Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: V323



I don't wish to jump down your throat but what would be the problem woth Arnav being a cad or Khushi being the one suffering? This is the author's first FF, and I think it is highly discouraging when she comes across posts like "hope Arnav is not a cad"

She may have a fixed storyline and character sketch in her head. Read, pass criticism, judge the characters based on your personal experience... (I know I love it when readers do that) but I think it is wrong to just barge in and say "I want a nice Arnav and a nice Khushi"

Sorry if this is rude

-V



This is fanfiction darling, which means the readers already have a fixed notion of how they want Arnav and Khushi to be. It's a flaw of fanfiction itself.

You can't tell a reader what to think no matter how lame you think the response is. Or that they should think differently.

NBji sorry for this aapko patha hai na how much RC loves a debate. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Great start...would love to know how this is going to go. Loved the realistic part of a doctor trying to get everything done so that she could finish up. Have come across quite a few doctors like this. Buddy request up.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

K,

I had to say this, I am glad you are writing and hope you find it an enriching experience. I discovered fan fictions late in life and did not think I had it in me to be creative like the people on this forum, some barely in their teens. Once I started it felt good and I am so happy you are getting to feel the similar rush and hopefully, we will have an interesting and intriguing story on our hand (you have promised and I am sure you will deliver).

I am so looking forward to this, thank you for starting this and making us a part of the journey.

-K

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
basanti ji..
wohho...finally your new FF..
was waiting for it since the time i heard it from you...
i like the title...
and the excerpt also..
i would love to know more as to why she wants to get aborted...and who's the father of the kid and stuff like that..
so please continue writing...
thanks for the PM...and update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Show just shut down & u start the 1st chapter with KKG wanting an abortion.

WHOA! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Hey NB,
Congratulations on the new FF.
Am looking forward to reading more after such a dramatic start.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
basanti

i resed and its too late to resuscitate the res. so commenting afresh...

first thank you for the dedication - i am flattered and touched, to say the least. I am looking fwd to this FF and the prologue is explosive. What a topic ender. Let the fun begin with our debate on moral, ethical and social dilemmas.

All the very best to you in your maiden ARHI FF, although the work is very professional to begin with. my hugs to you!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
oops..abortion...
waiting fr next update
add me..
i had send u a frnd req..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Hey!
I just came across this new FF and I am really left wanting to read further ... 😃
A few thoughts are going through my mind ... Was Khushi raped ... Did she have a boyfriend who maybe didn't want the baby/know about the baby .. Maybe due to fears of facing being disowned, she is forced to have an abortion ... Perhaps she isn't ready to have a child ...
After reading the prologue, I cannot wait to see what happens ... Who is the father ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! 😲

Brilliant start! If this is any judge of your writing skills then I would say we are in for a treat!

Cannot wait to see how Khushi ended up here/what happens next!

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