MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 13

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Great Episode

very nice loved it

thanks 4 de PM

thanks alot...😆

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Excellent update Mahi👏. Thoroughly enjoyed it. The dialogues between Manveer were superb. Please update the next part fast ... ... so we know that Uday will be just fine😉😳. Thanks 4 the PM😊.

aww thanks alot yar

Originally posted by: milhan

mahi finally tum ne update to kia...
a nysh update...
suspense han? ab to parhna e pare ga... :>
thnx for pm

ha yar kafi dino bad diya...

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

archu ye log marathi me bak bak kar rahe hai

han humlog marathi mein hi bak rahe the tumhe kese pata???😲

Originally posted by: pia.raha

hayee manveer moments were soo soo good,ek dusre ke upar girnaa,howw romnticcc!!!!!!! then uday ka gaana was hilariouss!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊 agla epsde jaldi denaa😆😆

ya jaldi dungi...😳

Originally posted by: -Zina-

very nice update mahi! loved it to the core!
but please don't make this long delay next time!

han yar pakka promise jaldi ungi thnks😃

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 7'. <3 <3 <3 <3 MANVEER''

Do din ho gaye manveer ko hospital mei laye hue''' In the hospital everyone are very tensed. Manyata is lying still unconscious in the hospital. Thode der bad use vo sab yad ane lagta hai jo jungle mein hua,aur vo dark e uthti hai aur jor se chillati hai. "uday.."

Manyata(scared): uday'''''.uday kaha hai??

Nurse: rajkumari ji plz shant ho jaiye'..

Manyata(angrily) :tumne soona nahi meine kya kaha uday kaha hai??

The nurse remains silent which makes manyata more worried' manyata pulls out all the salines from her hand and rushes out of the room searching for uday'. She sees komal and ds talking to the doctor and goes there'..

Komal: manyata beta aap bahar kyun aayi???

Komal and ds worried''

Manyata(crying now): ma' ma uday kaha hai??? (no1 answers) ma mataaji doctor

Sahib maine poocha ki uday kaha hai??? Koi jawab kyun nahi de

Raha kyan hua hai uday ko??

Then suddenly nurse starts shouting from ICU'.. doctor rushes inside and manyata goes behind him and sees uday. Uday was unable to breathe he was hurt all over his body and was in pain'..uska bahot sa khun bhi beh gaya tha'.. doctor uday ko injection dete hai taki uski breathing and body normally work kare'.. manyata ko uday ki ye halat dekh ke bahot bada sadma pahochta hai'' she starts crying badly and hugs komal'..

Ds:manyata beta kya aap thik hai??

Manyata: kese thik ho sakti hun mataaji, waha vo uday apni mot se lad raha hai aur aap

Mujhse puch rahi hai mein thik hun yan nahi??

Doctor comes out tensed'..

Manyata: doctor sahib mera uday thik to ho jaega na??

Both komal and ds shocked on the words "mera uday"

Doctor: dekhiye yuvraaj udayveer COMA mai hai'.. agle bahataar ghanton mein vo

Hosh mein aaye to thike varna kuch kaha nahi ja sakta''..

3 of them shocked. Giriraj who had jus arrived with a coffee in his hand drops it listening to doctor's word''..

Manyata : nahi esa nahi ho sakta ma kahiye na ins eke uday ko kuch nahi hua'..

Komal: manyata beta sambhaliye aapne aap ko'..

Ds: kya hum unse mil sakte hai??

Doctor: dekhiye unhe araam ki jaroorat hai'mein kisi ek ko hi andar bhej sakta hun'.

Aur han ek aur baat agar aap rajkumari manyata ko andar bhejenge to unke liye

Acha hoga'.

Giriraj: manyata ko par kyun doctor??

Doctor: dekhiye inhe jab yaha laya gaya tha aur jab mein inka ilaj kar raha tha tab vo sirf

Rajkumari ka naam le rahe the'.bahot pyaar karte honge who apse'.

Manyata(very very upset) :pyar to bahot karte hai bas mein hi samajh nahi payi'..

Doctor: kabhi kabhi esa hota hai ki patient hamare davaiyon ko respond nahi karte par

Jinse who sabse jyada pyaar karte hai unke pass hone se voh response dene ki

Koshish karte hai''''..

Giriraj: manyata beta aap hi andar jaiye'.ab aap hi hamari akhri ummid ho'.

Manyata nods her head aur vo andar chali jati hai'. Uday ko ese dekhke use apne ansuon par control nahi rehta'.manyata goes and sits near him and twins his fingers with her'.

Manyata(now crying badly): uday utho na plz utho na uday'. Ek baar ishara kardo ki

Tum meri baat sun rahe ho bas ek bar uday'.. bas ek baar

Ishara kardo'.tum mujhe ese chod ke nahi ja sakte'

Tumhari awaaj sunane ke liye taras gayi hun mai uday'

Agar aaj tumhe kuch hua na uday to mein apne aap ko

Kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti''.han nahi to'.. uday'

She now remembers all the moments with uday and music starts'.

Teri Nigahon ke , Teri hi raahon ke
Kareeb se gai zindagi
Tujhe kyun dekha na , Tujhe kyun jana na
Shikayatein karun ya nahi
Thami hai yeh saasein , Bhari hai yeh aanhkein
Sahu kaise abb yeh fasla
Bin Tere Bin Tere Bin Tereee
Koi khalish hai hawaon mein
Bin Tere

The whole day passes'..manyata sleeps in uday's room'agle subah vo room se bahar akar bhagvan ke murti ke paas jati hai'..

Manyata: bhagvan ji ye kya khel khel rahe ho aap mere sath?? Ek pal uday ki asli jagah

Mere jindagi mein dikhte ho ya kahu meri jindagi banate ho aur dus re hi pal'

Use mujhse juda kar rahe ho kyun'..???

Then manyata goes back to the room'. She keeps her both hands on uday's face... suddenly udays body becomes restless he is again unable to breathe'.

Manyata(scared): uday'.. doctor'. Doctor'.

Doctor comes in'..

Doctor: rajkumari ji aap plz bahaar jaiye'.

Manyata comes out'

Unnati: kya hua manyata??

Manyata: vo uday ko achanak saas lene keliye taklif hone lagi'..unnati use kuch hoga

Toh nahi na'.

Unnati: kuch nahi hoga dada ko manyata'. Hum dada ko achese jaante hai vo tumhe ese

Chodke Kabhi nahi jaenge'.

Unnati makes manyata sit'.on the bench'..adhe ghante baad doctor bahar ate hai'..

Manyata: (scared) uday'.

Doctor: (serious)ye kya kiya apne rajkumari ji'(manyata and unnati gets tensed'.) jo

kaam amare davaiya nahi kar saki vo kaam apne kardiya'..yuvraj udayveer ko

hosh agaya hai vo ab khatrese bahar hai'..

As soon as manyata enters'.. uday's face lights up'.she rushes towards him and hugs him tightly'. Uday was still weak to speak normally'. Manyata hugs him very tightly and starts crying'. Uday tries to lift his hands but fails'.. manyata moves back and takes uday's hand in her both hand and kisses it'..

Uday(blushing): princess please ro mat'. Hum tumhe rote hue nahi dekh sakte'.

Manyata: tumhe nahi pata hai uday ki tumhari awaaj sunke mujhe kitna acha laga'..

Uday: bas bas princess'. Abhi abhi COMA se bahar aye hai kahi apke aise bartaab se

Phir se COMA mein na'.

Before he could even complete his sentence'. Manyata keeps her hand on uday's lips'.and uday kisses on that hand'. Manyata blushes an eyelock moment between manveer when doctor comes'. Manyata removes her hand from uday's lips'.

Doctor: kese hai aap yuvraaj udayveer'apke tabyat mein bahot improvement hai''

vese manana padega bahot pyaar karte ho aap ek dusre se'.mein thodi der baad

ata hun'.

Manveer blushes but don't show on faces because they hadn't expressed their feelings to each other yet'.. they both are lost in each other's eyes and music starts'..

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai, pyaar hai shayad'.

~MAHI~

GUYZ HOW WAS IT?? KITNE JHOOTE TAMATAR PADENGE???😆😛😲

Great update
Loved it to the core
Manvee so sweet
Awww cant wait till they confess
Docter part was scary but also funny could imagaine manyatas expression
Thx
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:)