MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: milhan

hayelah! kia likhti ho yar!

alla and anth😉

thanks yar..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: maneet..

Loved it dear
thanx 4 pm swty..
Pari

thnks alot...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ...navina...

WOW Mahi 👏. Totally loved it. I wish that THIS "EPISODE" REALLY DID FOLLOW THAT ONE!!!! Please update soon. Thanx for the PM😊. Very sorry about the late comment.

awww thanks yar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 2….

The scene starts with manyata resting on her bed and udayveer comes there.

Udayveer: manyata ab aap ki tabyat kesi hai??

Manyata : thik hi hu uday. Pata hai mein yahan bethe bethe ya kahoon lete lete pak gayi

hoon….han nahi toh….

Udayveer: acha…..hmmm toh chalo ek kaam karte hain vese bhi Dadisa ne aaj apko

Chutti di hai to chalo bahar chalet hai……

Manyata : sachi mein…..to phir der kis baat ki chalo chalet hain…..

Udayveer and manyata go to the same coffee shop where pakash works as a waiter…

Pakash in the coffee shop see uday and manyata together and starts walking away from there…….manyata sees pakash and runs behind him and starts shouting PAKASH>>>>>PAKASH. pakash crosses the road and as manyata tries to run behind him udayveer catches her wrist and pulls her aside……..

Manyata: halkat mele chod mujhe jaane de …….chod mujhe…

Udayveer: manyata aap hamse ese baat kyun kar rahi hein?

Manyata:kutte agar tumne abhi mujhe choda hota to main Pakash ke pas pahoch pati

Samjhe tum……….

Udayveer gets angry and says….

Udayveer: pata hein princess apki problem kya hai aap kuch soonane se pehle hi uska

fesla kar deti hai. Sahi kaha tha tumne , humhe tumhe chod dena chahiye tha

aap pahochti to jaroor lekin pakash ke pas nahi sidha hospital mein……

Manyata: matlab??

Udayveer: matlab ye Princess ki abhi agar humne tumhe choda hota to aap ka ustruck ke

Sath accident ho jata… bahot achese shukriya kaha hein tumne humhe

Galiyaan dekar…..

Manyata : udayveer vo mein…

Udayveer cuts of manyata's sentence….

Udayveer : manyata bahot der ho gayi hai, humhe chalna chahiye…

Uday goes away angrily and manyata feels very bad for her behaviour. While going back to mahal they don't speak a word to each other…. Finally they reach mahal, manyata goes into her room to freshen up. After 10 mins manyata comes out and asks about udayveer….

Manyata : soono tumnhe pata hai ki udayveer kaha hai??

Maid: rajkumari ji Yuvraaj udayveer to apne ghar chale gaye…

Manyata: acha thike(maid goes)

Manyata calls Unnati…

Manyata:hello unnati

Unnati:han bolo manyata kya hua??

Manyata:unnati kyat um plz mujhe apne ghar le ja sakti ho??

Unnati:par kya hua??

Manyata : mein sabh gadi mein samjhati hu na plz…….

Unnati: thike thike I'll be there in 10 mins…

Manyata explains everythinto unnati while dey reach Uday's house…

Unnati: is waqt dada gusse mein hai iska matlab vo jarur unke kamre mein ya phir terrace

Pein honge….

Manyata: thike mein jakar dekhti hun…..

When manyata reaches uday's room she sees all broken glasses and blood but uday was not there. She goes to terrace and sees uday there…. Uday was very sad….was about to cry…and blood was coming out from both his arms and also had got hurt on his chest as if he had jumped in those glases…….

Manyata: Udayveer………

She goes near him and tears start coming out of her eyes after realizing how much he had hurt him…

Uday turns his back to manyata so she doesn't see his wounds……

Udayveer: ab yaha kya karne aayi ho manyata humhe bachi kuchi galiyaan sunane??

Manyata doesn't utter a word and goes near him and turns his face and body towards her. Then she picks up uday's arm and folds his jacket up to see the wounds. Uday gets confused that what was manyata doing exactly.

Then again without saying anything she goes from there and brings a first aid box….same time majnu comes down of uday's house to take revenge for morning and sees that manyata was taking of uday's jacket…………but he didn't know dat she was so doing so just to clean up uday's wounds….majnu gets angry and goes away…….from there…. Then slowly manyata brings uday with her and makes him sit on the couch on the terrace….. she takes uday's arm and is about to out medicine when uday takes his hand back.. manyata takes uday's face in both her palms…

Manyata:abhi bhi gussa ho na mujhse??

Uday doesn't speak anything. Manyata holds her ears…

Manyata: udaybeer mujhe maaf kardo.

Still uday is not convinced, then manyata starts crying. Uday sees her and notices dat she was really crying……..

Udayveer: manyata kyun ro rahi ho manyata stop crying hum tumse gussa nahi hai..

Ok! Plz stop crying……

Manyata still doesn't stop crying. Udayveer takes her face in his palms now..

Manyata: ye sab meri wajah se hua hai na uday na mein tumhe galat samhajti na tumhe

itna bura lagta aur nahi ye sab hota…….

Udayveer : manyata aisa kuch nahi hai..plz rona band karo. Aur ye lo mera hath tum ise davai laga rahi hi na ab lagaogi??

Manyata nods her head and cleans uday's arm wounds and then it was time to clean uday's wound which was on his chest……

Uday closes her eyes while manyata was cleaning her chest wound…….

Manyata: uday tum yahi betho mein tumhare liye pani lati hun…..

<manyata leaves>

Udayveer: maa pata hei jabse aap gayi hai mene sabka khayal rakha par mujhe aisa koi

Koi nahi mila jo mera khayal rakh sake….. sabke bas ek hi xheej humse judi

Vo hein ummide or naki pyar….

Achanakse pichese manyata aati hai and uday ka hath pakadti hai…

Manyata: main hoon na uday….

Udayveer: manyata tum??

Manyata touches his cheeks…

Manyata: baki sab ki tarah meri thodi na tumse koi ummide judi hai…aur vese bhi dost

Dost hun to dosti to nibhani padegi na……….

Udayveer's tears fell off and he hugs manyata tightly and closes his eyes…

Udayveer: thank you manyata…….thank you so much….

Then manyata takes udayveer to the room and make him sleep and manyata sits besides him……….. udayveer sleeps and manyata watches him blankly and smiles………

Jab uday gehri neend mein hota hai to rol hote hote he cums and and sleeps o manyata's laps and manyata uth jati hai…….. she moves her hand through uday's hair……

Manyata:

PATA HAI UDAY AAJ TUMHE ITNA JAJBADI DEKHKAR MUJHE BAHOT ACHA LAGA……….. TUM BAHOT ACHE HO UDAY BAHOT ACHE……….

~mahi~
do cumment guyz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
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awsomeee...amazing epi. love it update soon tahnx for PM.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Too good Mahi 👍🏼 Loved it !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
vo to hme pehle se hi pta h...uday bht acha h...ye manyata ka dimag bekaaar h kuch samajh me hi ni ata h..or ata b h to bdi der m..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
I hope manyata realizes that she lives uday soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
again awesome mahi loved how manyata realized her mistake and went to udays house... omg uday hurt himself so much thank god manyata reached there and didnt see that pakash at the mahal i like how uday rolled over to manyata lap in his sleep update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Awesome update. Loved it. Very nice.

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