D3 ff: SWEET SECRETS-COULD DEY LEAD TO HAPPY END?

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

GUYS HEY THIS IS MY FIRST EVER FF HOPE I GET A GUD RESPONSE PLZ LYK IF U LYK IT OR IF U DONT LYK IT U CAN CRITICIZE ME BY COMMENTING THANK YOU!!
SWEET DREAMS... Could they lead to a happy ever after?
CHARACTER SKETCH

Kria Ghai (a.k.a. Kria Raiprakash)
A fun loving bubbly gal very friendly lovely and kind. Superb dancer and awesome bb player(secret). Sharon' twin only vicky knws abt dis. Hides her relation wid sharon so a to prevent sharon's rep. In love wid rey bt doesn't knw abt it herself. Svayum is her best frnd. Leader of team weaklings. Is planning on telling svayum abt krisha
Enemies: temporary- dazzlers
permanent- shivam,
taani
P.s. viron ( sharon + vicky) call rey edward cullen cuz he cums into her room alwys via window. U knw 4 teasing her as kria lyks the character edward cullen!?

Sharon Raiprakash
The diva of St.Louis. Rich, arrogant, spoilt, mean, bitchy gal for every1 bt only her frnds (the dazzlers dance team) kriyam knw her for the sweet, kindhearted girl that she is. Very close to rey and kricky (kria + vicky. In love wid svayum bt afraid 2 admit it. Rey knws dis bt pretends nt 2 knw. Kricky tease her by calling swaron romeo juliet. is planning on telling rey about krisha

Reyaansh Singhania
The dude hearthrob of every gal and wat can i say , perfect son, prince charming, gr8 riend, awesome cousin. Rey and svayum are cousins ( dono ki mom sissys hai) bt no1 knws abt it. Rey madly in love with kria. Only swayum and vicky knw about it. People thnk dat he is a cassinova bt he believes only in princess charming. Very close to his friends and family,
cannot tolerate anything wen it comes to his ladylove or bestie.
SWayum Shekhawat
The sweet friendly boy next door. Rey's cousin, super rich bt doesnt tell any1 bcuz he wants to win sharon over widout his money. Awesome dancer, kria's best friend. Wys der wen sum1 needs him. A very calm person but cannot tolerate anything wen it comes to his ladylove or bestie. Sharon's secret admirer.

Vickramsingh Chauhan
Rey's best friend and also a popular guy among girls. Krisha's bff (it is a secreet). Cant see dem hurt. Madly in love wid neha. Awesome dancer. The jokster /pankster luvs his friends very much. Krisha tease him by " iss dewane ladke ko koi samjhaye"

Neha Kapoor
Kria and vishaka's best friend. A huge bollywood fan. The biggest drama queen ever. Comes from a very secure abd safe home. Parents are strict bt bot orthodox. Likes vicky. Excellent dancer.

RIMAR
NIMMI
BARKHA ALL ARE SAME AS THE SHOW!!
Hope you like it!!!
INDEX
CHARACTER SKETCH : ABOVE
CHAPTER 1:SCROLL DOWN
CHAPTER 2:pg no 2
CHAPTER 3:pg no 4
CHAPTER 4: pg no 5
CHAPTER 5: pg no 6
CHAPTER 6: pg no 6
CHAPTER 7: pg no 7
CHAPTER 8: pg no 8
CHAPTER 9(a): pg no 10
CHAPTER 9(b): pg no 10
CHAPTER 10: pg no 12
CHAPTER 11: pg no 13
CHAPTER 12: pg no 15
CHAPTER 13: pg no 17
CHAPTER 14: pg no 18
CHITS: pg no 20

CHAPTER 15: pg no 22

CHAPTER 16: pg no 25

CHAPTER 17: pg no 28

Edited by rutsi_kriyaansh - 12 years ago

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smkaj1999
nice
do continue soom

Thnk u so much it means a lot to me. Hope v cud b frnds! 😊 😊

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

STORYLINE:
All the dazzlers and weaklings are in St.Louis since grade 1. But Kria is the newbie. And all the weaklings were fruends before she came but they were not a dance team. Its been 2 months since The weaklings created the dance team. All of dem come to school by bus as it is a school attached college. In my story all of dem are in year XI science.
Do comment and like!
Luv rutuja

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting concept 😊

Krisha as twins n Reyam as cousins

Update the 1st part soon

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Devilish.Angel

@Devilish.Angel

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

update soon
nice story line

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome concept yar...

interesting...

plz update soon n plz pm me...

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 1
Tuesday morning, the bus dat was picking all the students of grade 11 stopped on a dusty lane. The driver blew the horn loudly in frustation. He thot ' which jungle hv all of dem come from'. Our dear cicky open d window and immediately rinni, sharon and simmi started sneezing loudly.
Seating arrangement:
|Kria||Neha| |Bharat||Amar|
|Rey||svayum| |nilesh||vicky|
|vishaka||bags||simmi||sharon||rinni|
Nilesh: rey tu aj iss looser ke saath kyu baitha hai? (pointing towards svayum)
Rey: koi aur jagah nhi mili tum logo ke paas
Vicky in an attempt to change d topic: nil chod na yaar tera kya ja raha hai! Chup baith jara.
Jst den neha entered d bus wid her hands full of buks. Svayum rushes of to help her. Neha settled down. Vish: dude y do u hv so many buks? Bechni hai kya?
Neha: are baba neha loosing her timetable and nt finding it anywer.
Vish: den u cu hv called any1 of us na?
Neha: forgetting calling anyone as neha busy wid finding timetable.
Vish: ok
Our deewana alrdy in d pool. Neha turns to hv a convo wid svayum and she sees vicky. LLHH (bg tune: jabse tere naina!!!)
Kria broke deir eyelock while telling to cum out do dat she cud move in.
After sitting kria wisphered to neha
K: tu vicky ki aakhon main aise kya dekh rahi hai jaise tujhe uski aakhon main ddlj dikh rahi ho!
N: neha nt seeing ddlj in vicky's eyes neha seeing neha ke liye pyaar. And den she mentally slapped herself 4 saying dat out loud.
K: Ms neha aapbe abhi abhi kya kaha? And starts whisper singing
" aate jaate sapnon main aara hai koi
dheere dheere dil churata hai koi
dil tera dil bekarar ho gaya
aisa lagta hai tujhe pyaar hogaya"
Neha (blushing): aisa nthng der
K: so y r u blushing?
N: chup chap sitting kria.
Reyam who heard disconvo actually wanted to thnk kria 4 indirectly helping dem in deir mission viha. Little did dey knw dat kria was d founder of mission viha. And here rey ws alrdy in baatcutterworld. Wereas krisha wer hving an eye rgument over kria's dress which according to sharon is tacky. For every1 whu ws watching dis it ws a glaring session btwn dem bt vicky guessed wat it ws about decided to interupt it b4 its too late. So he started coughing. Dis broke deir argument. Neha actlly thnking he ws coughing gave him water in an concerned expression. All the gang nw had deir attention on viha vishaka, rinni and simmi glaring at them wer as the boys and krisha wer happy dat vicky's case ws mutual nt onesided. ( here sharon is a sweetheart as sweet as svayum). Neha realizing dat all eyes wer on her broke awake from vicky's glaze bt he held her bands along with the bottle. When kria strted singing
"aate jaate sapnon main aara hai koi
dheere dheere dil churata hai koi
dil tera dil bekarar ho gaya
aisa lagta hai tujhe pyaar hogaya"
Every1 except reyam, sharon and viha looked at her lyk she grew a third eye. Neha ws red lyk a tomato and vicky ws fake glaring at her. Sharon and reyam wer trying to control deir laughter at neha's state. An kria being kria started laughing loudly. Neha angry on kria starts punching her. Kria stops to take a breath and gulps on seeing neha in rotra das (hope i got d name correct). Sees all d boys laughing except vicky. She catches her ears and gives neha a puppy face and says" sowwy". Neha laughs at her cutenesss and hugs her. The bus stops and every1 gets down except reyam and vicky. Wen rey mumbles " itna cute expression deke sorry bolegi toh hitler bhi maaf kar dega. And aise expression ke vaad koi kaise expect kar sakta hai ki mai use jake hug na karo"
Vicky and svayum hear dis and decide to tease rey.
S: rey abhi abhi tu kya bola? Kuch hug karna hai?
V:hw dare u rey. Main tujhe apna bhai manta tha aur tu
R: maine aisa kya bol?
V: pretend mat kar tu meri deewani ko hug karna chahta hai na
S & V: bhai bhai na raha.
R: guys shut up mqin toh kriya ko hug karne ki baat kar raha tha.
Svayum and vicky start laughing rey realising d prank blushes b4 svayum or vicky cud commnt on him. D driver tels dem 2 get out of d bus.
( rmemeber he ws frustated)
P.S. Vicky knws. About reyam so in a way. Vicky is d secret keeper!
Guys plz comment and lyk.

Edited by rutsi_kriyaansh - 12 years ago

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

It was awesome...

Rey alwsys latoo over kria..
krisha twin...
Loved it..
Do pm me nxt time...i hv a problem sending buddy...so will u plz send m the request

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kreya_pearl
It was awesome...

Rey alwsys latoo over kria..
krisha twin...
Loved it..
Do pm me nxt time...i hv a problem sending buddy...so will u plz send m the request

Sure and thnks