Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 2Lavanya and Arnav. What I liked was Arnav's amazingness. The making out scene was nice. I really liked how Lavanya tried to make conversation, but failed miserably. I could relate to her emptiness.

I can already see where the relationship is headed. I wish all the best to Lavanya.

I liked the Arnav POV scene on the balcony. It was well written, showing me his mentality in a crisp way I admire.

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 3

And they meet! :D

YAY

-Vee

Oh and I saw what you did there 😆 Your friends are lucky to have a place in a story this good. :)

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 4That song happens to my be one of my absolute favourites. ❤️

coming to the update... I liked it. It could have been all angsty and all, but then... it was kind of hilarious.

Jalebi ❤️

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

nkay just easy going...arnav smoking???now how will all change in Diwali???

wanted to ssay thks for expel link sins

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312787

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

brilliant update!!

Arnav's reaction to nk and khushi's date was interesting and so was khushi's to Arnav's date. I am eagerly waiting to read what happens at the diwali party...

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Awesome update

loved it

They need to communicate than harbouring emotions in their mind

Thx for the PM

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#807

loved the update... so Diwali party coming up... i wonder if the red saree will be there, with the seducing music 😉

Edited by valeyrie - 12 years ago

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Dear Readers,

Wish you a happy Pongal / Lori / Sankranthi to those celebrating these festivals. I'm in carb-heaven today, so an update is unlikely.

Regards
NB

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 5

I love how instead of his eyes, Khushi likes his scar. I also like the snappiness of your writing style. Not too flowery and not too medicinal. Just right.

Aahh, fun Khushi is it? I like your Gitu! My father has a huge thing for wine and drinks himself. He even collects those little miniature thingies, which look really pretty.

I can already see the sparks flying. "Cinderalla?" 😃

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 5

I read chapter five. Didn't look like Arnav was partying for Khushi. Maybe its just me, but how on earth can you throw a party for somebody you just met? Brilliant update, I love connect between the brothers and between Akash and Payal

Chapter 6

I like how they are slowly falling in love. In love with Arnav and his views. Good job on that, Basanti ji, I have fallen in love with your Arnav. 😊

I like bikes too 😃