Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Basanti ji. What a start. Buddy request is on the way!

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Direwolves

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Posted: 12 years ago

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i really love the prologue...
continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Wow!

Basantiji this is so good. Firstly, whattay title. Meeraji 👍🏼

This doesn't seem like your first time at all. There was such a simple flow in even this small excerpt it's amazing how you do that!

Can't wait to read more. And abortion? :O Allah Miyan what's wrong wif da Khushiz m panik! :O

@Disclaimer 👍🏼

Update soon!

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689471

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Posted: 12 years ago

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My curiosity is peaked NB
Who is the baby's daddy?
Is Khushi an independent girl?
Why is he having an abortion?
I can't wait to read more but I have a feeling the daddy does not want the baby or that he does not know she is pregnant. Based on his past reaction in regards to fathering a child with her she must have taken this step or is she a girl who does not want a baby to mess up her future plans. Sorry NB I am getting carried away😆
I love the concept😃

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Olive_Rose
My curiosity is peaked NB
Who is the baby's daddy?
Is Khushi an independent girl?
Why is he having an abortion?
I can't wait to read more but I have a feeling the daddy does not want the baby or that he does not know she is pregnant. Based on his past reaction in regards to fathering a child with her she must have taken this step or is she a girl who does not want a baby to mess up her future plans. Sorry NB I am getting carried away😆
I love the concept😃

Thanks T.

I love it when people guess, have been in the same boat while reading many FFs in the past.

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star303

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hello!! The excerpt is very well written. So there is already a past in khushi's life and whom does it involve remains to be seen. Very well described scenes right from the doctor's starched sari, black framed glasses to khushi's clothes and nervousness. Ohh khushi has come for abortion sigh...
Can't wait to read how you take it further. One question are you going to move the ff to a blog??? If so please allow me to read it.

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JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

You start with a bang!

Doctors, new software, you are upto date on technology! 👏

And then, comes the question.

Story behind abortion... Now I'm hooked!

Thank you NB Ji!

I'll wait to read more. 😃

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sanja_here

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Thats a catchy excerpt...waiting to read more...do pm me...

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McNinja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

NB, abortion? You just got me, Hook, sink and liner.

Loved the start and looking forward to seeing how you unfold the plot and characters. Please let khushi be a bit more independent and worldy.

Congrats on the new FF, continue soon!

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-SAM1445-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

@NB, got the link of this FF from the dori in ipk forum,

now this was a real dhamakedar start,hope u give us quick n longgg updates...

Looking forward to the story- cheers to new beginings...

Edited by nottie - 12 years ago

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