MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 22

Originally posted by: bushra..manveer

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Originally posted by: bushra..manveer

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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome episode Mahi! I was so tensed after the last ending (when Unnati had called Uday) , but this turned out to be a nice surprise. It was a party for the couple , that was so sweet😳. Manveer scene in the rain was nice , BUT TOO SHORT😡. I wanted more romance there😉! Jai , as usual is a bit** 🤬 ... I'm sure she must've told Manyata something about Uday , that's why she doesn't want to see him anymore😭. Please do continue soon😊, WHY NO PM? PS - my favourite part was when Uday greeted Komal with : GOOD MORNING LOVE😆!

Originally posted by: annesha18

awesome update
but do not keep us in suspence deary update fast\

thx for the pm
love the dance
and manveer in rain
hate jai

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 13... <3 <3 <3 MANVEER...

Uday reaches rajmahal. Komal comes...

uday: aunty komal manyata ko achanakse ye kya hua??

komal:pata nahi beta par humhe unke liye bahot chinta ho rahi hai...unhone subah se kuch nahi khaya...

uday: kya. aap chinta mat kijiye aunty komal humhe unka nashta dijiye hum unhe khilate hai...

komal: thike...

Uday go near manyata's room but the servants outside her room stop her...

servant: maaf kijiye yuvraj udayveer... apko andar jane ki ijajat nahi hai...ye khud rajkumariji ka adesh hai...

uday: humhe humari rajkumari se milne ke liye unki ijajat nahi leni padti... tumhe agar tumhari nokri pyaari hai to hatjao hamare raste se...

servants get scared and move aside...uday enter's manyata's room...with her breakfast...and sees manyata sitting on her bed crying... He goes near her and sits on bed taking her face in his palms...

uday: kya bat hai princess tum humse itna gussa kyun ho??

manyata takes uday's hand from her face and throws it aside in anger...and gets up from the bed turning her back on him...he turns her back...

uday:princess hume humari galti to batao...

manyata(angrily): galti...huh...tumhine kal raat akash ko waha bulaya tha na??

uday shocked!!...

uday: esa tumse kisne kaha??

manyata shows him J's mobile video... the video contained that uday was talking with akash making him jelous saying that he was going to propose her and was taking her to dat beach... and also said rok sakkoo to roklo...mr.majnu...

uday: princess...vo hum...

manyata(angrily shouts): kya tumne use waha bulaya tha han ya na uday??

uday:(angrily):han... han...(he goes and holds her shoulder tightly...) suna tumne hann humhine use waha bulaya tha...

manyata(touches his face seeing a different pain in his eyes): kyun uday???

uday: khudgarj ho gaye the hum... akhir kab tak tum sachai se bhagti..???jabtak tumhare life se ye akash wala chapter humesha humesha keliye nahi mitata tab tak humhare dil ko thandak nahi pochti...

Manyata's tears fall seein uday's love for her...she hugs him tightly...

manyata: i am sorry uday...

uday: it's ok princess... humhe pata hai ki tumhe ye baat j se pata chali isiliye tumhe gussa aya...

manyata moves back and nods...

manyata: I LOVE YOU...

uday kisses her on her forehead and cheeks...

uday: LOVE YOU TOO... PRINCESS...

manyata gives a cute smile...

uday: acha ab jaldi se khana khalo humhe press conference mein bhi jana hai...

manyata: press conference?

uday(gives his killing smile):hume is rishte ko official jo banana hai ya phir esehi chup chup ke han?

manyata gets upset suddenly...

uday: princess kya baat hai khush nahi ho humare sath...??

manyata: tumhare sath duniya ki konsi ladki khush nahi reh sakti??? aur rahi press conference ki baat to sach kahu uday mein abhi ek normal life jina chahti hun...tumhare sath kya hum thode dino keliye ise humare bich rakhe bas thode dino keliye??

uday: tumhari icha humara adesh hum abhi press conference cancel kardete hai...

manyata: tum is duniya ke sabse ache dost ho...

uday shocked at manyata's word DOST he makes a serious face and starts moving towards manyata...and manyata starts moving back... ab vo uske cupboard se takrati hai par phir bhi uday uske taraf badh raha... he traps her between his arms so there was no chance for her to escpe….

nw manveer are so close that their faces are just inches apart...

uday moves his nose on her cheekbone...

uday: dost han??? jaha tak humhe pata hai hum to tumhare BOYFRIEND cum fianc hai na??

manyata(unnable to speak because of his closeness...):wahi wahi...

uday:(goes more close) kya wahi wahi??

manyata: ki tum duniya ke sabse ache...

uday:hum duniya ke sabse ache??

manyata( blushes):BOYFRIEND ho...

she pushes him back and and runs near the bed... uday comes and hugs her tightly from her back and kisses her on her neck...the music starts...

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon

Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon

Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se

Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se

Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon

Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya

Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai

Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

the whole day passes,,,, its evening time manyata comes with uday to give him company till the car...

uday: princess aaj gud night kiss nahi dogi...

manyata:chal hat halkat veda kahi ka...

uday: are wah yahi sunana tha humhe par sachme princess tumhe pure din jhelne ke liye ek good night kiss to banta hai na...

manyata: HOOO

uday: princess ye kya bache jesa HOOO kar rahi ho??

manyata: udayveer singh ab tu ese bate karega to mere pas HOOO karne ke alava kuch hoga kya?kiss toh ese mang raha hai jese whole sale mein bik rahe ho aur han tumhe mujhne jhelna padta hai han?? ek din to mein intna door chalijaungi...ki...

uday(cuts off):SHUT UP princess kitni bar kaha ki jane ke baate mat kiya karo...

manyata(bites her tounge):Ooo teri mein to bhul hi gayi... maaf karde uday...

UDAY is upset... she gives him a quick kiss on his cheeks...

manyata(raises her eyebrows): ab thike...??

uday(smiles):han... GOOD NIGHT I LOVE YOU...

manyata:I LOVE U TOO...

its night time both manveer unnable to sleep... manyata messages uday...

manyata: so gaye mere gulabjamun??

uday: tum abhi bhi jagi hui ho soyi nahi dear??

manyata: tum bhi to nahi soye na??

uday: humare bare mein soch rahi ho han??

Manyata:oh hello yuvraj udayveer singh apne aap ko ita importance mat do ok?? Aur yeh bata ki abhi tak soya kyun nahi??

Uday: kya karu... tumne meri neend jo cheen li hai...

manyata: tumne bhi to meri toh meri neend chini hai waise tum kar kya rahe ho...

Uday goes out in his balcony for taking something leaving his phone in his room... on the otherside manyata ko gussa ata hai cuz he didnt reply her... she calls him and just then uday...cums back in his room...he picks up...

uday: hi LOVE...

manyata: LOve ke bache mere msg ko reply kyun nahi kiya???

uday: msg??

then he sees his inbox...

uday: oh maaf kardo princess hum thode busy the...

manyata: vese tum kar kya rahe ho??

uday: kuchnahi bas kuch ladkiyan aayi thi unke sath the...

manyata: acha...

uday: majak kar rahe hai princess...

manyata: pata hai mujhe... khabardar agar kisi aur ladki ki taraf ankh utha ke bhi dekha to..han nahi to...

uday(smiles): Han meri miss HAN NAHI TO... vese tum ab so jao varna kal subah humhe J part 2 dekhna padega...

manyata: matlab??

uday: matlab agar tum soyi nahi to tumhare ankhon ke niche dark circles honge...aur J ki haal bhi kuch aisa hi hai...

manyata:tere kehne ka matlab hai ki J ke ankhon ke neeche dark circles hai aur unke wajah se vobandar dikh rahi hai???

uday: han han wah princess badi samajhdar ho gayi ho tum humare sath rehkar...vese bhi

hum dono ko sath dekhkar J hawaiya aur Neend jo udgayi hai...bandar kahi ke...

manyata:sharam nahi aati mere behen ko bandar bula rahe ho...

They both start laughing...

uday: ab agar tumhe bandar nahi dikhna to so jao...

manyata: hmmm... han...Good night... sweet dreams...

uday: Good night...LOVE YOU...mere ache ache sapne dekhna… muah!!

manyata: han han baba tumhare hi sapne dekhungi khush…. Ab bye...

and both manveer sleep lost in their dreams!!!

~mahi~

WOA I AM SECOND TO COMMENT

AWESOME UPDATE

SPECIALLT THIS LINES

manyata: so gaye mere gulabjamun??

uday: tum abhi bhi jagi hui ho soyi nahi dear??

manyata: tum bhi to nahi soye na??

uday: humare bare mein soch rahi ho han??

LOVED MANVEER ROMANACE

THANKS FOR THE PM DO CONTINUE ASAP

*HUGSS*