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Posted: 12 years ago
Hii..first of all thank u thank u thank u very much for the invitation..luv u..sry i m rplying late because until now i m not able to access ur blog...
but anyways the update was superbly amazing..ok the confession on the cliff is superb..n they kissed each other in that dangerous situation..n riya is adorable hw she ordered him for his confession..but rathod save riya on..dat's so sweet of him...n the flashback is too good..hw arjun is in kitchen in every 5min..or to find a 'mysterious fly'..i realy like it..hw arjun make her understand his feeling n she asked is 'she a bad girl?' dat's so sweet
realy u r a mind blowing writer..keep writing n plz plz keep updating me..thnks again for ur invitation..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey muskaan...i jus recently started reading ariya ff and came across this fanfic today. I rele lyk the way u hav written dis fanfic.

Luv how you have portrayed arjun's character. I rele want to read ahead... could you pls send me the link to your blog. Waiting to read chap 11

my email id is- pearlavari@yahoo.co.in

Thnx :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all i am sorry di😭
u know wat i luv ur writing😛
it's so interesting 😉
u know iam a student i just got sum time 2 enter if & more over dat now i have exams.i just saw ur ff just few days before and i became a fan of ur ff 👏
i lov ur arjun in dis ff d arrogent,young,angry,rude arjun reminds me of the one and only GREAT ASR
& the poor caring friendly lovely riya of KKGSR
i am new 2 this if and wordpress😭 so will u plz updt 11th chap in if plz😃
i gotta go bye😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muskan Aaapppiii!! Update karo na jaldi jaldi! Aur intezar nehi hota...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muski di...
aise mera dil na torho please,

i cnt access 2 ur mail.,
pls can u resend it pls...
my email id.


black_doll@live.com
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well...Muskaan dii.. first Sorry for commenting so late...
I checked the 11th part...
I can't explain how happy I am...
Finally Riya is safe...
Riya hanging wid Arjun in the cliff...that was scary *scared*
but the way Riya behaved while hanging there...that was somewhat funny... lolz
She was acting as if mad...:p
But she made Arjun actually say those 3 words...great
nd the Kiss...
Riya is actually something...
She kissed Arjun in front of whole ETF...that too while hanging between life nd death...
*brave girl*
Rathod did save her at right time...
The flashback...
WOW!!!!
Riya actually went upwards...disappointing Arjun...lol
How badly I wish that u were a bad girl Riya...that was something that cracked me up...>>>>
that was really SUPERB...
AWESOME...
LOVED IT !!!!!
Update next part soon...
can't wait for it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your story's going really really well. I like your portrayal of Riya as being fragile yet strong and Arjun as a modern day tragic hero even though his treatment of Riya is highly abominable.
I really hope that Riya does not forgive him easily after her rescue. Arjun is great need of repentance!

Please PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey muskaan plzzz update soon na dear cant w8 to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
Since I'm new to this ff as well as to his forum, even though I haven't seen all the episodes of Arjun, I absolutely loved the concept of your FF.
Honestly, its very easy to picture Arjun in the 'princely' way since he actually does look and act like a prince, what with all the attitude and arrogance in him in the show. :p
And I read your note for the new readers. And I'll give you a fair warning, that I'm really not good with words. :p
So reading my post might be really tedious for you! :p
So coming to Part 1, I got the shock of my life, reading it. It angered me to no end, reading Arjun's horrifying act and the way he misbehaved with Riya. If there's something I can't tolerate, it is violence against women. And that too for such an unjustifiable thing. Actually, now that I have read the whole ff, it feels weird to be commenting on each part individually, since, my thoughts after reading every part has changed so much.
Coming to the second part, I personally loved it the most! Cuz first, I love the song you mentioned in that part! :p
Secondly, the way Riya responded to him by confessing her love to him was really heart warming. Even when her life was in danger, all she could do was to let him know her feelings.
And I liked the way Arjun was feeling guilty, I was really hoping to see him filled with regret and guilt. He deserved all of it.
The third part, when it started, I slowly started liking Arjun, but by the end of it, I hated him even more. That part in the end, was completely inexcusable! Heights of insanity. Like literally! Horrible and terrifying. But I loved the Rathore-Riya equation a lot! It was really sweet of Rathore! And Riya too!
By the fourth part, I slightly started liking Arjun since he finally started showing his love and care for her. And of course, the way he was determined to find out a way to Sikander through that utterly stupid guy, Hemant! That guy made me laugh at his stupidity! :p
Fifth part! I loved the kiss, to be very blunt! :p
Wasn't hoping for such a scene, but since you were so sweet by writing it up, I'll be thankful enough for it! :p
Amazziinngg! :p
And the maze thing was really exciting, even though I know it was meant to be horrifying and scary, I kinda like these bhool bhulaiya kinda mazes a lot! :p
And it was a disappointment when he couldn't reach out to her!
Sixth, okay, I could sympathize with Arjun in this one. I honestly thought you'd bring in Roshni as the love of his life. But surprisingly and thankfully, you didn't. :p
But it was really sad to see Roshni sacrifice herself for him.
And I loved the way Rathore made Arjun realize his mistake and encouraged him to move on and make Roshni proud of her sacrifice for him.
And I had no idea that that incident affected Riya so much that she stopped sleeping on the bed after that! It was really sad to see her so scared about the trauma she had gone through.
Seventh part, I really loved your creative side, since the boat plan was simply mind-blowing! But sadly, it was another one of Sikander's disgusting plans! I seriously hate that guy! Such a frikkin cruel and evil guy! I feel like cursing him!
And I loved seventh part for another obvious reason! ;) :P
The kiss!!! :p
This time it was even more hot than the previous one! :p
And I'm so glad Arjun finally figured out about Sikander's next plan of action!
Eighth part! Riya is unbelievably the most naive soul, in your ff! :p
And she is truly amazing! I loved the camaraderie she shares with Arjun's colleagues! And specially when you mentioned Chottu eating extra rotis! :p
LOL! The freak in Arjun actually made Amit and Riya climb 5 flight of stairs! :p
The way he keeps hurting Riya is really irritating!
And I LOVED THE WAY SIKANDER WAS CAUGHT! Royal style! :p
I must say, Arjun has a really sexy style! :p
Ninth part. I LOVE ARJUN! Like seriously! The main reason I liked that guy in the first place in that serial is cuz he's too smart for his own good! And too fast! You know there are some people who don't do much, don't speak much, don't express much, but still leave a huge impact on you, or in this case, leave you completely speechless, and completely crazy for them! Arjun is just that kinda guy! I seriously love his character! And kudos to the writers of the show and of each FF, which directly, and creatively try portraying such a deep character in his different layers!
Tenth part! It was really mean of Arjun to completely forget to pick his wife up from the airport. And Riya actually waited for 4 hours for him!
And really quick thinking on Arjun's part regarding the dead body thing!
And since I haven't read the 11th part, I can't comment on it.
Huh! Finally finished with this! :p
And I'm sorry, but you'll have to help me understand where I can read it. Here or on your blog? And I got confused reading some of your notes at the end of some parts where you said you'll PM some parts or update them on the blog? I'm sorry, but Im really confused regarding that!
And also, if you could help me out with another issue that I'm facing currebtly, if you can that is. I'll be really grateful to you. Actually, I'm new to this forum, so I haven't really seen all the episodes of Arjun. Now I tried looking up for them on YouTube, but almost half the videos in there have been banned cuz StarIndia thinks it can just ban it anywhere it is uploaded! -.- They really pissed me off!
Anyways, I really wanna see all he episodes from the beginning, and wanna download them on my laptop. But I don't know where I'll get all the episodes from since half of them on the net have been deleted or banned from viewing!
So if you could please help me out with it, I'd be really thankful for it!
Please continue soon, and lemme know how can I access your ff in the future parts coming up!
Thank you. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
Can't wait :p
Plzzz update soon :/

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