D3 ff: SWEET SECRETS-COULD DEY LEAD TO HAPPY END?

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REDWINE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

WOW ITS REALLY AMAZING FF

JUST READ THE 1ST PART

GOING TO READ 2ND UPDATE

TOODLES

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REDWINE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

just read d 2nd update...wow man...the graph scene was really funny as well as cute...haaye

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

read all the parts in one go...

awesome ff

cont. soon

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Thnks people for ur lovely support!!!! Thn u so much !

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sharuKR

@sharuKR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

just read ur ff its just awesome plzz pm me the next time u update

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hey guys we have the 9th chapter but in two parts!!!

CHAPTER 9(a)
REY: VOH TUMNE USS DIN BASKETBALL COURT MAIN KAHA
THA KI TUMHE BAHUT HURT KIYA HAI... KYA TUM MUJHE
NAHI BATAOGI KI TUMHE KISNE HURT KIYA HAI? (WHILE
SAYING THIS REY HELD KRIA CAPTIVE IN HIS EYES)
K:VOH MAINE KISIKO NHI BATAYA PAR MUJHE NHI MERE
SISTER KO KISINE BAHUT HURT KIYA THA AUR USSE HURT
KARKE USS TYM MUJHE BHI BAHUT HURT HUA THA KYUKI VOH
MERI SOULSISTER HAI!!!!
AFTER SAYING THIS SOME TEARS ESCAPPE HER EYES. REY
GENTLY WIPES THEM AWAY. TO DISTRAACT HER HE ASKS
R: TUMNE KISIKO NHI BATAYA LEKIN MUJHE BATAY AISA KYU??
K: (in mind) BEDA GARG INHE YE POOCHNE KI KYA JAROORAT THI???
"VOH ISS LIYE KYUKI VOH VOH VOH HAAN JINSE CLOSE RELATED NA HO
UNHE BATANE MAIN ASAANI HOTI HAI! HAAN. ( SHE DOESNT SEE IN HIS
EYES WEN SHE SYS THIS)
K: CHALIUE DANCE PRACTICE KARNI HAI NA!!!! BYE.
SHE RUSHES OUT OF THERE. AS SOON AS SHE LEAVES
REY: YES SHE LYKS ME YES!!!!!!
AND GE TOO GOES TO THE RH LYK A LUV SMITTEN PUPPY!!
HERE KRIA DECIDES TO TALK ABOUT THIS TO SHARON. SHE REACHES THE
RH. K: HEY GUYS!!
ALL : HEY LEYS START THE PRACTICE AS SOOON AS REY HERE HE IS!!!
THEY START THEIR PRACTICE. FIRST ALL THE GIRLS STAND IN A V-SHAPE AND
THEY ARE GOING TO DANCE ON 6 DIFFERENT STYLES.
Positions:
VISHAKA RINNI
NEHA SIMMI
KRIA SHARON
Dance forms:
VISH:street dance
RINN:hip hop
NEHA:bharatnatyam
SIMM:belly dance
KRIA:contemporary
SHAR:freestyle
MUSIC START: (Forever Young- JayZ, I Like- enrique and pitbull & bailamos- enrique)
FIRST VISH STARTS STREET DANCING AND RINNI CONTRADICTS HER AND
STARTS HER HIP HOP THEN NEHA CUTS HER WID DIFF MUDRAS WHICH IS
CUT BY SIMMI BY BELLY DANCING THEN KRIA CUTS HER BY DOING LYRICAL
CONTEMPORARY WHICH IS CIT BY SHARON'S FREESTYLE. MUSIC STOPS ALL
TURN INTO STATUES AGAIN AND ALL THE LIGHT CUTS OFF. SUDDENLY 2 SPOTLIGHTS
ON THE BOYS WHO START MIXING ALL THE 6 DANCE FORMS THAT THE GIRLS
PERFORMED ON (even bharatnatyam and belly dancing) AGIN LIGHTS OUT NW
2 SPOTLIGHTS ON VISH & BHARAT WHO START DANCING IN A FACE OFF WAY THEN SPOTLIGHT SHIFTS TO RINNI AND VICKY WHO CHALLENGE EACH OTHER IN HIP HOP.
NXT AMAR AND NEHA , THEN NIMMI AND DEN KRIYAM AND END UP WITH SHAAREY!!!
K: GUYS THAT WAS AWESOME
SH:YA RITE OBVIOUSSLLY WE DAZZLERS WERE THERE IN IT.
BOYS GROANED. R:SHAR NT AGAIN. PLZ ALREADY V HAVE TO HAMDLE A COUNSELLOR!
SV:GUYS LETS GO HOME. SEE U AT THE PARTY. ( obvsly he says this to the weaklings)

Edited by rutsi_kriyaansh - 12 years ago

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

CHAPTER 9(b)
KRIA GOES TO THE LIBRARY ISSUSES HER BOOK AND GOES HOME. SHE FINDS SHARON AND SMRITI IN HER ROOM.
K:MOM AND SHONA AAP LOG MERE ROOM MAI KYA KAR RAHE HO?
M:ARE BETAJI AAJ SHAAM KI PARTY KE LIYE AAP KA DRESS SELECT KAR RAHE HAI.
K:OK BUT YE PARTY RAKHI KYU HAI? AND MERE FRUENDS KO BHI INVITES KAISE MILE??
S:ARE BETA AAPKE PAPA AUR BADE PAPA KI SUCCESFUL DEAL KEKHUSHI MAIN PARTY HAI . AUR AAPKE DOSTON KO ISSLIYE INVITE KIYA HAI KYUNKI
SHARON KE FRNDS KE SAAMNE AAPKI POL NA KHUL JAAYE. THIK HAI?
K: OK BT KUCH JYADA DRESSY NHI.
SH:SURE SHONA AUR TUMHARE LIYE PUDDING BANAYI HAI MAINE.
K:YIPPEE YIPPEE HOOREY HOOREY!!!
S:ITNI BAAR REY KA NAAM KYU LE RAHI HO?
(p.s: smriti left the room to give krisha privacy)
K:SHUT UP SHERRY! ISKA MATLAB TUMHAARE FRNDS BHI HOMGE VAHA. SHIT SHIT ??
S:SHONA KYA HUA?ITNA KYU HYPER HO RHI HO? ROJ TOH MILTI HO UNHE
KRIA MUMBLES SOMETHNG VERY FAST!!! ITS UNUNDERSTANABLE
S:HELLO RAJDHANI EXPRESS SPEED SLOW KARO MUJHE KUCH NHI
SAMAJH RAHA HAI
K:ARE SHONA MAINE VOH REY KE SAAMNE GALTI SE EMBARASSING
BAAT KEH DI AUR PHIR USBE JAB POOCHA KI MAINE YE BAAT SIRF
USE KYU KAHI TOH I SAID KYUKI VOH ANJAAN HAI MERELIYE. PAR
HE IS NT ANJAAN AND DEN MERE MIND MAI AYA KI AAP AISI BAATE
SIRF UNSE KARTE HAI JINKE AAP KAREEB HOTE HAI. AND NOW I'M.
WONDERING KI VOH MERE BAARE MAIN KYA SOCH RAHA HOGA.
SHE LOOKS AT SHARON WHO WAS DEEEP IN THOT. SHE SHAKES HER
K:SHERRY TUMNE KUCH SUNA YA NHI??
S:YES I GOT IT U LUV HIM SILLY U R NT FALLING FOR HIM Y HAVE ALREADY
FALLEN FOR HIM.
KRIA BLUSHED
S: WOW MAINE KABHI SOCHA BHI NHI THA KI
KOI LADKA TUHE BLUSH KARVAYEGA!!
KRIA BLUSHES MORE
In Rey's Room
REY IS SITTING ON THE BED DEEP IN HIS THOTS KISSING HIS HANDS EVERY
TWO MINS. SVAYUM COMES IN PULLING VICKY WID HIM
S:DEKH YE KAISE PAGALO JAISI HARKATE KAR RAHA HAI. HAR DO MIN MAI HASKE
APNE HAATH KO KISS KAR RAHA HAI. YE PAKKA PAGAL HO GAYA HAI.
V:REY MERE BHAI TU THIK TOH HE NA? TU AISE APNE HAATH KO KISS KYU KAR RAHA
HAI?
R: dreamily... VOH MAINE AAJ ISSI HAATH SE APNE ANGEL KE TERAS KO WIPE KIYA HAI
V:ANGEL YAANI KRIA RITE?
S: OBVIOUSLY.
IT WAS QUIET FOR A MOMENT AND THEN SUDDENLY VICKY SHOUTED. REYAM JUMPED
IN THE AIR. V: GOT IT!!! GOT IT!!!
S: KYA GOT IT?
V:ARE YAHI KI REY DOESNT HAVE A CRUSH ON KRIA
R:WAT RUBBISH!
V:ARE U DNT LYK HER
S: VICKY TU PAGAL HO GAYA HAI KYA?
V: ARE GUYS REY DOESNT HV A CRUSH ON HER
OR LYKS HER HE HAS FALLEN HARD FOR KRIA. REY TU BHI MERI TARAH GONE CASE HO GAYA
S: I'M SO HAPPY FOR U DUDE OR TERELIYE BHI VICKY
R:MAI BHI TERELIYE KHUSH HU.
S:GUYS LETS GET READY FOR OUR LADYLOVES!!
V: MERI DEEWANI AUR ISKI BAATCUTTER
REY CUTS HIM WITH A GLARE
V:SRY ISKI KRIA BHI AA RAHE HAI
R:HAAN DUDE GAUTAM UNCLE NE DONO TEAMS KO INVITE KIYA HAI.
HUMARE PARENTS TOH INVITED HAI HI PAR UNCLE NE TEAM WEAKLING
KO BHI INVITE KIYA HAI.
V:GUYS SO LETS GET READDDYYY!!!!
Hw was it??? Do comment and like people!!!