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Maya

@Harshamara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1151

Hey mastimuskan, i m jst fan f ur writing. I get disappointed wen u rstrctd ur work as dt tym i was nt a member bt now i m n i'll cment on ur each part. Till den bye n tc.

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smile_neha

@smile_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1152

Hi... Nice start muskaan... good to see story apart from Arshi.. that i am interested in 👏👏

Keep it up !!

But i feel sorry for Riya... She deserves to be loved yaar..😉

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smile_neha

@smile_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1153

Hi... Love ur concept ... Keep it up !!

Will try to be good reader n give u credit for ur work...

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smile_neha

@smile_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1154

Ur 2nd chapter is good... finally Arjun will realize his love i guess... dont make it too hard for him to find Riya 😭

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smile_neha

@smile_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1155

For chapter 3...

I love hw u have showed Riya's care for Arjun despite his bad behaviour towards her... n the trust she has in him despite the odds she is facing under sikander...

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smile_neha

@smile_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1156

Chapter 4 is 😳😳😳

They come close for the first time ... aww so sweet... i think m in cloud nine...

😛😛

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smile_neha

@smile_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1157

Chapter 5... Amazing update... The care n love Riya deseves is finally reflected in the flashback...

Coming to the present ...Arjun ws so close yet so far from Riya.. I ws like the wait is over bot alas !! 😭😭😭 ... Neverthless he will find her n kill Sikander soon

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riyaarjun

@riyaarjun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1158

kab likhane valy ho vapash

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panchi01

@panchi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1159

Hi Muskaan

I m a new member in india forum and recently I came across ur ff and I m just stunned at ur writing ability. u r an amazing writer and I couldn't stop myself from commenting. I read ten parts and I loved it . but frankly speaking I hate arjun for torturing riya so much still love ur story. but I cant read the second thread of ur story and I am eager on reading it. plese do allow me to read ur story further.

hope u accept my request. I don't know how to post my comment but I m trying it . I hope I have posted my comments in the right place

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nazdhoom

@nazdhoom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1160

hi am naziana am a new reader i want to get acesse to your blog please.i love the story it deferent from wat i have been reading till now arjun is very bad with ria.Ria should be more stronger