MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14

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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

it's really good update
i m sad cuz manayta ne uday ko galat samjha and aksh ko sahi:@
and it's really really niceee👍🏼
and sooryy
for late comment

and i think u know the reasonit's really good update
😊

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.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

That was an amazing update...
But you separated Manveer not good at all...

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DaddyzPwincess

@DaddyzPwincess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

omg wat just happen
hate that akash
please get manveer back together
please !!!!!!!!!!

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Nabzz

@nabs4ak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

plzzz update sooon Mahi..

waiting 4 ur new update nd plz do pm me 😊

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 12 years ago

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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

yaar
when are u goona update nexttt
chappp
???????????

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

finally finished reading the parts that I had missed and loved it especially when manveer had confessed their love to each other,,, img y is this villain pakash back cant believe that manyata believed him hope she realises her mistake soon and everything gets sorted between manveer please update soon and thanks for the pm

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 15 <3 <3 <3 MANVEER

Every body come to know what happened. Manyata had locked herself in room and was crying bitterly. Unnati comes in her room banging the door loudly. Manyata shocked seeing the anger on her face. She goes and hugs unnati. But unnati pushes her back forcefully.

Manyata: unnati…

Unnati:(so angry that her tears fall) tum bahot buri or matlabi ho manyata….

Manyata: unnati meine kuch galat nahi kiya….

Unnati: chin liya tumne humare dada ko hum sabse… kya tumne ek baar bhi dada ko batane ki taklif ki, ki akash jinda hai??

Manyata: kyun batau use taki vo firse akash ko marne ki koshish kare….

Unnati: kya kabhi tumne dada se sacha pyaar kiya?? Kya tumne unse puchne ki koshish ki , ki kya sachme unhone esa kiya??bas unhe bhala bura kaha aur waha se jane ke liye kaha…..

Manyata realizes what she had done….: unnati voh….

Unnati cuts off: chodo na manyata ab vese bhi is sab ka kya faida iska anjaam to hum sabko bhugatna padega….

Manyata: matlab….

Unnati very very upset: matlab ye yuvrani manyataji ki dada hum sabko chodke jaa rahe hai shayad hamesha keliye…..

Manyata shocked :kya… ye tu kya keh rahi hai unnati…??

Unnati sits on bed crying… manyata goes and sits near her…

Manyata: kya hu hai unnati???

Unnati is tellink everything…

Unnati: jab hum dada ke room mein gaye tab unke sharir se bahot khun beh raha tha hum unke paas gaye unke ghavon par dava lagane keliye lekin… she starts crying bitterly….

Manyata: lekin kya unnati??

Unnati: voh….

~FLASHBACK~

Unnati and uday in room….

Unnati:dada apke sharir se bahot khun beh raha hai… laiye mein ise dava lagati hun….

Uday: nahin choti hume ye ghav taja rakhne hai taki hum yaad rakhe ki iske aage kisi pe bhi vishwas na rakhe….

Unnati: dada kya hua hai apko…

Uday:choti jao yaha se hume packing karni hai….

Unnati: par dada aap jaa kaha rahe hai vo bhi is halat mein??

Uday:halat ne hi to majboor kiya hai na choti….hum Canada ja rahe hai shayad hamesha keliye…

Unnati: crying…. Nahi dada aap hume ese chodke nahi ja sakte….

Uday:choti hume jana hai 2 ghante mein hamari flight hai…

Unnati: humareliye nahi par apke praja ka kya??

Uday: hum Canada se sab dekhlenge choti…

Unnati: dada…

Uday: choti ro mat hum tumhe Canada se phone karenge….

Unnati: mat jaiye na dada please…

~ BACK TO PRESENT~

Unnati: almost begging… please dada ko rok lo manyata…

Manyata's tears fall:unnati abhi uday ke flight ke liye adha ghanta hai chalo chalte hai…

They rush to the airport. To reach airport it took 15 mins… they had left only 15 mins to find uday….after searching for 5 mins manyata sees uday…..but he had entered the security section where no person was allowed without a ticket…manyata tries to get through that door but the security gaurds block her….she calls uday.. uday sees the phone and cuts it….manyata shouts for uday but he doesn't hear her…. And this is it… she lost uday… uday went to Canada maybe forever…. Unnati finds manyata…manyata full broken…

Unnati: manyata…

Manyata shocked : humne use kho diya…. Vo hume chodke chala gaya hamesha keliye…

Unnati and manyata return home crying. They tell everyone what happened on airport….manyata goes in her room and sits still shocked and the music starts….

Kyun chuph gaya hai, akhiyon ko meechay
Sharm-o-haya ke pardon ke peechay
Kyun chuph gaya hai, akhiyon ko meechay
Sharm-o-haya ke pardon ke peechay
Apne sanam se parda hai kaisa
Jab ke khuda se parda nahi
Mera jeena hai kya, marna hai kya, jab saath tera nahi
Paake rab kya karun, jab tu hi mera nahi

The scene changes to plane….. uday is sitting looking at his and manyata's childhood pic….and almost teary the music starts…..

Teri Yaadon Mein Likhte Jo Lafz Dete Hai Sunaai
Beete Lamhe Poochhte Hain Kyun Hue Aise Juda.. Khuda,
Khuda Mila Jo Yeh Faisla Hain
Khuda Tera Hi Yeh Faisla Hain
Khuda Hona Tha Woh Ho Gaya
Jo Tune Thha Likha

3-4 months pass…. Manyata and uday's family had almost recovered from this… no one had any news about uday…everyone started living a normal life… manveer chapter was closed completely….manyata and AKASH started dating again….manyata was happy with AKASH….

~3 YEARS LATER~

" CHOTI HUM KUCH DINO KELIYE WAPAS GHAR AA RAHE HAI… PAR SIRF KUCH DIN…."

Unnati comes dancing in rajmahal after reading this message…..

Komal: beta kya hua….

Unnati: spins komal and sees manyata…

Manyata: kya hua….

Unnati: manyata dada..dada wapas aa rahe hai…

Manyata: kya par kyun???

Unnati: manyata 3 saal hogaye dada ko gaye hue akhir us airport esa kya hua jot um unse itni nafrat karti ho??

Manyata: wajah job hi ho… mujhe uski shakal bhi nahi dekhni….

She goes from there…

Unnati: aunty komal kya aap manyata se?

Komal: don't worry beta hum manyata se baat karke dekhte hai…. Vese uday ka ane wale hai??

Unnati: kal subah…. Acha aunty chalti hu dada ke swagat ki tayari karni hai…aunty komal manyata esi ek hi insaan hai jo dada ko wapas jane se rok sakti hai….

Komal nods … unnati goes from there and komal goes in manyata's room… manyata is sitting on the bed crying with uday's pic in her hand…komal goes near her…

Komal: manyata aap uday….

Manyata cuts off…:maa please mujhe uday ke bare mein koi baat nai karni hai….

Komal: par beta hume apke nafrat ki wajah to bataiye…please apko humari kasam…

Manyata: maa mein uday se vo akash wale incident se gussa nahi hu…pata hai jab mein airport gayi tab meine use phone kiya tha aur usne who phone kaat diya…agar us din usne vo phone uthaya hota to shayad aaj….

She leaves the sentence incomplete…

Komal: kya aap abhi bhi unse pyaar karti hai??? (no answer) manyata hume jawab dijiye….

Manyata: han han…. Karti hun mein use pyaar…

Manyata hugs komal tightly cryin….akash was standing outside the door and had heard each and every word…and was angry….

KYA AKASH CHALEGA PHIRSE KOI NAI CHAL????

~MAHIMA~

GUYZ YE STORY TUM SABKO PASAND NAHI HAI KYA?? ATLEAST NAHI HAI TOH BATA DO NA.ILL CLOSE THIS AND START A NEW 1... BORE HAI KYA??

IM GETTING VERY VERY POOR RESPONSE... PLZ GUYS BATAO MUJHE...😭😭😭😭

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Mahi ... tune kya kiya😕?

After their fallout , I was so sure that they'll patch up in this part😳. But NO - U DIDN'T LET THAT HAPPEN😡!!!! U sent him away ... and to top that - U got Manyata and Akash dating again ... YUCK!!! But , I loved Unnati here😃 . She was awesome ... I could picture her confronting Manyata - that was a great scene👏. Yipppeee - Uday is coming back home (so what if it's after 3 years🥱) . But make sure , he STAYS here now😉.

Manyata's confession in the end was AWWW !!!!!!!!! It put a huge smile on my face😃!

It was an awesome episode Mahi 👍🏼

Mera PM kahan hain ???

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princess369

@princess369

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

really nice prt hope manveer come together again with each other nd hope their misunderstandings also get clear soon. And plz plz plz update next prt of ur other story also waiting...

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