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suklapanja1

@suklapanja1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1021

hey i am a new reader. i love your ff the fading butterfly. its really good.

the emotions showed by arjun is just too good.

dont you think now riya should be strict?

because of what arjun did with riya in past.

i want to read part 11. please send me

suklapanja1@gmail.com

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qsc12345678

@qsc12345678

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1022

i already commented on your blog. I wasnt sure if i should comment here, but i am just doing it anyway. Awesome part; glad that sky is dead and ariya are together. i am sure riya will be fine just for arjun. scary precap and eagerly waiting for next part.

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princess2507

@princess2507

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1023

hey all ur ten updates were awsome!!!!!

i really liked it...

Keep up ur good work 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The way u have portrait each and every emotions were fab...

Initially in ur ff i never used to like arjun as the way he was treating riya but after knowing the truth i fely pity on him.. 😭 😭 😭

i also liked amit in ur ff ommmggg he was so cute

ur ff is one of my favorite ff

u r are gr8 writer..

once again awsome update

my email id i parikh_rhythm@yahoo.com

m waiting for ur reply

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parvathycv

@parvathycv

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1024

All the 10 parts were simply superb..when u started d story,for me it was like any other fiction which had filmy plot..but the way u revealed the emotional side of each characters especially arjun's was good and dat justified his behaviour towards riya..but don't you think that all those stuffs like putin cameras in every rooms and keeping an eye on riya..all those were too much..well,i agree dat was a writers imagination...and now coming to riya's character..u have introduced riya as an 'apla naari' who s from a small town..but she wears modern dresses..that contrast was little confusin for me..yeah but all those flashback scenes of ariya were mindblowin..other characters-rathod,shree,chotu-their characterization got no confusion at all..rathod's care towards riya was nicley pictured in the story..but sikander's character needed some depth so that the reader cud get a complete picture of riyas sufferings in his place..so this is my review about this wonderful article and hope u take dis positively..my email id :luvroadies@gmail.com

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wondergirl1990

@wondergirl1990

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1025

1st part-hi,i never thought that i would ever hate arjun but u made me do it hats off to u,What the hell was wrong with him? How can he do this?this is not the way to show rights on ur wife ,u showed him too rude towards his innocent wife ,& ya Allah is ladki mein bohot sabr hai & the lines Arjun was hell scared as to which part of the city she would be in. this was the reason he didn't wanted to get married! This was the MAIN reason. He knew his enemies would target his weak points. And he may admit it or not, Riya was, is and will always be his weak point. Suddenly the only colorful thing in his life, the only butterfly was snatched away from him. That day he realized, what he has done. But maybe, maybe it was . . . . Too late.OMG it shows that he loved & care for her so much that is the reason he didnt wanna marry...awesome update

2nd part-the way u PORTRAYED Arjun State Ya Allah aisa lag raha tha main apni aankhon ke saamne dekh rahi hu sab wonderful & Rathore he is the best as a friend & also as the chief he supported Arjun ...Arjun is watching each & every move through cameras from 6 months like a big boss haye haye,acha hai bathroom mein nahi hai cameras...blush blush,,,,,,,,,kya Arjun kam se kam uske black flowery rubber band ko toh baksh do...bechari riya kitna dard ho raha hoga use aise scary night ke baad...& the towel scene haye haye & Arjun is speechless pata nahi agar waha hota to kya karta...HER CHIRPY SONG IS GONE! & he felt bad...Alhamdullilah Amit came & our dimple doll smiled...Arjun aisi biwi kaha milegi tumhe itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi she is preparing food for him & Prince took 1 hour to bath ya Allah ladkiyon ko harane ki race mein...Arjun in pyjamas hmmm...rathore is so sweet he offered him his favourite beverage & he choked & the situation reminded him of riya ...then piya basanti song while ironing ..riya drugged arjun is asking to give him one chance poor riya cant even reply i wanna kill sikander...

3rd part-the call 59 seconds long OMG sikander is too smart, sameer is angry on arjun for riya ...he is so sweet & care for riya so much afterall she is like a sister to rathore...To hell with his anger, I need to see he is alright!"lines showed she loves him too much...riya took food for arjun & rathore is so cute,also shree & chotu heir mouths were stuffed they love food...awww Arjun didnt scolded her that day...how can arjun think that his riya said something bad about him to Amit he is such a fool...Bechari Riya arjun hurts her,balcony mein band kar diya use,bina kuch soche samjhe koi bhi natije par pahuch jata hai,ab toh arjun ko aur tadapna chahiye sameer & riya use itne asaani maaf nahi karna hai...

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1026

i haven't read the chapter 11 but i know that it will be also be similar to all those wonderful updates you wrote before... i really love your work... i can't wait to read the chapter11... and when i read it, i will definitely come here to comment! i really promise...

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wondergirl1990

@wondergirl1990

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1027

4th part-kya baat hai Arjun called Riya in his dream and she called him... true love can emerge victorious over any hurdle!

'The person we all are trying to find is My WIFE...kam se kam arjun ko ehsaas to hua.

Sikander made Hemant to buy 196 dresses...aur hemant ki halat OMG kya interrogate kiya hai hemant ko hamare dono akdu dashing acps ne ...atlast he came for riya who is shivering and he changed her clothes & he stared at her ...blush,blush

5th part-Vidyut Jamwal as "SIKANDAR"he is perfect for this role...arjun hugged riya,so sweet,arjun supported her and made her drink water,he is jealous of the glass also He wanted to take it away and break it! The way she was trying to lick it!! DAMN! But then he thought- What am I thinking!?ha ha ha...etf team they are so good ...The cotton joy park's maze...Arjun entered and without wasting time he started going here and there in the lines of the maze and started searching her he is mad in love with her...

6th part-arjun dnt want to hurt riya bt did it...!!!!!bcoz he never loved Roshni but she was killed by sikander bcoz of him & he loved Riya & dont wanna loose her..roshni sacrifice...she loves arjun omg..arjun pain no words...!!!aww rathore so sweet he supported Arjun..Rathore is right he should not give up. He should fight for his loved ones espeially for a wife like riya who loves him so much...riya is scared of Arjun, I understand why Arjun was behaving like this with Riya. nice update

7th part-ya Allah Arjun with team etf actually sank so many boats, that wasnt something i had expected

aur sikander, he cheated and he's taking Riya away Arjun couldnt control himself, he lost control and kissed her so lovingly blush...hmmm aye haye yeh hai tarika apne rights batane ka wife ko ...The kisses were so passionate , i'm still blushing thinking of them...ha ha ha ha...when will Arjun save our dimple princess

8th part-she actually thinks she's a bad kisser and worst that she's nothing compared to Arjun,she prepared food for him and even gathered the courage to go to his office and give it to him.amit is so cute very funny...Arjun's concern about her going alone he so caring...concern fr ria safety!finally they caught Sikander...great

9th part-Arjun explaining his plan to Sikander hw he tricked him...& sik said that riya now is his baby ...i wanna break all his bones...i can imagine Arjun's pain ...Arjun nd pilot ws funny...lol...Shree's comment on Sikki ws nice bilkul perfect tha main bhi aise hi karti...arjuns father he is really very good...Ajun ke dialogs ya Allah,that Sik should suffer as much as and even more than our ASR & dimple doll...

10 part-the chase for Sky & the airport part was superb ...For the first time Arjun expressed to Ria...the way he was getting close to her OMG no words to express very very bold...he shouldnt have done this again why he is forcing on her...poor riya she is scared ab arjun aisi karega to woh aise hi react karegi na...amit is so cute funny very funny..after 18days staying away from Ria, yet this Akdu din't go to pick her up...she waited 4 hours ..Aww that hurts..that was really sick of Arjun...Ria still was so sweet to him..how much patience she has...& he said sorry hichkichakar haye haye...

ab toh main 11 part padh sakti hu na when u will pm me reply plz...Arshi Sayyed...

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wondergirl1990

@wondergirl1990

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1028

my email id is skaremun_123@yahoo.com...Arshi Sayyed.

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playagame

@playagame

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1029

OK i m a new comer in this forum n reading all the FF from the ''forum gallery", i started reading dis story 4m dis morning only...frankly speaking wen i 1st read the title FADING BUTTERFLY i was like different title...but wen i started reading it i was lost in Ariya dreamland..at first i think hw can u do dis..mere fav. character arjun ko itna bura bna diya..hw rudely he is behaving wid his wife n dat chapter in arjun focefuly hurt riya..i was like arjun u ruin everything but then u justify his character really very well ..n Den riya's kidnap.. arjun is hell worried 4 her n me too..i hate dis sikander...but riya n arjun dere relationship is growing day by day.. n dere romantic flashbacks i just loved it. I read the first 4-5 chapters all in a go but have 2 take a break because i have 2 study 2 as my xams is approachng too next week..but literaly i c'nt concerntrate because my mindis in story..so with all courage i asked my mom can i take a day break 4m studies..n after glaring n taunting me she agreed..n den i m back..i read it til ch.10 it was super duper awesume..bt on ch11 i was like how do u do it wid me..but u r right..after so much efforts u worth a big big coments..so i m doing dis 4u only..mene itna long coment kabhi nhi kiya..plz add me 2..i m eagerllly waiting 4it..hope u like my coment n consider my request..my email id is priyankajoshi190192@live.co.uk

Edited by playagame - 12 years ago