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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi25031990

my email id is skaremun_123@yahoo.com...Arshi Sayyed.

i have sent you an email already...yesterday only...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey muskaan...
i m waiting...plz send me the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read the update! although i commented on the blog itself... i thought i shud comment here also... u are really a MINDBLOWING writer! i really and honestly loved ur chapter 11 update... actually i liked all ur updates... they are totally flawless.. love reading the updates again and again actually... all thanks to you for writing such wonderful updates... i just can't wait to read more! haha! oh my... i am getting selfish.. haha... please update soon! =)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Muskaan ,

To begin with i completely understand your frustations with silent readers as i myself started writing one and get 600+ views and 6 replies ...:(
Coming to your FF..
Arjun- He is the super cop but he is both aggressive & arrogant and slightly grey for me .He is completely different from the serial and her relation with Riya just walks on a thin thread . In beginng i really couldnt relate to this Arjun but as you have revealed his scars coz of roshini thats brings a very differnt shade altoghter other wise i would have really started hating him ...but i now get his behaviour.he cant tell her about his love - would be so frustating .
Even the mazes /boat scenes/ figuring out sik would be in his house was wonderfully done
Riya - she is the epitome of innconce. I mean she really loves him so much that she would suffer any thing .her only solace being Amit ..her relation with Amit and the other ETF members definately shows her caring nature .But i wish you could show her a litlle less submissive and opening up to Arjun .
ETF team - They are and will be best .Shree /Chotu and rathore concern for her was well explained .Even rathore and her bonding ..there scene when she brings the food esp ,Rathore anger on Arjun after hearing her calling Arjun Sir hits the right spot
Sik - An intelligent criminal -..the mazes ,the boat scne where he was fooling him ..do we see more of him in future ...
Seeing your precap i hope nuthng happens to Riya as i dont think she would survive it ...But please can we see a much stronger Riya ...
I know what she has suffered and emerged strong doesnt show her as weak but you know what i mean write ...
Reg riya its just a request plz dont get angry
Please email at sips_crazy@yahoo.com
P.S- Arjun reminds me of Maan Singh Khurana i dont why but he does ,,just i guess the anger part
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i'm still waiting for u to accept my request..
i'm commenting from ur last 2 chapters...
please except it fat i'm waiting to read chapter 11
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Posted: 12 years ago
my email id is parikh_rhythm@yahoo.com
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fading butterfly is my first ff that I've read that is not on Arshi and I totally loved it

Read all the 10 parts at once when I got a from u of the latest teaser as before that I didn't know about that but really it's truly beautiful and a very nice concept which perfectly goes with their characters

The spark that Roya has to love and to obey him is beyond sny words and the self control that it takes for Arjun to be away from her is a little frustrating on not in a bad way though I mean from riya's aspect as u know how much she loves him and truly deserve his love in the right manner.

Please upgrade soon ... Waiting to see how je gets her riya back and then their reaction on seeing each orher that too close and knowing that the person in frony of you love you more than thei life
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Muskaan, I am Niki 😊
I am feeling really sorry for me that I came across this wonderful FF of yours so late...!😭
I just finished reading all the ten parts of this FF, I wanted to comment long back, but wasn't getting time because of my college schedule...😒
And to be frank I was really amused and surprised by your Dhamkis dear...!!😳 But I want to tell you that you are an amazing writer 👏

At first when I started reading this FF, initially I was shocked seeing our hero Arjun in that cruel Avatar and I was like 'WTH?'😲... Well you can understand of course that its hard for us Arjun lovers to imagine him in that form... But as the story progressed and I continued reading, all the shock and confusion about his character faded away and now I am in love with his character...⭐️
His love, his care his overprotectiveness about his Riya that he could hurt her to keep her safe but couldn't see her life in danger...Oh and the way he spoke to Sik with attitude when he came to Solaur was just Mind blowing...!! 😃 The prince in him, oh I couldn't help falling for him...!!😳
Riya...I just loved her in this FF...😊 Her undying love, unshattered faith in him and this relationship is just commendable!👏 Even after the small fearful encounter with him, her love and trust in him was the same... I hope She is safe remains safe and Arjun's action don't do any harm
Amit...oh that cute little boy is very smart!😊 I loved his dialogue 'I was also waiting, so I also deserve an apology'.😉...He is really sweet.
Rathore and his sweet realtionship with Riya, I loved it...And Riya's simple gesture of sending food for him and the team really touched my heart...😳😊 The team is as usual great and I really liked their teamwork
And finally...I LOVE YOU Muskaan 🤗 for picking up Vidyut Jamwal as Sikandar here...
I know I know Sikandar is a negative character, but I couldn't help myself from drooling over Vidyut ever since I have seen Force...😳. And here he fits perfectly for Sik's role...Oh, kash usne Riya ki jagah mujhe uthaya hota, I swear main bilkul bhi bura nahi manti!! 😉😆

SO in short your FF has everything thrill, action, drama, suspense, love, romance, care, friendship, teamwork and Two handsome hunks Shaleen and Vidyut opposit each other...😳What else do we need??
Oh yes, we need your updates! 😉😃

OK, I am again sorry for a late comment and such a ridiculously long one, but I had to say this all...😊

So, after reading all your Dhamkis, I just want to request you to please add me into your PM list if you can.😊

Here is my email ID: bhagat.nikita14@gmail.com

Thank you

Love

🤗

Niki

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi,
Muskaan i havent received the email yet please help me dear...Arshi
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww.. sorrie.. dear for late to comment bt kal hi u k blog pe access ho paya.. ok so abt da update.. it was jus awesome.. no words to describe wht i felt aftr readng it... no doubt u r an amzing writr.. nd finallie sky had died.. nd ariya mil gaye... lovd etf team nd deir full pack action.. continue soon...

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