Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 4

Loved the excerpt!!

Lovely Start...!!

Quite a catchy prologue NB! Looking forward to reading the story :)

Originally posted by: farheen75

Superb start but why Khushi has to be the suffering one and I hope Arnav is not a cad in this one... Other than absolutely loved it and can't wait to read more.

One small request plz don't make us beg for an update.

I hope to update regularly once a day or two. Thanks for your comment.

Originally posted by: Oyster

I can tell you that this is going to be awesome! Most likely the first FF that I'll read till its last word..!

Hope I'd be able to keep up to your expectations.

Very well written Excerpt...though i liked the concept it is a Painful one...Hope khushi gets out of this pain soon...looking forward to this ff

Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Ok ...now this is interesting...abortions are so not good...what led the poor girl to such a decision...???

Thanks for starting a new FF in the midst of all the negativity going around...it felt sooo refreshing to read something new...its because of all you talented FF writers that i keep coming back for more and more and more...

All the best for the new venture...may you have many many many threads...just update regularly😉

I had this idea for a while and even wrote a couple of chapters the week before last. When the closure of the show was announced last week, I made up my mind to scratch this for good. But then my IF friends and my hubby encouraged me to write it. So here I'm.

I love the excerpt!!
sooo intriguing!!
please continue
cant wait to.read it!
😃

Originally posted by: farheen75

Superb start but why Khushi has to be the suffering one and I hope Arnav is not a cad in this one... Other than absolutely loved it and can't wait to read more.

One small request plz don't make us beg for an update.

I don't wish to jump down your throat but what would be the problem woth Arnav being a cad or Khushi being the one suffering? This is the author's first FF, and I think it is highly discouraging when she comes across posts like "hope Arnav is not a cad"

She may have a fixed storyline and character sketch in her head. Read, pass criticism, judge the characters based on your personal experience... (I know I love it when readers do that) but I think it is wrong to just barge in and say "I want a nice Arnav and a nice Khushi"

Sorry if this is rude

-V

Sounds really interesting, please PM me :D