D3 ff: SWEET SECRETS-COULD DEY LEAD TO HAPPY END? - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY GUYS!!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR! HAVE A WONDERFUL YEAR!!1 AND HERE IS CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 5
Vicky thinks are yaar pakde gaye. Ab toh saara secret bahar aa jayega. Vicky goes behind reyam and sees,
'A Mouse"
(whatchya thnking voh kria hogi?itni jaldi raaz nhi kholungi)
vicky; ye???????
Rey; toh tujhe kya laga? suspiciously luking at him.
Vicky; voh voh voh... mujhe toh kuch nhi.
Vicky was sweating bullets.. seeing dis reyam start laughing! kria uses dis as a distraction and goes out.
Scene shift to boys locker room:
Ricky enter...
Nilesh; aaj toh in weaklings ki aisi ki taisi.
Vicky had a constipated look
Nil: are yaar teri uss verbal diarr...sees rey's glare...neha toh khel hi nhi rahi hai
v; are yaar maine kal raat kuvh jyaada hi kha liya tha.
rey & nil: chi vicky...
now basketball match
imagine the match weakling vs dazzling in d3 till1st half even the romance.
2nd half starts-
nil decides to play rash and ends up hitting amar. Amar falls and sprains his ankle. Rinni gets worried bt cant show it. the weakling call a tym out..nw all d boys get worried as dey dint hv a n extra player. Kria luks at sharon who nods in approval.
kria starts jumping in joy.All luk at her lyk she is crazy.
she quickly wishpers;' i'll play'
svayum; hv u ever played b4?
k: ya ofcourse
ABS luk at her worried as nil and ali wer playing rash bt kria assures dem. dey say ok. Kria and changes.
Viron are eager to see kria play after a long tym. REY SHOCKED TO SEE HER PLAY.
NIL: HEY ITS CHEATING. SHE CANT PLAY. SHE IS A GIRL.
KRIA: THNK U CAPTAIN OBVIOUS I'M A GAL. AND ACCORDINGLY THE MATCH WEAKLINGS VS DAZZLINGS HAI AND MAIN EK WEAKLING HUN SO I CN PLAY. MR WATEVER RAPPING DAZZLER.
ALI: ITS OK. BT V VONT TREAT U DIFFERENT.
THE GAME STARTS,
NIL IS DRIBBLING D BALL,(NILESH IS SUPERB DRIBBLER & EVEN EY CANT TACKLE HIS BALL) AND IS MOVING 2WARDS THEIR BASKET. WEN HE IS BLOCKED BY KRIA. HE SMIRKS AND IS ABOUT TO DODGE HER WEN HE REALIZES DAT SHE IS GONE AND ALSO D BALL IS GONE.
EVERY1 IS IN SHOCK, (EXCEPT VIRON) & KRIA SHOOTS A 3-POINTER..
WEAKLINGS=5
DAZZLINGS=4(IN MY STORY)
NW REY HAD D BALL, KRIA GOES TO SNATCH D BALL, REY BEING D MAJNU GIVES HER D BALL, BT WHILE PASSING HIM SHE FALLS AS HER OPEN SHOELACE IS TRAPPED UNDR REY'S SHOE. REY TRIES CATCHING HER BT ENDS UP LOOSING HIS BALANCE AND ENDS UP FALLING ON HER.THEY SHARE A EYELOCK [ BG TUNE: MERE BINA]
V; R U GUYS OK?
DIS BREAKS DEIR EYELOCK. AND SEE DAT KRIAS ELBOW IS BLEEDING BADLY. ALL THE BOYS EXPECT A BIG BREAKDOWN AND DRAMA BT 2 DEIR SURPRISE SHE GETS UP GOES OVER TO D SIDE AND CLEANS HER WOUND BY WATER. TURNS 2WARDS DEM; LETS CONTINUE
EVERY JAW DROPS , KRIA STARTS LAUGHING AT DEIR FACES AND SAYS; DID U EXPECT A BREAKDOWN
SV: NO JST SURPRISED 2 C A GAL NT CRY WEN SHE IS HURT
KRIA MUMBLES I WAS HURT A LOT DIS IS NTHG COMPARED 2 IT.
REY IS ABT 2 ASK HER WAT SHE MEANT BT DEN D BELL RINGS INDICATING END OF DEIR LUNCH AND SPORTS PERIOD.
ALL RETURN TO CLASS 4 ENGLISH WER DEY WER DOING ROMEO-JULIET 2DAY. MAM DECIDES 2 CAST DEM AND SHE PUTS SHARON AS JULIET AND SVAYUM AS ROMEO. KRICKY R TRYING 2 CONTROL DEIR LAUGHTER & SHARON GLARED AT DEM.
ALL D ODER ROLES WER DISTRIBUTED AMONG ALL. DEY WER PLAYING DEIR ROLES. IT WAS FUN. AFTER SCHOOL GOT OVER, ALL WENT AND D BUS DAZED EXCEPT 2 MINDS.
REY& KRIA THOUGHTS;' Y DID I FEEL TOSE 100 VOLT CURRENT WEN I TOUCHED HER/HIM? Y WAS I SO MESMORIZED BY HIS/HER EYES?'
REY'S THOTS;" I THNK SVAYUM WAS RITE. I'M FALLING 4 KRIA. MY BAATCUTTER' AND SMILES.
KRIA'S THOTS:" SO SHERRY WAS RITE I'M FALLING 4 REY. OMG I'M FALLING 4 LINECUTTER. DAMN"
SHE SMILES UNKNOWINGLY.
AND SUDDENLY HEAR PEHLA NASHA WHICH WAS BEING PLAYED NY NEHA AND VISHAKA. VISH AND KRIA EXCHANGED SEATS SO KRIA WAS SITTING EXACTLY BEHING REY.
BTH TOOK DIS SONG AS A SIGN 4M UNIVERSJI AND CONFIRMED DEIR THOTS!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR GUS!! WATCHYA THNKING OF D CHAPTER?😊 DO COMMENT
Edited by rutsi_kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
superb update... Thanx for d pm... HAPPY NEWYEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago
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happy nw yr to u too
thnks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update..
thnx for pm...
happy new year.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey happy new year n grt update...cnt asap...thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Hey people this is a short update and dont worry i'll update later today !!!
Chapter 6
In the evneing at Raipraksh mansion, Krisha were watching P.S.I love you. It was Sharon's choice. Kria was trying her best not to gag bt cudnt control. Sharon saw this and got angry on her and threw ice cream at her. This turned to a full on icecream fight.
Soon their movie room was covered in ice cream along wid dem. just den smriti entered d room
Sm: y do u 2 luk lyk snow womans but chocolate flavoured? And wt is dis mess dat u hv made of d room???
Sha: vohh mom v had a ice cream fight
Sm: 17 saal ki ho gayi par bachpana nhi gaya hey bhagwan!!!jao fresh hokar kapde badal le ghar ke bahar niklo. Eight se pehle ghar mat ana .
Both have a shower and meet outside.
Sharon: shona tumne ye specs aur ye fake hair extensions aur ue ajeeb se kapde kyu pehne hai???
Kria: are koi mujhe pehchan na le na iss liye.
Sh: tumhe mere saath dikhne main koi problem hai kya?
K: nhi but tumhaare itne frnds maise kisi e dekh liya to gadbad ho jayegi.
S: ok lets go!!
They go off to the mall & unfortunately reyam and vicky also come there. As soon as they stop kria rushes into the candy store and sharon follows slowly. Reyam see sharon entering a candy store and get curious so dey follow her. Vicky calls sharon to tell her bt both krisha left deir phones at home.
Svayum hides and ricky go near sharon
R: hey shar!!
Sh: hu... H h h hi rey!
R: watchya doing inside a candy store?
Just den kria cums der luks at sharon
K: mammaine apke cousins ke liye sweets le li hai aur kuch lena hai?
S: nhi wateves
And turns to rey : main iss loye yaha ayi thi.. Bye jaldi ghar nhi gayi to mumma maar dalegi c h bye!!!
R: bye
Krisha leave and go to watch a movie dey watch their movie and go back home. They sit in sharon's room till late eating d candies and teasing each other abt deir mr majnu and mr linecutter. They have a n early dinner and go 2 sleep early!!!!! Wat an exciting day dey had!!

Guys comment !!!!!!!! How u lykin it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
one word 4 ure ff AMAZING...😃😃


REALLY A BRILLIANT WORK GAL LUVD IT!! 👏👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous and great it is... update res of the chapter soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 7
The next morning all of them were greeted by a surprise! All of the
junior college students were called in the atrium.
Rdx: hey guys lstn v r arrangin a cultural fest for a day u can also call it as a art mela.
Nw those who want to volunteer for helping can help!! Bt v have selected sum students
spclly who r always ready 4 such work: the weaklings and the dazzlings dance teams.
Well plz cum in my cabin along wid the school captain. And volunteers sign up ur
names on the notice board.
In RDX's cabin:
Rdx: guys (gang) the school captain specially requested 4 u as he wants u
2 prepare a dance routine as an welcome act 4 d cheif guest. I also knw abt
ur divide bt once 4 d sake of d school's name plz cud u make one performance???
Reyam luk at each other and nod: ok sir!
Rdx: thats gr8 guys! I knw its on short notice so u get 2day's remaining day and
2morrow's full day off jst 4 practice and boys wud u plz go 2 skyhigh cafe and give
them this order list today itself. Ya and go together as that eud create a good impression
on the owner but only one of u speak!
Boys: ok sir!!
Rdx: U r dismissed go prepare !
Alll in rh-
Sharon: tumne haan laise bola hum in cheap logon ke saath dance kaise karenge??
Kr: hum bhi aap ke saath dance karne ke liye mare nhi jaa rahe!
Rey: guys luk hum jaante hai ki hum maise koi bhi group ek doosre ke saath
nhi dance karna chahta bt hum log apne skul ke liye ek din toh adjust kar sakte hai na???
All: ok!
Rey: gr8 nw guys lets plan 4 d dance. Bt kaunse song pe kare?
Sh: guys agar hum log forever young pe kare and fir boys ake i like pe hip hop karo and
den all of us salsa on bailamo end kare?
Sv: gr8 idea!
Neha: oi majnu gr8 idea. Wat gr8 idea? Neha nt knwing d song how neha singing it?
Rey: neha singung karna jaroori nhi hai.. Ok???
Gang; ok.
Rey: v'll start d practice 2morrow!! And boys lets go 2 the cafe.
The boys leave and krisha follow the boys to the cafe. They wait till the boys talk to the
manager and den tip the waiter into adding vodka into their drinks! Nw imagine
the whole humka peeni hai seen!!
Krisha cudnt wait to c the whole seen as their mom called dem home saying she has a
surprise 4 dem.
Dey go home!! As soon as they go home they see preeti and proya waiting 4 dem.
Ks: badi ma. Kria goes and hugs pretti and sharon goes and hugs priya.
K:Aap log yahan kyz kar rahe ho??
Preeti: voh hum tumhaari mom ko sleepover ke liye le jaane aaye hai.
Sh: sleepover?????
Priya: hum bhi sleepover kar sakte hai naki sirf tumhare age ke log.
K: ok le jao mom ko
Sh: aur mom humlog rehlenge ek din aapke bager bye!!
Krisha push all of them outside and they have dinner and go 2 sleep excited
4 the outcome of their trick.

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