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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update dear
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**Matured Content


PART 10

Geet ne taxi liya...aake pohonchi

Dekhi Maan ki car

Maan was lying on the bonnet balancing the bottle on his stomach taking occasional gulps from it

No longer in a drinking frenzy

Ek haath mein cigarette hai aur bagal mei kaafi saari faili hui hai

He has no idea that he is so near car and inflammable objects with a flame

Bas cigarette piini hai to hai.

Bhale hi purre 5 min lag gaye wo jalaane mein

She is walking over towards the car...aas-paas jaise bottles ka kabaad pada hua hai

Geet aai...aur dheere se haath se cigarette leke...cliff se phenk dia

Maan ko pata nahi chala

He just brings his finger close to mouth to make puff lekin cigarette nahi hai

He flops his arm back

Nahi hai to nahi hai jaise Geet bhi nahi thi. Uske kitna bhi chahne se aa thodi gai thi

His eyes are closed he doesn't see that Geet is there

Par cigarette and Geet nahi to kya, daaru to hai

So he drinks

Geet touches his shoulder softly

At her touch Maan jerks and some booze spills on himself.

He sputters as it goes down the wrong way, sit up and starts coughing

G-ohhh

She rubs his back

He manages to stop coughing and start breathing, panting after a minute...tears streaming down his cheek; his neck and mouth already wet with spilled drink

G-Thik ho?

She wipes the tears with her soft fingers

He wipes it all away with his sleeve leaning away from Geet flopping down while doing that

G-Maan

M- Geez

G-ohhh sambhalke

She holds him

M- no

Puts his hand in front of him to keep her away.

Somehow he manages to slide off the bonnet and stagger lean into a standing posture his back supported by the car

She holds his arm

He shrugs his arm and pushes her hand away giving her angry glare all the while

G-I know you are very angry at me but you shouldn't have drunk so much. 8 bottles Maan? 8 bottles? A packet of cigarette? Why?

M- u zont care

G-I do care, that's why I am here, don't I?

Maan just shrugs

Wo nahi aayi

Ab he doesn't owe her any explanation. Wo uski ma to nhai hai. Wo kyun kuch bhi bataye

G-I don't like when you get drunk like this, I get worried. You can curse me, hate me but don't do this to yourself

M-I haze u and i do whz i wanna do

G- I know [looking down]

He puts his hands inside his pockets. Haath mein bottle to hai nahi. They look ridiculous hanging uselessly

G-Lets go home

She holds his elbow trying to pull him

G-Lets go home

He shrugs away her touch

M-zont

He swats her hand away

She moves back a little

G-Please, what do you wanna do here?

M- zleep

G-Wont you go home?

Maan shakes his head ki nahi

G-Sleep in your home, in your room comfortably

Maan shakes his head in no again

G-Why?

Geet bhi kya kare, usse wahan chod bhi nahi paa rahi, khud jaa bhi nahi paa rahi, usse saath leja bhi nahi paa rahi

G-Chalooo pleaseee

She grabs his elbow hakk se

G-Enough of it. Chalo

M- i.zont.want. to .go!

He pushes her away

G-You can't sleep here. Are you mad?

Maan glares at her

G-Why don't you take care of yourself?????????????

Chilla di Geet

Maan dheere se carefully stands away from the car, opens the door, ignores all of Geet's shouting, somehow manages to sit in the passenger seat

G-Maaan

She shakes him harddd

Ab baith kar he flops back and closes his eye

Hilla deti hai

G-Talk to me

She slaps his face a few times...lightly

He glares at her

M-zont touch me

He says suddenly catching her wrist putting another hand on her neck pulling her close so that he can look straight in her eyes when he said that

She looks at her wrist

G-I won't touch you, if you come with me

Geet is looking at Maan

She loses balance, and falls on him

G-Aauuu

Maan bhi drunk tha, he couldn't catch her properly

He just ended up getting her hand around her as she sprawled on him

G- xont touxh me. Leave me alone

He says and again closes his eyes. The wariness and the tiredness with all the drink is creeping into his consciousness making him groggy and sleepy

But accidently her lip touches his as she lands on him

Geet peeche ho jaati hai

G-Hate me so much? Fine. But you have to get home. That's my responsibility. I will call your home

M- no

He tightens his hands around her. He doesn't want anyone interfering

M- this is just fine

G-ahhh leave my hand.

He opens his eyes to realize that he was holding her. He lets her go immediately

G- Maan I can't stay with you whole night and I can't leave you like this

M- u can ..go

G-No I can't. You have to get up and you have to go

She againn slaps him on his cheek pouring a daru bottle on his face

He grabs her hand this time a bit tightly

M-Don't do that again

He says glaring very hard almost looking sober. His lips thinned into a tight line

Geet looks at him

G-Haath chodo. Utho

M- i shud push u out and close the door

G-You are so adamant. You don't care about people who care for you

Geet signals the taxi driver who was waiting for them to come

Taxi wala comes

G-Inko utha ke le jaiye...aapko paisa de dungi

Maan glares at the taxi driver

M- i'll kill u if u touch me

Taxi driver aake holds Maan

Geet was also trying to help

G-Main sambhalti hoon

She comes closer to Maan looks into his eyes sincerely and holds his face with her soft hands

He removes her hand

G-Kya hua? Kyun aata hai itna gussa?

M-Dont pretend to care

He says and turns towards the taxi barely taking a step and stumbling to the ground

Geet runs towards him to hold him

He rejects her help again pushing her away

Taxi driver also helps Maan

He finally accepts the driver's help and makes his way to the taxi

Geet bagal mein baith jaati hai as the driver starts driving

Maan tries to stay awake

Geet lovingly moves her finger on his hair

He pushes her hand away

G-Maaan gussa nahi naa

She pulls him towards her, making him keep his head on her lap

He flops on the opposite side and angles away his body from her crossing his arm tightly in front of him and blinks his eyes rapidly trying to keep awake

She finally couldn't help herself says 'I am sorryyy'

Her face is guilt laden

She hides her face with her hands whimpering...slightly

Maan can barely hear and make meaning of her words now

He is too far gone

He is seconds form passing out and all this concentration is going on keeping awake

Usse bass itna pata hai ki Kashsih is fraud. Jo bhi kahe jo bhi reason de sunna hi nai hai

G-Maan, we are home !

She shakes him

He looks around drowsily, shifts a bit darwaza khola and dham bahar gir gaya as he was leaning against it

G-Ohhh! Maan!!!! Are you ok?

She holds him she helps him get out of the car

He gives her sleepy glare which looks like a cute pout; struggling ineffectively to push her away reject her help

She can't help a smile seeing his pout

She holds him tightly as she could

G-Come. Try walking

She is holding him and trying to walk holding his massive weight

G-Maan..Maan..ehh..try walking

Maan ko to ab to pata bhi nai ki kaun hai saath, he just stagers blindly to wherever he is being lead

Par Geet ne saamne dekha to she was freezed.

Saamne Maan ki maa aur wahan chal rahi hai pool party aur bohot log aaye hue hain

Ma-Maan ! Aren't you supposed to be in your home? There's a party and you!

Gives a hard look to Geet

G-emm..

Ma-MAAN !

He finches

He blinking and looking at the lights of the party unsteady on his feet

M-hic-

Geet khadi kahdi stutter karti hai ki

G-Main..wo..ye...wo...Maan...wo. wo a..aap wo.. ji main...

Maan staggers apni masti mein towards the pool..feet criss- cross

Maan zara Geet ko peeche karta hai

Maa-Maan Maan

He ignores all the female voices turning his back to them and starts peeing in the pool

Geet is jaw dropped

Maa's eyes almost widen to fullest

Par according to Maa sab Geet ki sangat ka asar hai

Geet to freeze ho hi gai hai

Aaram se he finishes and turns zipping up himself

Geet to bechari thandi padd gai hai shock se

Maan turns laughing like a maniac looking at mom swaying back and fro

Maa is tongue tied. She can't decide what she is furious or horrified. Furious at Maan or at this girl

Geet is just plain horrified and worried somewhat guilty. Geet ko laga kahin pool mein naa gir jaye



Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
loved the update
lagtha hain iss baar bahut gusssa hain and its gonna b tough for geet to manaofy him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Uh oh.
Looks like Maan will be in trouble with his mom.
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Geet is so guilty... Maan babu wat r u upto... Did it in the pool... God his mom thinks geet is resposible???? Loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update
superb one
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
maan pagal ho chuka hai...peeing in pool...gr8...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

looved it.. loved ot...
amazzuinnnggg one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

i loved all the parts in a go
wow what a great piece of work
truly awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 11

Geet to bechari thandi padd gai hai shock se

Maan turns laughing like a maniac looking at mom swaying back and fro

Maa is tongue tied. She can't decide what she is furious or horrified. Furious at Maan or at this girl

Geet is just plain horrified and worried somewhat guilty. Geet ko laga kahin pool mein naa gir jaye

M-o-hic..

He refrains himself from going backwards...ghasittha hai 2 kadam..stumbling on the ground

Geet rushes to support him par ma ne Geet ka haath pakad liya

Mom-Get. out. NOW!!

Maan hisses shhh shhh

Mom- RAMSINGH!! Take him to his room now

Ram singh rushes and holds Maan and starts dragging Maan to his room

Maan saying some incoherent things to Ramsingh pointing Geet

Maan grabs another bottle from waiters hand and gives a sly wala grin

G- Maan Nahi

Mom glares at Geet

Mom- Ramsingh take him to his room and bring the bottle back

Maan points againn at Geet while being dragged

M-Geezzz

He kisses the air pointing at Geet

Mom-Don't worry I'll take care of her

Mom says giving Maan and guests a fake wide smile. Holdings Geet's elbow in tightly she drags Geet out and pushes her out of front door

Mom-This was all your fault!

G-But..

Mom-Don't you dare meet my son again and if you do...you don't know what I'll do to you and your family

G-I am sorry...but i never meant to...I..

Gate band Geet ke muh par

She looks down sadly

Geet pohonchi ghar 5 baje subah ke

Dabbe paon andar aake apne bed pe so gai

Geet ki maa subah 6 baje uthke Geet ko uthane aai

But maa frowns seeing her

Ma-Geet, you smell of drinks. Aur teri earing kahan hai? Raat ko to maine dekhi thi tere kaan mein

Geet touches her ear and finds her one earring missing

G-emm..maa...emm kaisi baatein kar rahi ho..emm...wo...main to abhi soke uthi

Geet fakes a yawn

G-aur..earring shayad sote hue gir gai hogi

Ma- Ye sharaab ki buu kahan se aarahi hai phir? Mujhse jhoot bol rahi hai?

G-Mujhe kya pata maa..wo..shayad...ek naya perfume hai naa jo Kiara laai thi aur main kya jhooth bolun maa...subah to soke hi uthte hain naa

Maa narrows her eyes not believing one word lekin lets her go, koi proof bhi to nahi hai naa

Geet is like phew

Ab Maan utha as Ramsingh ne uthaya, parde khole

RS-Saaab !CHAI!

Ramsingh bhaag gaya

Maan has the same reaction as yesterday, he again roars at Ramsingh for waking him up like that

Maan utha to kuch gira zameen pe

Usne ne dekha ki kya hai...dekha Geet ki earring hai

Maan ne uthakar dekha ki ye earring uske paas kahan se aayi, ye to Geet ka hai

Maan neeche gaya breakfast karne

Baith gaya table par and starts buttering his toast

Aaj table pe koi nahi hai naa mom na adad as he is damn late today

He thinks aaj wo aaraam se sade hue chehre dekhe bina breakfast kar sakta hai

The servants keep the food...but he feels like puking looking at the food..his head is still heavy

He had drunk the tea and just something light so and just nibbled the toast, nothing else

M-Ramsingh!!

Rs-Jii saab

M- Ye khana yahan se le jao aur mujhe aaj itna late kyun uthaya?

RS-Saab aap uth hi nahi rahe the

M-Ramsingh don't make foolish excuses

Ramsingh ka sar neeche...

RS-Hum kya kare saab...hum to sara kaam waqt par hi karte hain [he mutters]

Maan also goes muttering under his breath

Geet ne aaj subah subah Maan ke office jaake milna chaha par pata chala Maan nahi aaya abhi tak

Geet goes to her violin class thinking, lunch time mein mil legi jab aayega

As her violin class gets over and she heads for the bust stop to find Maan standing there and lighting up a cigarette

She walks to him

G-Maan

He glances at her and walks away few steps

She frowns; she does not understand why he is ignoring her

She follows him

G-Kya hua tumhe? I am sorry main kal nahi...

M-Tumhe kya lagta hai tum duniya ki akeli ladki ho. Ladkiyaan ne mere peeche bhaagti hain, main ladkiyon ke peeche nahi bhaagta

He shows his hand and she stops mid-way

M-Leave me alone, forever

G-Kya??? Hua kya hai? Maine bataya na akal meri behen aagai and I did come...

He walks away and lights up

She keeps on looking at him

He does look angry but on top of that he looks tired and unwell. His eyes are red and face looks puffy and his lips clasped in a thin line

Geet walks into the nearby market and comes back after a while with a bottle of water

She walks to him and pulls him by his elbow with a jerk putting a tablet and pouring some water in his mouth

Maan swallows in the tablet and looks at Geet with a frown

But before he could say anything, he had to rush behind a shop and as puking

As he was done Geet comes from behind and offers him water

G-Better?

He drinks away the water actually feeling better than he had felt whole day

He nods

Geet smiles

G-Chalo ab kuch khalo. Khaali pet bhi tabiyat kharab o jaati hai

She holds his arm and takes him to a nearby bistro

They occupy a table while she orders sandwich and juice for him and coffee for herself

M-I also want a coffee

G-No, coffee is not good for you. It will further dehydrate your body. Have what I have ordered

He remains silent

She is also silent, rather speechless kahe to kya...jo dekha kal wo to...aur yahan Maan anjaan aram se baitha hai...

Geet is looking at him ki kuch bole

Maan to chup chap recover ho raha hai

G-Mujhe late ho raha hai

M- Jao...

G-Jaun?

M-Kyun pooch rahi ho? Jab bulata hoon to aati nahi h, rukne ko kahunga to kaunsi ruk jaogi

G-Thik hai...main bhi kisi ki cheez nahi rakhti par wo dress wapas to kar nahi sakti par..

Purse se nikale 500 rs rakh deti hai

G-Abhi mere paas itne hi hai. Baaki lauta dungi

M-f**k the dress!

He says banging his glass on the table

Geet shrinks

M-Wear it burn it throw it away for all I care. I don't care what you wear. I just wanted to give you something nice

G-I care. Main kisi ki cheez aise nahi rakhti. Tumhe lekar jalana ho, phekna ho kuch bhi karna ho karna. I should have always listened to Maa

Maan gets up

M-oh? Don't you already do that? Sorry maa ne rok lia.. sorry maa ne mana kar diya.. maa this maa that

G-Do you let me? Tum aur tumhari zidd

M- Haan meri zidd hai to? What's wrong with wanting something? Haah pe haath rakh kar to kuch mil nahi jaata naa

G-To?????? Uss zidd ki wajah se main suffer karti hoon. Do you ever thing about others?

M- Kya suffer kiya hai tumne? Think of other? Tumhara baare mein nahi sochta to tumhe bulata kyon?!!

G-aah haa mere baare mein sochne ke lie mujhe bulate ho, kabhi flat ke neeche aa jao, kabhi idhar aa jao, kabhi udhar aa jao

M- Why are you complaining? You came only came once that too under your flat. Itna door bhi nahi aayi

G-Kyaaa???? Kya kaha tumne phirse kehna

She tiptoes pointing her finger towards his nose

M- Why should I repeat? It's not like you'll understand or do what I say if I say it more than once. Tumhe to sab zidd lagta hai

G-Achcha! [Narrows her eyes] Mujhe thank you bolne ki jagah ..tum...

He searches around and keeps his hand on her waist

M- Thanks for what?

G- Main hi bevkuf hoon jo saara kaam chodke raat ke 2 baje chupte chupate...tumse milne gai

M-oh to tum 2 baje aayi?

G- Puri raat jaggii..ghar mein jhooth bola...tumhari maa se beizzat hui aur tum...tum!!!!!

M- What?

G-Tum bhaad mein jao

She turns to leave but realizes he is holding her by the waist

She jerks away his hand

But he holds her hand

M-You met my mom? When? How?

Pehle he was just sulking and mildly teasing lekin ab to wo bilkul serious ho gaya

G-Chodo mera haath. Jaahil ho kya? Waise to tum ho hi jahil ! janwaar !

M- Geet gaali bad meni de lena pehle batao tum Maa se kab mili aur kya baat hui tumhari?

G-Mujhe tum jaise ungrateful insaan se kuch baat hi nahi karni. Tumhe jo puchna hai apni maa se puch lo. Mujhe pareshaan karna band karo

M- Main pareshaan kar raha tha to aaj mere office kyun aayi? Pareshana to tum bhi hona chahti ho

He says teasingly and flirtingly

She is at loss of words

G-emm..main office aayi..kyunki main insaan hoon..ek civilised insaan

M- Aur main ek jaahil jaanvarr..

G-Bilkul

M-Whta a pair!

G-Shut up! Haath chodne ka kya loge?

M- Bolun ki nahi?

G-Kya bologe?

She frowns

M-Suspense kaise bata doon aise hi?

G-Tum pagal ho. Mujhe jaane do

M-Kya dogi suspense janne ke liye?

G-Thenga

He starts laughing

She rolls her eyes

He pulls her close almost into a mini hug

She is astonished as no man had ever touched her

G-ohhh Maan..pagal ho kya

She is pushing him

M- Chalo jao... tumhe rukunga tum rukogi nahi fir mujhe bura lagega tum mujhe 2-3 baatein aur suna dogi

Maan was still grinning

G-Tumhe mazza aa raha hai naa. Meri jaan nikaalke hassi aa rahi hai. Tumse ye hi expect kar sakte hain

She pouts

He shakes his head

M- Kya chahti ho mujhse batao

She looks down and shakes her head

He takes her hand and they walk out to the bus stand

G-Aur suno..tumhari wajah se..tumhari khincha taani ki wajah se naajane mera ek earing shayad kal kahin gir bhi gaya

M- oh ye to bohot bura hua...kaisa tha wo?

G-Haan jaise tum dhund loge

M-Maybe it's in my house. Ramsingh ko milega to pata chal jaega ki tumhara hai

G-Sab tumhari waajh se. Suna tumne; sab tumhari wajah se

M-Mat batao.. aini samjh gaya ki tumhe wo wapas chahiye hi nai.. you want me to keep it; don't you?

G-Chup raho tum. Wo tumhare button jitna bada, gol tha aur tumhare ghar mein to..baap re naa jaane aunty mere baare mein kya kya soch rahi hogi

M- Earring golden color ka tha?

G-hmm..it smelled like gold..it was gold plated

Maan describes the earring correctly to every point ki aisa waise



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