MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

awww,they bth love each othr soo muchh!!!!!!! manyata love saved his lifee!!!!! manyta hugged him,uday kissed her hanndd,so sweeet!!!!!!! waitng for their confession!!!!!!!😊😊😊

thanks alot and they'll surely confess soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 8 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 MANVEER

Manveer lost in each others eyes when the nurse comes''

Nurse: rajkumariji yuvraaj udayveer ko khana khilana hai, to mein inkeliye khana kab lau

Aur doctor sahib ne kaha hai ke aapne kal se kuch khaya nahi hai to aap bhi kha

Lijiye'..

Manyata: tum ek kaam karo iska khana yaha lao mein bad mein kha loongi'.

Nurse leaves and uday looks at manyata with a weird face'.

Manyata: kya ese kya dekh rahe ho??

Uday: princess kya hum jan sakte hai ke tumne kal se khana kyun nahi khaya??

Manyata: vo itna sab kuch ek sath ho raha tha ke mein khan eke bare mein bhul hi gayi'

Then j comes there''

J: wow uday tumhe hosh aa gaya kitni achi baat hai'..

She goes and kisses uday on his cheeks' and here manyata gets very very very angry'..

Manyata: jghamandini ki bacchi dur rehke baat nahi kar sakti teri vo zehrili kiss deni

Jaroori hai kya?

J: relax jiji'' hum uday ko bas ek welcum back kiss de rahe the aap itna jal kyun rahi

Hai???

Uday: han han manyata (lifting his eyebrows..) tumhe itna gussa kyun aa raha hai???/

Manyata herself is puzzled at this and starts thinking'.

J: oh I missed you so much uday'.

Uday: oh J I missed you too'. Pata nahi hai tumhe ki tumhare is jiji ko samhalne ke liye

Kya kuch nahi karna pada'..

Manyata angrily gets up from chair'..

Manyata: jab tumhe is jghamindini se phursat milegi to mujhe bulalena'.

She starts moving but uday holds her hand and pulls her towards him and manyata falls on him'.

Uday: tum jo ho aur jesibhi ho humhe to khud se bhi jyada pasand ho'.

Manveer blushing and J gets jealous'.

Manyata: accha soono mein thodi der mein ati hun tab tak tum J ke sath raho thike?

Uday: thike jaldi aao hum intezaar karenge''

Manyata nods and comes out. She is very upset'.. In the jungle she was only thinking about uday' and had forgotten its main cause'.. "the gr8 Pakash"

She sits on the bench there crying and remembering all the sweet moments she spent with pakash comparing them with uday'..

Manyata: maine kabhi nahi socha tha kit um esa kar sakte ho pakash'. ( she wipes of her

Tears'.) itna bada kadam uthake mein tumhe itni jaldi nahi chodungi pakash..

Tumhe iski saja to bhugatni padegi'.

Then the background music starts''''

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye, hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne
Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne
Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara, Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage , Jag suna suna lage

Just then the nurse comes with uday's food'. And manyata wipes of her tears'

Manyata: tum ek kaam karo tum ye khana mujhe dedo mein mein use khila doongi'

The nurse gives food to manyata and then manyata goes inside'.

Uday: are princess aa gayi tum'

J: anyways uday hum chlte hai' you take care ok aur bahot jald thik ho jana'..

Uday smiles at her and she leaves from there giving manyata an evil amile while going'' manyata goes inside and keeps the food on the table'. She knows that if he looked in her eyes he would definitely come to know she was crying so she tries to hide her eyes but uday sees it'..

Uday: princess kyat um ro rahi thi???

Manyata: are mein kyun rone lagi'.han nahi toh'

Uday(serious now): jhoot mat bolo manyata'

Then uday takes her face in his palms'

Uday: kya baat hai princess??

Then manyata is unable to control herself'.. she hugs uday tightly. Then he wipes off her tears and phir use apni baho mein lekkar uska sir apne chest pe rakhta hai so that she calms down'.

Uday: kya baat hai princess..???

Manyata: pakash'

Uday: princess tum tension matlo' ekbaar hume thik hone do phir dekh lena princess'.

Manyata: us pakash ka kuch bhi hone de uday par vada kart u khudko kuch nahi hone

Dega'.

Manyata: are princess'. Hum apse wada karte hai ke chahe tum hamare sath ho ya na ho

Par hum humesha tumhara sath denge'.

Manyata: (she feels happy now) acha tumhe ab khana kha lena chahiye'..

She takes the food plate to feed uday'.

Uday: hum kha lenge pehle tum jake khana kha lo'.

Manyata: mein badme kha loongi uday'.

Then manyata feeds uday the food by her own hand'.uday ke lips ke niche khana laga hota hein to manyata use voh pohchne ke liye ishara karti hai par uday ko kuch samajh nahi ata'' manyata phir uday ke paas jakar uske lips ke niche ka khana pochti hai'. Vo dono bahot kareeb hote'.their faces are just inches apart'. Both are lost in each others eyes'. Manyata moves her fingers on uday's lips herself confused what is she doing'..then background music starts'..

Dil ibadat kar raha hai , Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil , Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun , Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil, Lagi hai yahi dhun


Achanakse unnati vaha ati hai'. And manyata removes her hand from uday's lips both blushing''.and moves back''.

Manyata: u'' un'..unnati tum ya'.yaha mein thodi der bad ati hun'.

Unnati cums and sits near uday'..

Unnati: ek bat batae hum apko dada humhe lagta hai ki manyata apse pyaar karne lagi

Hai'.

Uday: nahi choti'.

Unnati: sach mein dada pata hai aap jab behosh the tab humne doctor se baat karte soona

Tha'. Vo bahot fikar karti hai apki'. Aur pehli bar humne manyata ke akhon

Mein vo fikar aur pyaar dekha jo humne unki ankhon mein pakash keliye dekha

Tha'.

Uday: choti agar esa hua na to humhe aur kuch nahi chahiye'.hume hamara sabkuch

Miljaega''

HE SAYS IT BLUSHING''..

~MAHIMA~

GUYZ PLZ CUMMENT...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome...update
OMG...zeharili kiss🤣
aww...manveer scene was too cute
plzz...update soon
thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Awsome...update
OMG...zeharili kiss🤣
aww...manveer scene was too cute
plzz...update soon
thanx for PM.

YUP WILL SURELY UPDATE SOON... THANKS ALOT...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
manveer soo blushingg and so much in loveee,itss soo sweeet!!!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
manveer was simply awsome
cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Mahi. Manveer scenes were extremely cute😳. Please continue soon ,' ... thanx 4 the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
update updatw update update updateupdaye update update update update update update update plzzz i'm waiting for ur both updates make it fast
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MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 9 <3 <3 <3 <3 MANVEER'..

*NOTE:MUST READ THE SONG LYRICS AS THEY MAKE THE EPISODE MORE ROMANTIC''*

Manyata is still thinking about whatever happened inside, then unnati goes from there and nurse goes inside with a huge bowl of water. Manyata sees the nurse going and goes behind her. When she entered the room she is shocked and angry'.

Manyata: (shouts loudly with anger) ye kya kar rahi ho tum'.tumhari himmat kese hui

Esa karne ki??

Uday is shocked at manyata's reaction'. Manyata ko itna gussa aa raha tha kyunki vo nurse uday ki shirt nikal rahi thi'.

Nurse: rajkumari ji vo'..

The nurse looks at uday with worried eyes'.

Uday: are princess kya hua??? Yaha aao humare paas betho plz'tumhe itna gussa kyun

Aa raha hai???

Manyata goes and sits near uday and she is very very very angry'.

Manyata: mein thodi der bahar kya gayi aur tum is nurse ke sath yaha'.shi'.

Uday takes manyata's face in his palms and then both uday and nurse start laughing'..

Uday:manyata ye to bas hume sponge bath de rahi thi'.

Manyata: (angry now) shi uday ab tumhe nahane ke liye bhi ladkiyan chahiye'.

Uday: are princess humne aaj tak tumhe chod ke kisi aur ladki ke taraf pyar se nahi dekha

He pata hai tumhe'.. (manyata still angry') acha please gussa thuk do'dekho

Humare jakham abhi puri tarah se bhare nahi hai'to hum nahane keliye uth to

Sakte hai nahi'.isiliye ye pani aur sponge hota hai jo hume ssaf rakhega taki

Humare jakhmon mein koi infection na ho'.samjhi tum???(he gives a tap on

manyata's nose with his finger'..) meri Ms. Han nahi to???

Manyata:oh mein to bekar me hi'.

She leaves the sentence incomplete'but uday tells her to complete it'..shee tells him she will complete the sentence on right time'..

Manyata: mujhe maaf kardo nurse mein bekaar mein hi'.

Nurse:nahi nahi rajkumari ji koi baat nahi'..agar mein apki jagah hoti to mein bhi yahi

Karti'akhir ap inse itna pyaar jo karti hai'

Manyata blushes and uday's lost in seeing her'

Manyata: tu ese kya dekh raha hai??? ( uday blushes and says kuch nahi) nurse tum jao

Yaha se mein uday ko sponge bath dedungi'.

Uday (shocked): tum??

Manyata nods and nurse leaves the room'..then manyata uday ke kareeb jati hai'both lost in each others eyes'.

Manyata dheere se uska shirt nikalti hai'.this time uday closes his eyes completely'. First time in his life he felt so weak that he was unable to speak'. Manyata use sponge bath seti hai puri tarah se uski chest uske muscles mein khoyi hui. Phir vo sponge se dheere dheere uday ka face clean karti hai' when the music starts'..

THE SONG FROM THE SHOW DILL MILL GAYE''.

Kaisa hai ye khumar.

Kaisa nash,

Duniya lage nayi,

Naya aasma,

Sapna hai mera, tu hi armaan,

Sanson mein dhun chde puche mujhse bata ye kese

Dill Mill Gaye (Dill - Mill ' Gaye)

Dill Mill Gaye

Two three weeks pass. Uday ab puri tarah se thik hua hai' is jungle wale incident ne un dono ko ek nayi rah di thi jiski manjil sirf ek thi vo thi sath hona'.unhone abhi take k dusre ko apni dil ki baat nahi batayi thi'.

Manyata goes at uday's house'. Uday uske room mein nahi hota hai'vo pura ghar chaan marti hai'.aur jab vo uday ke room ke yaha se ja rahi hoti hai'. Tab vo uday ko uske balcony key ek room se bahar ate dekhti hai'uday ko pata nahi hota ki manyata aayi hai''' he looks at the stars and start smiling'.. manyata goes near him'..

Manyata: uday kaha the tum aur us room mein kya kar rahe the''

(She starts movig towards that room par uday use rok leta hai'..)

Uday: a'.. Princess tum kab aayi'.. us room mein kuch nahi bas kuch purana saman

Hai'..

Manyata is still lost in thinking that what is in that room'.. uday shakes her'.

Uday: princess hum kabse tumse baat kar rahe hai..aur tum ho ki najane kaha khoi hui ho.

Manyata(comes out from her chain of thoughts'.) : sorry tum kuch bol rahe the uday??

Uday: princess tum bhi na'. acha humhe kuch kam hai tum yahi ruko hum thodi der

Mein ate he thike???

Manyata nods and smiles and tells him through his eyes to come fast'.. "THIS IS LOVE WHICH SPEAKS WITHOUT WORD''"

Manyata abhi bhi soch rahi hoti hai ke us room mein esa kya hota hai' jo uday use nahi dikhana chahta'. She is waiting there and uday comes from back'..

Uday: manyata ghum jao'.

Manyata confuse'.phir uday use ghuma ta hai aur uske ankhon pein ek kali cloth strip bandhta hai'.

Manyata: uday ye tum'.

Uday(serious) : (he keeps his finger on manyata's lips'.) SSHhh''..

Kuch mat pucho bas humare sath chalo''

Uday takes manyata in that room'.manyata andar jati hai tab uske per ke niche use kuch gud gudi si hoti hai'.uday removes the strip and goes from there leaving her alone''us room mein bahot andhera hota hai''she gets scared'.

Manyata: Uday'. Uday kaha ho tum???

Suddenly the lights come and manyata is all shocked to see'''

That room wasn't a room for her it was like a dream'.. pura room white red flowers aur lit kiye hue candles se saja hota hai'..uske niche saari jagah rose petals the aur'. Aur sab jagah diwaro par frame kiye uske ab tak ke saare photos''sab jagah'..

Vo un photos ke paas jati hai'..aur thodi aur age jane ke bad'. Waha ek badi si diwar pe bas ek hi photo thi'.vo us room ki sabse badi tasvir thi'.. vo pic uday aur manyata ki bachpan ki engagement pic thi jaha uday use anghooti pehna raha tha'..vo us photo ko hath lagati hai'.. her tears fall'. She wasn't able to believe this all was true'.

Uday waha piche khada hota hai'. He is hiding'. He is very happy to see manyata's reaction'.the music starts'.

Kitna tha pyasa

Kitna tanha

Man bujha bujha sonna jaha..

Khali khali hare k lamha..

Mili tum rang mile jhoome zindagi ese jaise'

Dill Mill Gaye (Dill - Mill ' Gaye)

Dill Mill Gaye'.

Manyata: uday'. (still crying) uday bahar aao'..

Uday comes out'. Manyata sees him and runs at him and hugs him tightly' she hides her face in his arms'and uday bhi use apne bahon mein tightly pakad lea hai'. Uske ankhon se bhi ansoon behne lagte hai'. Phir vo manyata ka face apne palms mein leta hai'. Aur dono ek dusre ko dekhke smile karte hai' aur phir se ek dusre ko tightly hug karte hai'. Phir uday manyata ko apne sath unke bachpan wale pic ke paas le jata hai'..

Uday apne ghutnon par bethta hai' manveer full on blushing'.

Uday: princess manyata hum tumse bahot pyaar karte hai'. Bachpan se karte aaye hai'

Kya tum hamari maharani banogi???

Manyata: han han'. (she is literally bouncing with happiness)

Uday uske hath pe kiss karta hai and he gets up and hugs manyata tightly'

Uday: pata hai tumhe princess hum is ghadi ka kabse intezaar kar rahe the'.

Phir vo manyata ka left hand leta hai aur use engagement ring pehnata hai'. Manyata is amazed to see that ring because of two things'. Pehli vo ek bahot hi khubsurst ring thi ful studded with diamond'. Aur doosri'. Vo vahi ring thi jo uday use us engagement pic mein pehna raha tha'.. then she keeps her head on uday's chest and dono apni akhein band karte hai'.

Uday whispers in her ears'..

"I LOVE YOU MANYATA'' I LOVE YOU'.."

And music starts'''

Ab har pal hogi chahat ki baate..

Khushiyon ke din honge sapno ki rate..

Hathon mein hath liye,

Khwabon ko sath liye..

Zindagi ki raho mein chalte chalte..

Dill Mill Gaye (Dill - Mill ' Gaye)

Dill Mill Gaye

~MAHIMA~

guys agar pasand aye to atleast like karo yar i'm getting a very very poor response for this...😭

NOTE: GUYZ ITS GETTING TOO MUCH HECTIC FOR ME TO SEND PM'S SO NOW I'VE DECIDED TO MAKE A PM LIST...

WHOEVER WANTS PM ON UPDATE OF THIS FF PLZ LIKE TIS POST AND ONCE MENTION IN YOUR COMMENTS... I'LL ADD YOU IN PM LIST...

Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaay
me first

kitne dinno baad first position mile hai...😆🤣

cumin 2 d update...
it was
Awesum👏👏
amazing⭐️⭐️
loved it...👍🏼
Especially d Sponge bath wala scene...😳😳
but my fav is Uv's proposal...😎

Fab update❤️
do cont soon
n sorry i was busy wid studies...
so culdn't comment or reply 2 ur pm's...

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago

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