hi
i joined forum some months back
here is comment
concept is indeed amazing
rude & arrogant arjun
simple and sweet riya
so arjun is a prince
and ran away to become a police
but how come he is that reckless
that he did not notice his wife is missing since morning
chap 1
i didnt like this arjun
he is behaving like a monster
poor riya😭
but indeed she has strong will power
or say her love for arjun is so strong
amit story is indeed good
riya really cares for all
arjun tried to force riya
riya is terrified
i hope arjun realises his mistakes before its too latse
or may be as you mentined its alredy too late
chap 2
arjun loves riya
but behaves like monster with her
he is also in pain giving her pain
riya is relly terrified
will her heart ever forget arjuns monstrous side
arjun know many things about her
but when he keeps eye on her through cameras
why didnt he notice her missing
sam and arjun bonding was indeed great
even after all this
riya is following arjun's orders
thats really shows she is indeed
scared as well as loved him beyond limits
chap 3
sik i hate him
he is disgusting
sam is angry with arjun
he cares for riya as his own sister
riya is indeed magical
arjun locked riya😭
arjun need to pay for his mistakes
he treated riya so badly in past
ofcourse sik is needed to be punished
chap 4
etf in action
thats great
they are nice team
arjun knew it
arjun ko riya ki dress size bhi patha tha😆
hemant is relly a fool
but sik is cunning
ek lead mila or wo bhi hath se nikalgaya
so sad😭
thank god arjun saved riya
he really cares and loves her
but doesnot show it
Hell with it! She is my wife!!" he mumbled, thank god Riya dint hear it, if she did she would have died, with happiness and shock!
so true she would surely get heart attack if she listened
CHAP 5
caring side of arjun is nice to read
he is jealous of glass and water drops😆
present is a disaster😭
riya is in front of his eyes
but arjun couldn't save her
sam is emotionally very much attached to riya
shree and chotu also are
hope they find her soon
and kill that sik
chap 6
painful update
etf team 👏
salute to thier unity
really impressing
they care a lot for each other
roshini's story is really sad
rosh loves arjun so deeply
sik he should be hanged to death😡😡😡
samjun friendship,sam riya's relation
choree support to arjun
every thing is so touchy
Every man has his secret sorrows, which the world knows not, and often times we call a man cold when he is only sad.
i loved this line
so simple yet too deep
riya is an angel in true sense
its shocking she found comfort in arjun's soft gesture
happy that arjun realised he did a mistake by pushing riya away from him
when he loved her
chap 7
may people are waiting for sik's death
that dog is busy playing pranks at cost of others life
and enjoying playing with emotions of innocent people
you described him correct
he is a pshyco not just a criminal
so etf got a lead
story again travelled to arjun's family
hope etf reaches sik
riya she is caring for small things of arjun
she indeed let arjun with no other option
other than to fall for him
chap 8
riya is insecure
ofcourse which wife would not
amit is a cutie pie
far naughty than his age
arjun ko karela pasand hai
why not both are bitter
sam and arjun are very protective for riya
arjun & amit scenes are good
super twist etf caught sik👏
they should beat him to pulp
chap 9
what a plan
its superb
i am so happy🥳
arjun & sam gave him nice treatment
knowledge is devine
it never goes waste
it helped arjun and shree a lot
if not for riya etf used to kill sik brutally by now
arjun father also has same royal attitude
i also want arjun to kill sik
but he should control still he finds riya
CHAP 10
arjun,sam,shree,chotu & arjun's father love riya a lot
rathore is best cheif
he didnt let his anger & emotions over power his senses
riya is in miserable state
my heart cries for her
sky also should be punished
riya hided behind couch😆
so childish but her fear is justified
amit thank god
koi to hai jo arjun ko q's puch ne ki
aur riya ki dard share karne ki
riya is in front of etf
but in danger
sky he really broke arjun's temper
by slapping riya infront of him
Edited by samvedha - 11 years ago
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