Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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Manisha.

@Manisha.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Hi NB

I am upset u dint reply to my Pm which was meant to be a brief comment on ur writing..

It's refreshing to read your FF which has slightly different take on Arnav and Khushi's personality and relationship. This has helped in bringing a freshness to the story with the characters still being the same.

The story also seems realistic with adequate importance given to their professional lives as well...

Look forward to the Diwali update. Will we get to see some fireworks????

The Arnav and Khushi in your story come across reasonably level headed and mature so I don't expect an impulsive jaadu hai Nasha hai moment, but grace us with the beginning of something special...

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Superb update just loved it :)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: Manisha.
Hi NB

I am upset u dint reply to my Pm which was meant to be a brief comment on ur writing..

It's refreshing to read your FF which has slightly different take on Arnav and Khushi's personality and relationship. This has helped in bringing a freshness to the story with the characters still being the same.

The story also seems realistic with adequate importance given to their professional lives as well...

Look forward to the Diwali update. Will we get to see some fireworks????

The Arnav and Khushi in your story come across reasonably level headed and mature so I don't expect an impulsive jaadu hai Nasha hai moment, but grace us with the beginning of something special...

Hey Manisha, thanks for your lovely PM. The last 2 days have been extremely hectic, with the baby. So i haven't had the time to reply to any of the PMs I have received.

I was hoping top do it today. Hope you are well.

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Chapter#1

I have been the first girl in my family after 50 long years, so my entire family was overjoyed at the prospect of seeing a girl grow up amongst them. The purpose of sharing this nitty bitty bit from my family is that I can understand Khushi's want for independence. Sometimes, the molly-coddling becomes too much.

Delhi is harsh, especially so to the naive and the innocent. Despite being called dillwalon ki dilli, this place is fast becoming a hub for the heartless and the cruel. I look forward to see how Delhi will treat Khushi.

I could understand Khushi's views about pre-marital sex. Not agree with them, but understand them. I already like your Payal. She is a strong independent woman with her own views, and I enjoy that. I respected the fact that Khushi did not force her views on Payal.

I like this story. Looking forward to more. :)

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

read it in a one go...ahh..loved it..luking forward to it...do add me in ur pm list...

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

read it in a one go...ahh...loved it...luking forward to ir...do add me in ur pm list

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Brilliant update!!

NK & Khushi getting along well & will be going to another date soon..

Arnav felt disappointed but still let it go because he thinks NK is a nice guy & he himself has dropped that idea in his head due to his own reasons & well some logical reason at that.. But Logics & Love don't really get along well, do they now??😛

Khushi confirmed her dinner date with NK the night she saw Arnav with another woman?? Do I smell jealousy there??

I'm loving this pace with which their emotions are hiding & coming into light..😊

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

That was an amazing chapter !!!!!

The coffee date was too cute and very well written !!!!
Really liking Nk's character !!!!

Hmm so Arnav was planning in asking khushi out !! But he lets it go cx nk already likes her !!! Really liked the whole conversation between the three guys !!!!
Soo khushi is going with Payal to raizada house at Diwali !!! Can't wait to read more !!!
The way you have written about each character and are writing the story is awesome !!!! Thnxx for the pm !!