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Posted: 12 years ago
hii Muskan

i had just read ur ff and i really dont have words for it. its really awsome i hope u count soon and plz add me in ur pm list. well am new to this Arjun forum so i dont know how u guys comment or ue rules are.

thanks morlen
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry i didnt know tht i need to give my email address also well its morlenjoseph@gmail.com plz add me muskan

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur story well atleast the first ten chapters were too good
Initially when I first read it, I hated Riya for allowing arjun to walk all over her, I never understood why arjun always wanted to keep ger away from himself... When that was later resolved in one if ur updates my heart really went out to him..

I initially thought he was extremely harsh but through ur updates Also saw him loosing his resolve to keep her away from him or rather keeping himself away from her... His attraction towards her yet his control on his emotions to keep himself away was penned down beautifully

The best part was her interaction with amit and the eft gang, rathod her brother and choree her friends

After chapter 10 I felt awful that u moved ur story to ur blog, and I was unable to read one of my favourite story's...

I use my phone to access IF and many times if becomes do difficult to navigate and respond

Would you please kindly add me to ur blog so I can read chapter 11-15

saf_precious_786@hotmail.co.uk
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have written so many times to u that i want the username and password for ur blog...plz hav some mercy on me dear...all ur story's parts are awwwsum...the way arjun feared of losing riya and riyas blief that arjun wud be her one day ...u hav potrayed it very nicely...i like th tricks sikander is playing and not to forget the system from which arjun is guarding riya...is just out of the world...plz send me the blog link...my email is...pokharelshreya@gmail.com
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am neca gonna b a silent reader again...the consequenes r too bad ...u were not sending me the usermame until I write about all ur ten chapters so I had to resd all the chapters once again and trust mr reading it once again I am not at all disappointed ...u hav such aquality in writing that I cid actually imagine all he cenesi frnt of me so here is ur story review...for chapter one I really felt nad for riya the way she was treayed n then cumin over to chapter two riya stil folowing arjunz order how sweet ...I specifically dun rememba the part of chapters so sory for that I liked rathore n shretu concern for riya n d eay arjun says my wife...luved arjun dialogue to hemant ahhh arjuns camer a his security sts ...felt nad for rjun in roshn case ...riyas belef sikadar. game in a way gud makin arjun more eager...the riddle which arjun cracks about siks bro too gud n rathore convo wid shre...arjun know how to ride plabe...m sorry once again for bing silent reader now plz snet me pm. wid th e chapter m from mobile so I can't acess wordpres..plz n sory for. eror...u r awesum
luv uu plz. sendme pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyi came across u rindex today and i reliased i never read this story
i read thru chapter 1 to 9 today...
i like the way the story is moving ...liked the grey hero ...i for some reason like more of grey charecters
i like the way the way the story is built up ..
like the way u have spaced out the chapters ...
i like the bits of romance the thrill the royal touch wow
can u pls invite me to the blog...id is angelasaakshi@gmail.com
i have been travelling since past 6 mnths ,,,,my job involves a lot of travel re so when ever i find time i catch up

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi! Got your invite, SO SO happy!

Reading all the chapters and commenting simultaneously.


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CHAPTER 10

Such a cliffhanger! It had a lot of events happening, and the juxtaposing of the past and the present brilliant.

Love Amit, he's so adorable and protective of Riya!

And me blushing at the sensuous part of the chapter😳
Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 11-18 Comments on second thread😊
Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oops!!! Double post, sorry😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi i m newbie. 1st f al i say u r a gud writer. I m fan f ur writing.

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