Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 6

Nice cliff-hanger!
Now please don't disappear on a longish break and update sooon 😃

Originally posted by: star303

Hello!! The excerpt is very well written. So there is already a past in khushi's life and whom does it involve remains to be seen. Very well described scenes right from the doctor's starched sari, black framed glasses to khushi's clothes and nervousness. Ohh khushi has come for abortion sigh...
Can't wait to read how you take it further. One question are you going to move the ff to a blog??? If so please allow me to read it.

Thanks for your comment.

Im just an amateur writer, writing for fun. Ill be posting in IF. blogs are too much work.

sounds interesting.

very nice start cont soon dear me already waiting

I liked the excerpt. Very mysterious and all. Looking forward to reading further. :)

Also, buddy request on the way.

Great start, Naach_Basanti! Abortion has always been a topic of interest for me so I'm looking forward to the story! I've never really read fan fictions or had a proper chance to experience good writers, but after reading your other posts around the forum.. I'm more than willing to give this a go! I know this will be a wonderful story!

Hope you will accept my request :)

OMG!! Finally u have started an FF... i so looking forward to it...😃

Originally posted by: nadaan_parindey

Great start, Naach_Basanti! Abortion has always been a topic of interest for me so I'm looking forward to the story! I've never really read fan fictions or had a proper chance to experience good writers, but after reading your other posts around the forum.. I'm more than willing to give this a go! I know this will be a wonderful story!

Hope you will accept my request :)

Thanks. I hope I'd be able to keep up to your expectations.

This looks promising. I like how you started it from the doctor's perspective. It built up the mystery even more. Khushi is getting an abortion 😭