D3 ff: SWEET SECRETS-COULD DEY LEAD TO HAPPY END? - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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SORRY PEOPLE FOR THE LATE UPDATE. HERE YOU GO HOPE TOU LIKE IT.
CHAPTER 3
V1: Stupid Kria, idiot, unki aakhonn kya tujhe aab ddlj dikh rahi thi?
V2:Nahi uski aakhon main doob jaane ka mann karta hai, those hazel brown orbs kisi nadho ki tarah
K: Bas karo shut up! Btw kon ho tum dono?
V1: Dimaag
V2: Dil
K: Ok!!! Sadiyoon puraani fight whatever. Guys mujhe aur bhi kam so ye debate later...
(p.S. This does not happen in real lyf)
Neha: kria!kria!kria!!
Bharat:lagta hai ye so gayi
Amar: aakhen thuli lakh tal?
Vishaka: guys shut up
Svayum: lagta hai ki ye dreamland main chali gayi.
Neha: jaise u going 2 sharonworld.
Bharat: iska(pointing 2wards svayum) main samjha bt kria kiski dreamland main hai????
A,N,B&V:???????????????????????
Svayum in mind ' hope ki rey ke khayalo main ho!
Galti se svayum stumbles on kria getting her out of her dreamland & checks her tym.
K: guys hume late ho raha hai aur tum log space mai zoninv kar rahe ho
Bharat: zoni.. Galli di??
Amar: nhi gaali nhi
Svayum: guys lets go

Chemistry lab:

_____|rini simi|___|bharat svayum|____|kria vishaka|
____________________________TABLE_________________________
|amar neha|___|vicky nil|________|sharon rey|_____

Mam: students today v r doing salt identification. So come here and take The salt and start identifying it. Be careful eid d chemicals and burners.

Vish, svayum, shar, nil, amar& rini go 2 get d salt.
Here, neha turns 2wards kria and catches vicky's glaze. LLHH (Bg tune: jabse tere naina)
Kria reads the apparatus and goes to take HCl. ( opp tables share chemicals)
Rey at d same tym goes 2 take d same bottle. He holds d bottle bt on her hand ( lyk d paint brush scene). Both of dem recieve a 1000 volt current.
Vishaka cums back and dey start d experiment. Kria ws bsy thmking wat happend jst nw 2 notice wat she ws doing. She pors d conc HCl on her hand instead of d testtube and screams in agony. Every1 luks at her. Her finger skin is burnt badly wich is bleeding. Kria is trying her best nt 2 scream cuz d acid is burning her wound. Sharon is abt 2 cry seeing her condition so vicky cums and gives her handd a squeeze. Dis is seen by reyam bt dey grow suspicious bt let it pass as d priority ws kria nw.
Here vishaka ws trying 2 calm down kria who ws nt letting anybody touch her hand.
( mam is gone 2 d princi's cabin)
Svayum tajes kria's hand as he is taller dan her and puts it under d tap and starts scolding her.
Svayum: kria pagal hai kya? Kiske baare main soch rahi thi????
Kria: voh main aapne sister ke best friend ke baare main soch rahi thi.
She sees viron smirking and rey luking sad.
Kria: mera matlab hai ki vih aaj maa ghar pe nhi hai na kam se pune gayi hai issliye i hv 2 go 2 dat idiotic best friends house.
Svayum: okkk
He bandages her hand and tells her 2 stand aside. Tells bharat to work wid vishaka. Every1 gets busy wid d experiment except viron and reyam who wer worried abt kria.
The bell rings every1 is packing bt amar, bharat& vicky nil rush 2 d door in a hurry 2 reach d baskettball court. They start fighting. Wen sum1 says
V: i hv a suggestion 2 stop ur fight.

Do comment and lyk!!!!!! 😊
Edited by rutsi_kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awsum update... Thanx for d pm... Cont next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Awesome update 😊
Kria in reyland n pors the HCL on her hand
Reyam are getting suspicious
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awesome updte...

Kria thinkin abt rey

Reyam thinkin abt vicky concern to kria...

Loved it thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thinkin about sister's best friend
wow
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
HEY PEOPLE HERE IS THE NEXT UPDATE
Chapter 4
Random guy dev: u guys should have a basketball match. 'Weaklings vs Dazzlings'
Vicky: Sure
Svayum: Nahi
Nilesh: Kyu haarne se dar gaye???
Bharat: Nhi bilkul bhi nhi
Amar:Hum ye challenge actept kalte hai
Rey: Challenge accepted

Kria mumbles: Aap toh ye challenge accept karoge na. Aapko toh mauka hi chahiye weaklings ko nicha dikhane ka.
Rey heard this and was very hurt cuz he thot he had a very low and bad image in kria's mind. Sharon sees this. And secretly and quietly pulls kria in f.e.
Sharon: Tumhne abhi jo kaha tumhe pata bhi hai tumne kya kaha. Tum maafi mangogi rey se
Kria: nop nhi maangungi
Sharon: tumhe andaza bhi hai ki tumhe rey ko kitna hurt kiya hai?
Kria: Kyu unko meri baaton ka asar kyu pada????
Sharon: Forget it... Kria btw tumhara haat kaisa hai?
Kria: Its fyn dont worry!
Sharon:Tum soch kiske baare me rhi thi batana jara???
Reyam and vicky were passing f.e. and heard voices coming 4m f.e. Kria heard them entering and quickly hid jst as the boys entered.
Rey: Sharon, tum kise baat kar rahi thi?
Sharon: Voh voh main na phone haan phone pe baat kar rahi. Btw tum iss looser ke saath kya kar rahe ho?
Rey: Hum log locker room main jaa rahe the basketball match ke liya change kaarne ke liye and v heard voices 4m f.e.
Svayum: hum ek saath jaa rahe the kyuki ye ek friendly match hai
Vicky: Ye rey ka suggestion tha.
Vicky heard kria's comment in the lab and was trying to be the cupid along with sharon in mission kriyaansh.
Sharon:Bye guys see u l8!
Kria thnkng kamini sharon mujhe akela chod ke chali gayi na ye yaha. Haye!!!!
Svayum: Sharon ne kaha ki voh phone pe baat kar rahi thi
Rey: Par uske haath main phone hi nhi tha
Kria in mind ' hey universjii bachalo. Sharon ne kis musibat main atka diya'
Vicky:Khud se baat kar rahi hogi sharon aur use chupane keiye bol diya hoga jhut. U knw na
'girls = wierd'.
Rey : Ye ho sakta hai' mind main jst lyk my baat cutter. And goes in 2 kriaworld.
Svayum: Haan. He is also thinking about kria ( nt in dat way)
Suddenly em box gir jaata hai. Reyam go near it 2 see suddenly box kaise gira and vicky worried ki inhe patana chale kria ke baare main.
Rey moves d box and sees
Reyam: ye???????

Haha guys cliffhanger???? Guess unhe pata chalega ki nhi???? Is it kria jise reyam dekhye hai??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
unres

superb...👏
uss box mai kya tha😕
kria hurted rey😭
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update.

Sharon kriya convo is cute.

chotu update tha nxt time lamba wala dena.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey people!!! I'm so sorry i wont be uploading till 2nd jan cuz i have my exams. Merry christmas in advance. And thank you for all the lovely comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey rutu u vry well no ki im nt a kr fan bt still i read ur ff n belive me i loved all ur pArts good wrk...pat ur back ...update soon im.waiting n pm me...

Maitreyi
Edited by Veereyi - 12 years ago

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