MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
yay finally u updated and also gave us two amazing parts to read.. loved each and every bit... for the first time im liking akash for what he did by telling manveer the truth and i loved the plan and how manveer met after that... thank god they will be spending time together in canada really cant wait for the next part... and i hope u update without pain lo love soon... update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was superb!
Loved it to the core!
Double updates wow!
It was a cute and sweert update.
Atleast majnu kahi pai to kaam ayaa.
Manveer scenes were awesome.
Loved the way they were troubling manyata by telling her that uday won't be taking her to canada.
Great job mahi.
Beautifully written.
Eagerly waiting for the next update so continue asap.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
helloo❤️
how are you (😆pata han well hi hogi😆) pagal...😉
phale ya bata itne acha sochti kaise han??😲😲
itne ideas ate kaha se han apke pass??😳😳😳
budhi hogayi lakin abhi bhi story full on😉😉😉😉
wah wah wah wah wah wah wah👏👏👏👏👏👏
lakin itne time hogaya abhi tak update kaha han😡
now come to updates
omg it's rocking amazing😊😊😊😊
i m fall in love ur writting style
yar no words i m speechless
yar kiya bolo smajh nai araha han mujhe
uff yar ab update dede
n uday tu kamal han smirk haye mai marjawa
lovely manyata so innocent n nice
love action sab dal diya maza agaya
yar tu tu sach mai awsum han mahi
love your...(kiya laga tujhse nooo) i love your story ahahhahahah ...
chal ab jaldi update de warna mai tera khoon kardogi maine comment kiya now tu update de plz warna ab mujhe gussa araha han😡😡😡😡😡
bdw loved it
hugs🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NaughtyDreamGal

helloo❤️HI
how are you (😆pata han well hi hogi😆) pagal...😉hehehehe tu bhi pagal!!😃😃😃
phale ya bata itne acha sochti kaise han??😲😲buddhi ka dimag hai behen expirience se bhara pada hai!!!!
itne ideas ate kaha se han apke pass??😳😳😳hehehehe tujhse hi churaye!!
budhi hogayi lakin abhi bhi story full on😉
wah wah wah wah wah wah wah👏hehehehehehehehe😆😆
lakin itne time hogaya abhi tak update kaha han😡
now come to updateshan yar dungi jald!!
omg it's rocking amazing😊thanks yar!!
i m fall in love ur writting styleawww...
yar no words i m speechlessfinally... hehehehe😆
yar kiya bolo smajh nai araha han mujhe
uff yar ab update dedejaldi dungi...
n uday tu kamal han smirk haye mai marjawa
lovely manyata so innocent n nice
love action sab dal diya maza agayayeah original show mein kam tha toh bas aur mirch masala daal diya!!
yar tu tu sach mai awsum han mahi
love your...(kiya laga tujhse nooo) i love your story ahahhahahah ...how rude!!!😲😲😲 hehehehehehe thanks re😆
chal ab jaldi update de warna mai tera khoon kardogi maine comment kiya now tu update de plz warna ab mujhe gussa araha han😡hawww kali maa shant jald dungi shaant maate shant!!
bdw loved it
hugs🤗thanks hugs!!


thanks for the lovely comment ayesha!
loved it loads!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing
please update the next episode as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY MAHI WERE ARE U
PLS CONTINUE
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Posted: 12 years ago
both update was fab...

thanx for pm...
pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow very nice updates cool
I like it all kahi cool updates yar
Tu buhot acha likhugi Han sach Mai
Write more please and spot pm me
Update fast can't wait more
I'f you not update then I will not give u comment
Please update kahi yar please
Loved it your update all very nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz
yaar
update next chap
soon
waitong for ur update plzzz
update
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Posted: 11 years ago
MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 18... MANVEER...
In rajmahal, uday comes in manyata's room and hugs her from back. Both standing in front of mirror...
Uday kisses on her back: hi princess packing ho gai??
Manyata doesn't give any reply so he sees in the mirror at her face... and sees tears coming from her eyes. He gets worried , he turns her back and takes her face in his palms... wiping off her tears...
Uday( worried): kya hua princess ro kyun rahi ho?? Ab to sab thik hai na to phir ye ansu kyun???
Manyata cries harder and hugs him tightly... uday makes her sit on the bed and he sits on his knees on the floor... holding manyata's hand in his...
Uday: kya hua...??
Manyata doesn't reply... so he sits on bed close to her and covers her in his arms keeping his one palm on her cheek...
Uday: manyata nai batana hai to mat batao par atleast rona band kardo...
He gets up and brings a glass of water...and makes her drink it and calms her down... manyata stops crying and rests her head on his shoulder getting covered fully in his arms...
Manyata sad: esi baat nahi hai uday...
Uday: nahi manyata... tumhe bhi apni khudki space chahiye... mein tumhe har baat me tokna ya tumhare har baat mein interfere nahi karna chahta ok...
Manyata: mere jindagi mein esi koi space nahiye jaha tumhare liye darwaaje band hai uday...akhir tum hi to ho jise mein apne life ki har baat bata sakti hu...
Uday says s nothing but plainly smiles and kisses her on her forehead.. both thought kitne dino bad nahi salo bad hum finally sath hai...both lost deeply in each other's ees...the music starts...
Soniyo, o soniyo
Tumhe dekhta hu to sochta hu bas yahi
Tum jo mera saath do, saare gham bhulake
Jee lu muskuraake zindagi
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat, tu bas de de mera saath
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat, tu bas de de mera saath
Manyata: tum bahot ache ho uday...meine tumhare sath itna sab kuch kiya tumhe itna dar pohchaya..(tears fall from her eyes) phir bhi tum...
Uday keeps his finger on her lips...
Uday(looking in her eyes): shhh... Manyata jo kuch bhi hua use ek bura sapna samajh ke bhul jao ok??
Manyata(crying): nahi uday mein...
Uday( interrupts):shh...manyata humne kaha na ki jo kuch bhi hua use ek bura sapna samajh ke bhul jao...
Their faces are very close to each other...uday takes manyata's face in his palms... Manyata still crying...he lightly rests his lips on hers...at first manyata is shocked at uday's reaction but then gs osn sweetness of that kiss...both wishing that moment shoul never end...then uday slowly moves back...
Uday with a evil smile:ab kesa lag raha hai princess?
But manyata is still lost in his face...
Uday: kya baat hai princess kis karke man nahi bhara???
Manyata's thought chain breaks:han... she punches uday on his chest...chal hat veda kahika..she says and hugs him...the music starts...
Tujh ko jo, paaya toh hai yeh lagta kyu
Baho me bas teri mehfooz hoon
Tujkh ko jo, paaya to hai ye lagta kyu
Baho me bas teri mehfooz hoon
Tum bano, saaya mera, zindagi mein aao
Zindagi bitaao bas yahi
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat
Tu bas de de mera saath
Tu bas de de mera saath
On airport...
Komal: beta pohachne ke baad hame phone jaroor karna...
Uday: aunty komal ap bilkul bhi chinta maat kijiye...
Manyata(happy and excited): maa ab jinta kyun kar rahi ho jab uday mere sath hai...ha par agar uday hi willan ban jaye to jaroor dar lagega...
Uday: acha mein willan... He acts of being angry...
Manyata: are gussa mat ho mere golu moluse gulab jamun...she says pulling his cheeks...
Everybody start laughing...
Uday: manyata tum bhi na ab chale warna late ho jaenge...
They say bye to everyone and go and sit in the plane...uday is looking at manyata with wondering eyes...
Manyata: kya ese kya dekh rahe ho??
Uday: tum kitni ajeeb ho na manyata...
Manyata: ajeeb matlab??
Uday: matlab usually jab koi ladki flight mein pehli baar bethti hai tab voh bahot dari hui hoti hai aur apne side wale ko tightly hug karleti hai...par tumhe to dekho...
Manyata(evil smile):uday dar lag raha hai to batao na mein tumhe pakadke beith jati hun...bahane kyun bana rahe ho han nahi to...
Uday: dar aur mujhe oh plz...
Dono opposite side mein faces turn karte hai aur thodi der baad ek dusre ko dekhke hasne lagte hai...
Phir uday phirse manyata ko apne arms mein cover kar leta hai...and kisses on her forehead...
Afterall they reach Canada...
Uday: who raha driver chale hamari miss han nahi to??
Manyata: chalo...
They reach uday's house in Canada...they are about to enter when the servant stops them...
Servant: sir who abhi utarke nahi hue...
Uday( shocked): kya par hamne tumse kaha than a ki...
Manyata: kya utarke nahi hua... uday plz jaldi chalo na mein bahot thak gai hun...
Uday gadbadahat mein: princess who gadi chabi mein hai...are ye hum kya bol rahe hai...mera matlab hai ki chabi gadi mein hai...
Manyata: nahi uday chabi mere paas hai tumne hi mujhe chabi di thi yaad hai??
Uday innocent funny face: acha...di thi... Ab hum kya kare...
Manyata opens the door enters inside and is shocked...
Uday closes his eyes and ears with his hands and say..." Ab chillaegi..."
But manyata was so shocked that tears come from her eyes...
She goes and hugs him tightly... uday shocked on her reaction...he opens his eyes and sees manyata crying and hiding her face in chest...he sees her innocently...uske sare ghar mein manyata k epics the hall se leke garden tak...something moves under manyata's manyata's legs she sees down uday still lost in her face...
Manyata shouts...: AAAsss...
Uday shocked: manyata kya hua???
Manyata: chuhe...
Uday: manyata hume chuha kyun bula rahi ho??
Manyata: pagal tum chuhe nahi wo dekho waha neeche chuha...
Helooks down at that chuha and says oh..
Uday: toh chilla kyun rahi ho??
Manyata: mujhe chuhon se nafrat hai...ab dekh kya rahe ho pakdo use...
Uday takes that chuha in his hands and smiles and says...
Uday: ye chuha nahi hamster hai manyata aur pata hai ye mera sabse acha dost hai...iska naam jayna...
He stops and bites his tongue...
Manyata: kya dost... uday tumhe koi insaan nahi mila dost banane keliye??aur chuha banaliya toh thik hai par uska naam mere behen ka hi naam mila tha rakhne keliye??
Uday smiling: oh cmon princess tum bhi janti ho aur hum bhi ki tumhari behen to chuhiye se bi batar hai...bichre hamster ki bhi izzat gai...
Manyata: uday tum na...she starts going from there...uday pulls her back..
Uday:gussa mat ho na princess tumhe pata hai na hum majak kar rahe the..
Manyata: tum aur tumhare majak gaye bhad mein...
Wo apne aap ko chudati hai phir servant use apna room dikhata hai...
Uday wahi darwaaje pe khada hai haste hue...music starts...
Raho me, tanha hu saath le chal yu
Sang tere safar poora karu
Raho me, tanha hu saath le chal yu
Sang tere safar poora karu
Kya kahu ae zindagi
Tu hai meri saans, rehna tu paas har ghadi
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat,
Tu bas de de mera saath,
Tu bas de de mera saath
~MAHIMA~

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