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Posted: 11 years ago
hi
i joined forum some months back
here is comment

concept is indeed amazing
rude & arrogant arjun
simple and sweet riya
so arjun is a prince
and ran away to become a police
but how come he is that reckless
that he did not notice his wife is missing since morning

chap 1
i didnt like this arjun
he is behaving like a monster
poor riya😭
but indeed she has strong will power
or say her love for arjun is so strong
amit story is indeed good
riya really cares for all
arjun tried to force riya
riya is terrified
i hope arjun realises his mistakes before its too latse
or may be as you mentined its alredy too late

chap 2
arjun loves riya
but behaves like monster with her
he is also in pain giving her pain
riya is relly terrified
will her heart ever forget arjuns monstrous side
arjun know many things about her
but when he keeps eye on her through cameras
why didnt he notice her missing
sam and arjun bonding was indeed great
even after all this
riya is following arjun's orders
thats really shows she is indeed
scared as well as loved him beyond limits

chap 3
sik i hate him
he is disgusting
sam is angry with arjun
he cares for riya as his own sister
riya is indeed magical
arjun locked riya😭
arjun need to pay for his mistakes
he treated riya so badly in past
ofcourse sik is needed to be punished

chap 4
etf in action
thats great
they are nice team
arjun knew it
arjun ko riya ki dress size bhi patha tha😆
hemant is relly a fool
but sik is cunning
ek lead mila or wo bhi hath se nikalgaya
so sad😭
thank god arjun saved riya
he really cares and loves her
but doesnot show it
Hell with it! She is my wife!!" he mumbled, thank god Riya dint hear it, if she did she would have died, with happiness and shock!
so true she would surely get heart attack if she listened

CHAP 5
caring side of arjun is nice to read
he is jealous of glass and water drops😆
present is a disaster😭
riya is in front of his eyes
but arjun couldn't save her
sam is emotionally very much attached to riya
shree and chotu also are
hope they find her soon
and kill that sik

chap 6
painful update
etf team 👏
salute to thier unity
really impressing
they care a lot for each other
roshini's story is really sad
rosh loves arjun so deeply
sik he should be hanged to death😡😡😡
samjun friendship,sam riya's relation
choree support to arjun
every thing is so touchy
Every man has his secret sorrows, which the world knows not, and often times we call a man cold when he is only sad.
i loved this line
so simple yet too deep
riya is an angel in true sense
its shocking she found comfort in arjun's soft gesture
happy that arjun realised he did a mistake by pushing riya away from him
when he loved her

chap 7
may people are waiting for sik's death
that dog is busy playing pranks at cost of others life
and enjoying playing with emotions of innocent people
you described him correct
he is a pshyco not just a criminal
so etf got a lead
story again travelled to arjun's family
hope etf reaches sik
riya she is caring for small things of arjun
she indeed let arjun with no other option
other than to fall for him

chap 8
riya is insecure
ofcourse which wife would not
amit is a cutie pie
far naughty than his age
arjun ko karela pasand hai
why not both are bitter
sam and arjun are very protective for riya
arjun & amit scenes are good
super twist etf caught sik👏
they should beat him to pulp

chap 9
what a plan
its superb
i am so happy🥳
arjun & sam gave him nice treatment
knowledge is devine
it never goes waste
it helped arjun and shree a lot
if not for riya etf used to kill sik brutally by now
arjun father also has same royal attitude
i also want arjun to kill sik
but he should control still he finds riya

CHAP 10
arjun,sam,shree,chotu & arjun's father love riya a lot
rathore is best cheif
he didnt let his anger & emotions over power his senses
riya is in miserable state
my heart cries for her
sky also should be punished
riya hided behind couch😆
so childish but her fear is justified
amit thank god
koi to hai jo arjun ko q's puch ne ki
aur riya ki dard share karne ki
riya is in front of etf
but in danger
sky he really broke arjun's temper
by slapping riya infront of him



Edited by samvedha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hii Muskaan read all in one go
really wonderful n outstanding story
but want part 11th link
so plz add me ur buddy list n pm me plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey all the 10 parts are fab n u r an awesome writer... can i read parts from chapter 11... can u plzz invite me to ur blog... plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi... I am new reader this story.
I like this story. Wonderful and owesome. .
bhot acha likhti ho.
riya truly love arjun and arjun truly love riya.
They bhot really love each other.
all team members like riya as friend and as sister.
arjun riya ko bachane ke liye use dared de raha he taki riya use nafrat kare or ghare chod ke chali jaye.
par riya arjun se bhot pyaar karti he esiliye arjun ke dared ke baad bhi vo use chahti he.
amit is so cute.
sik ne riya ka kidneep kiya.
arjun ko jiska dar tha vahi huva.
puri team riya ko khojne ke liye jamin asman ek kar rahi he.
arjun past very bad.
sik ne roshni ko maar diya kyoki vo arjun ki dostthi or use pyaar karti thi.
akhir arjun and puri team ne riya ko khoj hi liya.
ketne samy ke baad arjun or riya ek dusre ke amne samne aaye he.
I hope sab kuch dhik ho jaye.
riya ko pata chal jaye ki arjun use bhot pyaar karthe. Or ysne jo kych vhi kiya vo usko safe rakhne ke liye kiya .
I wish riya forgive arjun.
or vo dono sath ho jaye.
I see ariya together.
Please connect your blog. Otherwise send in my email id.
my id - siyashah2014@gmail.com.
Please send me.
I request you.
You are to gud.
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear came across your story
n believe it ,its juzt beautifully potrayed I juzt read full 10 part in one go and I like everything about it whether it was romance or whether it was fun ya after sikanders arrival also I enjoyed it as it was some of adventure and I loved it...
Riya nervousness when Arjun is near her her love ,trust everything I lovd and not to forget Arjun he caring side or his ruthless side whatever I juzt love my Arjun in everyway...😳😳
and prince ohh my Arjun is really a prince and Riya princess ofcousre she will be becase they are ariya
but this is not fair after 10 part you shifted your story in blog I was having free time today because their was no studies and college and all that so I was going through net I my eyes caught your story buti was enjoying myself but then you💔...
anyways dear back to the it is awesome,fantastic,exceelent,beautiful potrayed...
and I relly want to read the further part of story and as you mention COMMENT SORRY BIG COMMENT WILL OPEN THE GATE OF YOUR BLOG so her Im writing I rely don't know how to exactly comment so I don't knw how to explain how nice your work iz!!!!!!
so plz juzt understand how I felt about your story by what I have written if you don't I don't hknow how to explain becoz I seriously don't know how to explain my POV to others so...
and yes if you think my comment is enough and me iz worthy of rading you ff so hear iz my id..
vishakhaputhran6298@gmail.com
plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing and new concept dear
feeling bad for riya 😭
arjun ughhh 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
ria is so nice & caring
emotional update
sikandar touching her 😡😡

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Posted: 10 years ago

your writing style is simply amazing n unique

its a perfect combination of all emotions n u portrayed it beautifully 👏👏

riya unconditional love for arjun

arjun love for riya but he can't express his feeling

i even love his gray shade

all etf team is really nice n supporting specially smaeer

i m new on IF

i just read 10 parts in one go & want to read further parts of story but you shifted story in blog plzzz give me your blog link & add me to your buddy list plzzz


Edited by mariumshaazad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4274923&TPN=12 Helloji
I have joined india forums few days back and have read the fading butterfly few parts and wishes to read more but couldn't as it is in your blog can I read your stories please I promise I will like and comment too especially this story never say never and when you care another story of yours...because the comments are sooo good I really wanna read your stories




humsafarsky2@gmail.com
Iqra Shamsher Singh
Awaiting an affirmative reply
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Posted: 10 years ago
dii today I was going through ariya ff's. n I got this one...The title is catchy...For the almost 5 - 6 chapters I seriously wished to kill the great ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte...but after that...I regretted...n this sikandar is seriously a psycho...sick head...ediot stupid...loved Rathore bhai...n shreetu too...n that conversation of arjun n pilot was funny...I laughed out loud making my mom suspicious that I have gone crazy...feeling bad for roshni...n that chapter in which etf team was tricked by sikandar...are boats wala chap...I felt like either banging sikandar's head against a wall or mine head itself...awesome story...If possible pm me too...going to check the next thread...

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