MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

sorry yar i know s its too late but i'll give two driz episodes together

but when??????

🤣 🤣 Mahi fantastic, beautiful, awesome, fabulous episodes jus read all three episodes together..👏 👏 👏 very well written ...👍🏼 my fav. scene..Majnu n UV's convo..🤣

Hy mahi awosum,amezing update..
. great job Mahi. amazing,
sorry for the late comment
I jus love it
yaar...
Manyata-UV's convo
fabulous.
Thanks for the pm
update next episode i m watng...

Pari

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

🤣 🤣 Mahi fantastic, beautiful, awesome, fabulous episodes jus read all three episodes together..👏 👏 👏 very well written ...👍🏼 my fav. scene..Majnu n UV's convo..🤣

Uday:hello Majnu keso ho tum?

Pakash: mudde pe aa udayveer''

Udayveer: han han majnu jara dhire itni bhi kya jaldi hai??

Pakash:dekh uday mere pas tere is faltu badbad keliye time nahi hai samjhe tum??

Udayveer:han han majnu to soono tujhe lagta hain na ki manyata,oh sorry tumhari moniya humare sath jabardasti aa rahi hai?chinta mat karo vo humare sath date par bhi jaa rahi hai par apni marji se'''.han aur ek aur baat tumhari ye jo brand new nokri lagi hai na who bhi hamari oh sorry manyata ki vajahse lagi hai. Vo kehte hai na tumhare chawl wale style mein "KYA MAJNU CHOKRI BHI TERI AUR NOKRI BHI TERI HUM ESA KESE HONE DE SAKTE HEIN?"

Then uday cuts off the phone'

Pakash:uday uday kutte sun.

You did a great job Mahi. 👍🏼really amazing, sorry for the late comment but today I got sometime so I read it..😊 but I jus love it yaar.😉 All three episodes were fantabulous..👏 Manyata-UV's convo n when Manyata was cleaning his wounds that scene was fabulous.😛

Thanks for the amazing episodes n Pls update next episode ASAP n PM me k.

Great work.👍🏼😊

🤗 🤗

awww thank u so so much...

Originally posted by: maneet..

Hy mahi awosum,amezing update..
. great job Mahi. amazing,
sorry for the late comment
I jus love it
yaar...
Manyata-UV's convo
fabulous.
Thanks for the pm
update next episode i m watng...

Pari

awww thanks alot pari😃

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 4'. <3 <3 <3 <3 Manveer

That whole day uday doesn't speak with manyata and manyata's very upset becuz of him' the next day uday is speaking to dadisa, manyata knows that uday will ignore her if she is alone so she went in front of dadisa'

Dadisa: are manyata beta aap? Hum abhi uday se aaphi ke bare mein bat kar rahe the kher

Chodiye aap yaha??

Manyata: mataaji aaj mujhe clas nahi jana to please kya mein uday ke sath thodi der

Bahar jaa sakti hun??

Uday: lekin dadisa manyata ke classes jyada important hai na? humhe nahi lagta ki unhe

Hamare sath jana chahiye''.

Dadisa:koi baat nahi uday hum manyata ke classes shift kardenge aap dono bahar jaiye..

Manyata: shukriya mataaji'

(She playfully asks uday lifting her eyebrows up and wicked smile)

" chale yuvraaj udayveer singh??"

(uday angrily nods his head)

LATER WHEN UDAY SEES MANYATA COMING DOWN FROM STAIRS HE IS ASTONIDHED TO SEE HER. BECUZ SHE WAS WEARING THE DRESS UDAY HAD GAVE HER FOR THE DATE'.

Manyata: chale uday

Uday nods and they sit in the jeep. Uday angrily'.

Uday: chal to tumne achi kheli rajkumari manyata lekin believe me iska koi faida nahi ho

Ga'''. Tumhe kya laga ki mujhe ese bahar lakar tum mujhe manalogi??

Manyata: manalungi? Par meri galti hi kya hai??

Uday angrily stops the jeep'

Uday: are wah princess,bhul gayi tum kya kaha tha tumne aa let me recall, han yad aya

Holi ke pehle hi kisine mujhse kaha tha ki han uday mein tumhare sath date pein

Chalungi yad aya princess?? Aur jab akash ne bakheda khada kar diya to tumne

Humhe hi ulta sidha keh diya aur tum chahti ho ke hum tumse naraj nah un?

Tumne mujhe samaj kya rakha hai princess khilona? Ek pal mujhe pass bula leti

Hon aur doosre hi pal mujhe ulta sidha kehkar door kar deti ho??

Manyata hugs uday

Manyata:mujhe maaf kardo us waqt mein gusse mein thi isiliye''..SORRY'.

UDAY SMILES AND SAYS THAT IT WAS OK'.

Manyata: are yaar uday tu to bada sona munda hai mein tujhe itna gussa dilate hun aur

Phir ek bar mein mafi mangti nahi hun to tu phir se pehle jesa ho jata hai'han

Han nahi to''..

Uday blushes'.

Uday: are princes tumhe iski vajah pata hai lekin lagta hai tum hamre muh se sunana

Chahti ho??

Manveer was still hugging each other and manyata realizes that and moves back

Manyata: kya wajah?

Uday: acha to apko nahi pata ki humhe tum pasand ho han??

Manyata: aur tum mujhe bilkul bhi nahi'

Uday: aur isiliye toh tum mujhe aur bhi jyada pasand hona'.

A small eyelock between manveer both of them blushing'.

Uday: princess ab tumne ghumne ki ijajat le hi li hai to bata dijiye ki kaha chalna hai??

Manyata: chalo date pein'

Uday: (shocked) kya?

Manyata: han sach mein vese bhi us din akash ke vajah se mein apna vada pura nahi kar

Payi, toh aaj kar deti hun'

Uday: aap ka hokum sarakho pein princess'..vese humne tumhe ek baat batai kya

Princess??

Manyata: konsi baat.???

Uday hold manyata's hand and smiles'..

Uday: ke tum bahot bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho'..

Manyata: shukriya vese hum ja kaha rahe hai??

Uday: hein ek jagah lekin surprise hai'.

Manyata: achaa'esa kya khas hai us jagah??

Uday: voh to tum dekhi hi logi'.

Manveer reach a spot jaha pein mountain ka end hai aur niche ek bahot khubsurat valley hai' ofcourse is baar bhi uday ne akash ko jalaane ka moka nahi choda so he had already called paksh there'''

Manyata: wow'..uday yeh bahot khubsurat jagah hai'.meine esi jagah pehle kabhi nahi

Dekhi han nahi to''..

Uday: humhe pata tha princess apko yeh jagah bahot pasand aegiii''

Tabhi vaha akash ata hai'.vo chupta hai taki manveer use na sekhe par uday use dekhi leta hai ''.

Akash ko jalaane ke liye vo manyata ke karib jakar uska hath pakad leta hai'..

Manyata looks in uday's eyes and smiles' uday moves more closer to her and manyata starts moving back' esa karte karte voh ek ped se takra jate . voh ped us mountain ke kinare pe hota hai'.. akash ko manyata par gussa ata hai aur uday se voh jelousy use bahot mehengi padti hai'''.voh gusse mein dotda hua ata hai aur jab manveer piche mudne hi vale hote hai to voh un dono ko valley mein dhakel deta hai'..

Manyata girte waqt waha ki ek ped ke jad ko pakadleti hai aur uday manyata ka per pakad ta hai'''..

Manyata sees akash and is shocked'

Manyata: akash yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?? Bachao mujhe '.

Akash: nahi moniya kyun bachau mein tumhe mere sath dhoka karne keliye?? Ek baat

Kan kholke sunlo moniya tum meri nahi ho saki to mein tumhe is uday ka bhi

Nahi hone dunga''..tum dono maroge'.

Manyata: akash ye tum''

Uday cuts off''..

Uday:dekho akash esi koi baat nahi hai'please hum dono ko upar khincho'.

Akash: are sale uday tu abhi tak yahi hai mujhe laga tu niche gir gaya''.

Manyata:akash please humhe upar khicho mein tumhe sab samjhati hun''.

Akash manyata ka hath pakad ta hai lekin use uthakar chod deta hai'''..manveer valley mein gir jate hai'''..aur akash vaha se nikal jata hai''.

Manveer niche girte hue ek dusre ko tightly pakadlete hai.unhe bahot chot lagti hai.. voh dono roll hote hote niche girte hai'.. aur sir pe chot an eke vajah se dono behosh ho jaate hai''

Tin char ghante baad manyata ko hosh ata hai. Uday uske side mein padah hotah hai'..par voh abhi bhi behosh hai'..

Manyata: uday'.. uday utho please utho na uday'''

Manyata shakes uday but he doesn't come to consciousness, then she checks his breathing and is relieved to know that uday was still alive'.

She takes uday's head on her lap'and ties her dupatta on uday's head so that his bleeding stops'.when she sees in her surrounding she sees its all dark and dense forest everywhere. She gets scared when it starts raining. Uday's body responses to the rain drops that were falling and slowly comes to consciousness'..

Manyata:uday akhein kholo uday'..

Slowly uday opens his eyes nd tries to get up'..manyata helps him get up and supports his back by letting him sit across a tree''

Uday: ma'manyata tum thik to ho na??

Manyata: (very scared) han han main thik hun'..

Manyata starts crying and hugs uday tightly''''.uday moves manyata's head aside from her face and kisses her on her fore head'and wipes of her tears'.

Uday: rona nahi princess hum hai na tumhare sath hum tumhe yahan se jaldi nikal lenge'

Manyata keeps her head on uday's chest and calms herself down'. Uday puts his arms around manyata'..

Uday: hum tumhe kuch nahi hone denge princess ye vada hai hamara'.

Then uday gets up and manyata is sitting down with her head between her knees'sobbing

Uday removes his phone and finds range and calls dadisa'

Uday:hello dadisa(uday's voice shaking)

Dadisa: uday beta kahan hai aap??

Uday: dadisa hum bahot badi mushkil mein phase hein'.(uday tells everything to dadisa in short)

Dadisa:aap bilkul bhi chinta''.. (phone cuts off'.no range)

Uday angrily throws away the phone'..

Uday: damn it! I hope dadisa jaldi madat bhejengi''

KYA HOGA MANVEER KA? KYA PAKAASH KI YEH HARKAT LAEGI UDAY MANYATA KO KAREEB?? KYA MANVEER BACHENGE ?? JANANE KE LIYE AGLA IMAGINARY EPISODE JARROOOR PADHNA,'''''.!!

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 MANVEER

Dadisa ne police team ko jaldi kam par lagaya aur sab parivar valon ko khabar kardi…….

Dadisa: chahe kuch bhi ho kamishnar sahib hamare poti aur uday ko jaldi dhoondiye…

Commissioner: mein abhi sari police force ko us valley mein bhejta hu. Ap befikar rahiye

Rajmataaji hum rajkumari manyata aur yuvraj udayveer ko jaldi dhoond

Lenge……….

In the jungle manveer is all alone, no help, no food, no shelter…. Manyata is sitting the same head between her knees and uday is standing besides her thinking what to do next. Then he sees manyata sobbing and goes near her…uday lifts manyata's face and keeps her hands on her cheeks…..

Uday: manyata plz mat ro na……

Manyata: udayveer mein isliye nahi ro rahi kyunki hum yaha fase hai,mein to isiliye ro

Rahi hu kyunki jis insane pe maine khud se bhi jyada bharosa karti thi usi ne

Aaj meri jaan leni ki kosh ki…….

Uday manyata ka hath pakad ke use khada karta hai. Phir uske muh pe aye hue bal hatate uske asoon pochta hai…

Uday:akash ko to koi nahi bacha sakta khas ki humse…….. usne hamari princess ko jo

Taklif pohchai hai use uska anjam to bhugatna hi hoga…..aur vese bhi tum to

Humari jhansi ki rani ho na to itni jaldi rondu rani mat bano… dekho princess

Himmat rakhni hogi aur uske bad hum Akash se badla lenge don't worry….ok?

Manyata: tum sach mein bahot ache ho uday….han nahi to…

MANYATA HUGS UDAY TIGHTLY…….

Uday: bas bas… ab meri jungli sherni chale yaha se……

Manyata: mein sherni to tu kya?? JUNGLI BANDAR?? Han nahi to……

Uday: tum dekh lena princess yeh jungli Bandar bahot jaldi is jungli sherni ka

Jungli sher ban jaega aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega….han nahi toh…

MANYATA PLAYFULLY GIVES A PUNCH ON HIS ARM…..

Manyata: line marne ka chance toh tu kabhi chodega nahi na YUVRAAJ UDAYBEER??

Uday: oh plz, hum line marenge vo bhi tumpe??? Humhe samaj kya rakha hai??

MANYATA LIFTS HER EYEBROW AND UDAY SMILES WICKEDLY….

Manyata: acha….

Uday: han han Huh mana kit um humari sabse favourite ho par tumhare jese to kahi

Milenge hume…

Manyata feels a strange anger in herself…

Manyata:thike to jao aur un ladkiyon ke piche bhago mera picha chod do han nahi toh…

She starts turning away angrily when uday holds her hand and pulls her towards him.

Uday:humne ye kaha priness ki apke jese to kahi milenge humhe par humhe chahiye to

Tum hi na…

Manyata blushes and then looks in his eyes….

Manyata: kyun?

Uday playfully rolls his hand in her hair

Uday:kyunki aaj tak kisi bhi ladki ne humhe halkat,veda,kutta nahi kaha na..

Manyata:acha halkat vede kutte ab chale yaha se??

Uday:han ha chalo jaha tak humhe pata hai yaha aas paas koi nadi hai,,,chale

Manyata:nahi chal sakte…

Uday:par kyun??

Manyata:tune itni der se mujhe pakad jo rakha hai…vede chodega nahi to hilungi kese??

Uday(smiles):oh….

Manyata: jab tu mujhe chodne ka irada banaega na tab mujhe jaroor batana han nahi toh...

Uday: princess hamara bas chale to hum sari zindagi tumhe ese pakde rahe….

Manyata: acha….

She punches him on his arm and uday pulls her more closer… uday gets serious then….

Uday: sach mein princess… hum majak nahi kar rahe…

Manyata suddenly gets upset…

Manyata: uday chalo chalte hai yaha se mujhe lagta hai ke hame raat isi jungle mein

Gujarni padegi…..thand bhi bahot hai……chalo kahi pe jake achi jagah

dhoondte hai plz…

Uday: princess yeh tum…. ( uday reads manyata's face and sees that she is upset and also

Understands the reason AKASH) acha baba thike chalo chalet hai..

Uday removes his arms from around manyata's shoulder and holds her hand tightly. Manyata tries to remove her hand but uday holds it very tightly…..

Uday: princess hume nahi pata ki tumhe tumhari jan pyari hai ya nahi lekin hamre liye

Vo bahot pyari hai…isiliye hum nahi chahte ke tum is jungle mein gum jao…..

Aur jaha tak hame tumhare bare mein pata hai problems tumhare paas nahi balki

Tum problems ke paas chali jati ho han nahi toh…..

He says this playfully but manyata gives no response to do this not even a smile…..then they start walking in the jungle all alone…..

Uday understands that manyata needs to be alone. Now in that jungle he can't leave her alone…. So he keeps quite… they walk for almost 2 hours…then reach a place somewhere in the middle of the jungle…

Uday:manyata tum thodi der yaha betho hum thodi lakdiya aur khane keliye kuch milega

To late hai……

Manyata:(still sad) thike uda jaldi ao….

Uday nods and then leaves to find out wood and some food…. There manyata thinks in mind…

"Hey bhagvan ye kis mushkil mein dal diya mujhe aapne…jis insaan ko mene khud se bhi jyada pyaar dena chaha, aaj usi ne mujhe marne ki koshish ki…. Aur jis insaan se mene hamesha bura bartab kiya aaj vi meri jaan bacha raha hai akhir kyun bhagvan??"

Uday comes back with some wood and berries he found in the jungle. He sees manyata and says in mind……

"Ye kya ho gaya hai tumhe princess. Tum ese depression mein… (He sighs) AKASH VERMA iski kimat to tujhe chukani hi padegi….."

He goes and sits near manyata. Arranges the wood and lits fire….. he offers manyata those berries par vo nahi khana chahti thi…. (uday annoyed)

Uday: princess bachpana mat kijiye khaiye in berries ko vese bhi tumhne dopeher se kuch

Khaya nahi hai….

Manyata: nahi udaybeer tum khalo mujhe bhook nahi hai….

Then uday angrily keeps those berries aside…

Uday:thike tum nahi khaogi to hum bhi nahi khaenge hum inhe phek dete hai….

Uday angrily tries to get up when manyata pulls him back… she picks a berry from uday's hand aur vo uday ko khilati hai…uday does the same….

Uday(happy):ye hui na good girl wali baat princess…..

(manyata tries to give a smile but fails..)

Uday (worried):princess dekho hum jante hai kit um bahot upset ho…par ese chup rehne

Se kya hoga??? (uday then holds manyata's face) princess tum jinta is

Baat ko apne man mein dabaogi utna hi tum man hi man mein ghut ti

Rahogi…

Manyata: to mein kya karu udaybeer (now about to cry)

Uday: apne dil ki baat humse share karo….dost ko apne man ki baat batane se man halka

Ho jata hai…. Tumhe acha lagega…

Then manyata is not able to control herself….she hugs uday tightly and starts crying….

Manyata:ye kya ho gaya uay jis insaan keliye mene apne parivar tak ko choda aaj usi ne...

Uday: manyata hum samajh sakte hai ki is waqt tumhare dil par kya bit rahi hai…

Manyata: nahi uday tum nahi samajh sakte tumne kabhi kisise pyaar nahi kiya…..

Now uday becomes upset and background music starts…

"milke bhi, hum na mile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke,
Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun
Anjaane, hai silsile
Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai
Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnn…

Kaise batayein Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein Baatein dil o ki

Dekho jo baki Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaa.. Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaa.. Tu jaane na"

Uday is almost about to cry but he waves of his emotions…….

Uday: princess rat bahot ho gai hai tumhe so jana chahiye…

Uday removes his hands from manyata's face……when howling of the wolves starts….. manyata gets very scared and moves closer to uday…

Uday: are daro mat princess… tum ek kam karo hamare lap pein sar rakh ke so jao dar

Nahi lagega….

Manyata feels a bit uncomfortable sleeping on his lap but she does as he says….after a while uday sees at manyata and thinks that shez asleep par asal mein she had just closed her eyes….and was listening to each and evry voice around her wid her eyes closed…

Then uday moves his hand over manyata's hair…..

Uday: bahot asani se keh diya na tumne princess ki humne kabhi kisise pyaar nahi kiya…

(uday's tears fall now….)

I LOVE YOU MANYATA….I LOVE YOU

(and the background music starts…)

Nigahon mein dehko, Meri jo hai bas gaya aa
Woh hai milta tumse hubahoo.
Jaane teri aankhein, Kiya baatein ki vajah…
Huye tum jo dil ki aarzoo
Tum paas ho ke bhi, Tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi, Apne nahin aise hai
Hum ko gile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke
Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun ooonnn….
Tu jaane na aaa.. Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaa.. Tu jaane na

hufff finally updated do cumment guyz...😃😳

res😃

Awosum update mahi.
bas***d akash,usko bi gira deti na paani me...

Akash pitega thik se...kamina.
manvees secen was lovely in jeep...
thanx 4 pm...
nd sng haayee osum h..
pari

kaash ye actual me show hota,,,,,

Great I wish manyata realizes that she loves uday
I'm a little confused why uday was mad
And wat happen on holi
Can't wait till the next update