ! I have told her before, what she writes is like a physical expression of deep rooted emotions, and she does it beautifully :)

And R&S Arnav is mine, for several reasons - but he is all mine. Claimed by me long, long back, about 30 chapters back to be honest :D You can have PoL ka Arnav :D

@Italics - I know, he is learning. He speaks less, but when he does it is heartwarming :) Always means what he says :)

Twiggy if K were not my friend I would have been jealous of how she writes love (and I mean it that way- writes love)

Both the Arnavs say what they mean in a heartwarming way. It is just that RnSwala Arnav got more chance to do that. PoLwala jab bolega na... You will go flat! Hain na K?

PS: RnS ka Arnav is sexually charged whereas PoL ka is SEXY. I want the latter one.
Mujhe de do na 😊

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Twiggy if K were not my friend I would have been jealous of how she writes love (and I mean it that way- writes love)

Both the Arnavs say what they mean in a heartwarming way. It is just that RnSwala Arnav got more chance to do that. PoLwala jab bolega na... You will go flat! Hain na K?

PS: RnS ka Arnav is sexually charged whereas PoL ka is SEXY. I want the latter one.
Mujhe de do na 😊

I am completely in awe the way you write your stories is just amazing. These two have come a long way from just being a married couple to a couple in love and that too completely in love be it physical, emotional attachments or mental. You have really written it all very beautifully. The way they compliment each other!! Clearing misunderstandings between them and then the father daughter relationship and how she understood all that he had to say regarding her marriage to Arnav hmm i am not a writer like you so cant be that exressive 😉

was waiting for so long for an update...following ur other ff as weell POL...though i love Pol more but even this ff is quite interesting...nice update...love the relationship building between arnav and Khushi

perfect.. they r standing by each other!!

I just like the way kushi explained to arnav the relationship.

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

As Liya has given up on IF and therefore on the two stories I write, it is fair to hand over the Arnav's from these stories to people who really like him.

PoL Arnav - Saiyu take him and DON'T COMPLAIN ever.

RnS Arnav - Twiggy he is all yours girl, I hope you are happy.

Thank you K. You are the best. Now just a little ahem ahem is all I need 😳

Still K I am not giving you FS ka Arnav to you. You deserve better 😊

Didn't expect an update until next year,as you said that you're on vacation.
And this is a pleasant surprise.In your absence,I've caught up with 40 chapters
of POL and I am really liking that story.😊

Loved this update.
The understanding and love between Arnav and Khushi is really adorable.
No one would have believed they'd reach this place when reading the first
update of R&S.But gradually their relationship grew so much in strength.

Oh,and at the end of the update,Bhavna's gesture was most fabulous part.

Looking forward to more.

Updated comment on page 22

Very nice to see the kind of understanding they had.

This is going to come back to bite them..
don't know that I would agree that this is indira/arjun personal space... this has far raching consequences