MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14

<font color="#FF0000" size="3">NOTE:GUYZ YE NOTE PADNA BAHOT JARURI HAI OR U WONT GET FROM WHERE ITS STARTING...
ACTUALLY MENE YE EPIZ BICH MEIN LIKHNE SHURU KIYE THE...LIKE WHEN MANYATA KI SHOW MEIN PRINCESS BANANE KI TRAINING SHURU HUI THI TAB USE AKASH KE LOVE LETTERS AYE THE AND BRIHRAJ NE USE PUNISHMENT DI PURI DIN BAHAR KHADE REHNE KELIYE...
MERE EPIZ US KE BAD SHURU HOTE HAI... WO FAINT HOTI HAI AND ALL THAT...
THE PEOPLE WHO LOVED MANVEER NOK JHOK I INSIST THEM TO READ THIS EPIZ...
THEY ARE NOT AS SAME AS THE SHOW TELECASTED ON THESE ARE FAR DIFFERENT...
AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST...
JISE BHI WOH EPI YAD NAHI AA RAHA HEREZ THE LINK:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=znlFhY5kscw
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT..</font>
~MAHI~
INDEX:
PART 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3311603/manveer-my-made-imaginary-epiz-pt21-22-pg-51-15-11-14
PART 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70551399
PART 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70996961
PART 4 AND 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71577130
PART 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74522595

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE FOR 27^TH FEBRUARY,MONDAY MANVEER…. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

The scene starts where manyata is lying on her bed,due to the punishement given by brijraj , manyata stands the whole day in sun and falls unconscious. After the check up by the doctor, he tells all family members that manyata's condition is pretty serious where uday gets very very tensed. Then Dadisa says to evry1 dat only uday is allowed to go in manyata's room and no1 else not even servants. Then all the servants and family members leave the room except uday. He sits on the chair near manyata's bed and starts recalling all the good memories dat he spent with manyata….. he massages her legs while she is still unconscious. And also he keeps the strip of wet cloth on her head the whole night so that manyata's fever gets less. Then its morning time…… uday falls asleep in the chair his head on side of manyata's bed and his hand on hers.

Slowly something moves under uday's hand and he gets up. He sees manyata slowly coming to consciousness. He gets happy as well as is worried for her. He gets up quickly from the chair and goes and sits near manyata's bed. He keeps his both hand on the both sides of manyata's cheeks and says

Uday: manyata, manyata akhein kholiye princess dekho apka sada hua papita aya

hai…..princess…..

(SLOWLY MANYATA OPENS HER EYES AND SEES DAT UDAYVEER IS CHANGING THE WET STRIP DAT WAS KEPT OVER HER HEAD.THAT TIME ALL FAMILY MEMBERS ARE OUT ON A FAMILY FUNCTION PURPOSELY LEAVING UDAY WITH MANYATA ALONE IN THE HOUSE…)

Manyata:(tired not even able to speak properly) U……uday ….uU…..Uday

Uday: bolo princess hum yahin hai apke pas bolo…..

Manyata: Shukriya…

Uday: shukriya par kis liye??

Manyata: mera itna khayal rakhne ke liye…

Uday: are princess yeh to hamara farz hein akhir hum abhi abhi to dost bane hai….

Manyata:par kisi bhi dost ne apne dost ke liye puri rat jag kar vo patti uske sar par nahi

Rakhi hogi…..

Uday: manyata tumhe aaram ki jaroorat hein tum so jao…

Manyata: nahin uday..tum tapic mat badlo..

Uday: princess who topic hota hein…to kya karma chahti ho tum??

Manyata:tumhe job hi chahiye mein karumgi akhir yeh bhi to mera farz hein na…

Uday:to tum mereliye kuch karna chahti ho han?

Manyata:han…..

Uday:to phir thike princess aap mujhe ek hug do…

(manyata feels nothing but thinks of PAKASH. Uday understood this silence. He gets up and starts walking away angrily when….)

Manyata: Uday rukko…u uday ahhh

(manyata tries to get up while uday turns bavk. He runs near manyata's bed and helps her get up putting his one hand on her shoulder and the other hand under her waist)

Uday:pagal ho gayi ho kya?? Tum humhe batadeti hum tumhe utha lete…

Manyata: gussa ho mere sade hue papite??

(uday smiles)(a small eyelock between manveer)

Uday:hum apse kabhi gussa nahi ho sakte princess….

(manyata feels very nice and smile and say..)

Manyata: yaha ao udaybeer mere pass….paleasj

(uday goes near manyata and manyata hugs him tightly)

(uday closes his eyes and manyata doesn't knw wat is different in that hug but she felt very very very magical. She realizes she never felt so magicalwhen she hugged PAKASH)

(and den achanak se Unnati knocks and comes and sees manveer HUGGINGand SMILES)

Unnati: Dada…..

(Manveer shocked and get separated quickly)(Uday looks at Unnati and Unnati's smile widens)

Manyata:Are unnati andar Ao…

Unnati: lagta hai hum galat samay par aaye…

Manyata: Are esi KOi bat nahi he main bas itna jan gayi ki jis insaan ko mein hamesha sada hua papite samajhti thi vo to ek gulab jamun nikla. Tumhe pata hai unnati tumhara

Bhai alovera ke jhad jesa hein…..han nahi to…

Unnati:Dada aur jhad jesa…. Hahahah

(manyata and unnati strt laughing. Uday gets angry wen manyata sees him.)

(manyata touches uday's cheeks and says)

Manyata: are gulab jamun jese dost Plz gussa mat ho, Unnati mein alovera jese jhad se….. kya tha vo shabd comapare ….

(uday and unnati smiles)

Uday:princess vo compare hota hein comapare nahin….

Manyata:Han vahi vahi compare…

To mein kahan thi haan unnati mene tumhare dada ko pata hai us alovera ke jhad se

c-o-m-p-a-r-e kyun kiya kyunki tumhara dada bilkul usi jesahai…..pata hai bachpan mein mujhe alovera se sakt nafrat thi kyunki uske bahar ke kate mujhe bahot chubte the isiliye mein kabhi use hath lagakar janane ki koshish nahin ki par ek din mujhe pata chala ki uske andar to mulayam mulayam jal hota hai….

(uday and unnati strt laughin loadly)

Manyata:are tum log has kyun rahe ho…..han nahi to??

Uday:princess who gel hota hai jal nahi jal yane ke aag…

Manyata:ooo teri…. Ye angreji bhi na dimag ki dhayikar deti hai…..han toh pata hai uday tum bhi vese hi ho bahar se mujhe hamesha sade hue lage lekin asal mein to tum ek pyare se gulab jamun ho….

Uday: ab bas ho gayi meri tariff princess han nahi to…..

(manyata smiles)

Unnati: acha Dada, manyata to ab hum chalet hai, bye takke care..

(unnati leaves and then manveer are alone again…)

Uday: Manyata tumhe aaram ki jaruurat hain tum so jao…

Manyata: han uday tum bhi so jao….. matlab aaram karlo ghar jake…

(PHIR MANYATA SO JATI HAI…)

Aur jab vo gehri nind mein hoti hein tab uday dherese uske pass jata hein aur uske forhead pe kiss karta hai…. And says

"I LOVE U MY PRINCESS AUR BAHOT JALD TUM US MAJNU KO CHODKAR HAMARE PAS AOGI AUR HAM TUMHE PA LENGE YE VADA HAI HAMARA"

~MAHI~

HOPE SABKO PASAND AYE...

yay me first mahi loved this first part it was awesome omg i just wished if they showed something like this in the show... really loved it... loved manveer scene especially when manyata gave him a hug and called uday a gulab jamun so sweet...im sure the other parts r gone be even more awesome and now i cant wait plz jalid se next part wait karo and thank u so much for the pm

Lovely update dear continue soon

Brilliant update please continue soon

Wow I loved it :) hope in this story manyata dosent do pakash jaaap :p

Wow! Loved it! Wish it had happened like this in show.

Superb

MAHI... thank god tu ithe he suru kela. me tula mhannar hote ki tu he ithe suru kar. pahilyanda me confused hote ki hech te fb warcha ahe ki nahi... pan jya kshani me PAKASH wachli me sure hote ki he fb warchah ahe...best... pan fakta 26ach ahet na... pudhche pan update karna fast...

hayelah! kia likhti ho yar!