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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan aur geet k jhagre...kabhi khatam hi nehi hote hai...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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nice update...

i like the way the agrue...

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very cute story ! both maan and geet are behaving like kids ! geet is like a cute grown up doll who just opened her eyes to this wide new world only to find a drunken , jiddi and lovable big kid called maan ! very very entertaining. waiting for more fun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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One time maan is angry with her next he is flirting... These two are always quarreling with each other... Good thing maan's mom dint say a lot of things to her...
Loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved maaneet moments
their fight also cute
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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he is also teasing her...😆
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When r u gonna update? Waiting yaar if u r busy pls say so... Missing these 2 very much...
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Sorry for the looong wait guys...here's a looong part for u...enjoy

PART 12

M- Earring golden color ka tha?

G-hmm..it smelled like gold..it was gold plated

Maan describes the earring correctly to every point ki aisa waise

She frowns

G-Wapas karo abhi. Chor !

M- This jaahil unlike you... doesn't return others things. Think for it as exchange

G-Exchange? Kya chahie? Acha, dress kal laa dungi, khush? Earring do

M- No I don't want it and I am keeping your earring, no matter what you give me in return. Wo to main wapas nahi karunga

G-Kyun?????????? Pehnoge kya? Ek hi hai wo. Khair jo marzi karo, tum jaise jungli se ye hi expect kar sakte hain

M- Kyun bataun kya karunga...maybe I'll get one ear pierced. Sahi hai jungli punk...

He starts laughing

G-Hasso mat. Tum kal meri yaa kisi ki bhi jagah hote naa,,,sharam to tumhe waise bhi nahi aati hai...khair ayegi kaise jo party ke beech mein...usse sharam thode ayegi

M-Party? Kaunsi party? Maine kya kiya party ke beech mein?

G-Kaunsi party? Bhole to aise bann rahe ho jaise...

M- Geet main bhola banne ki acting kyun karunga? I seriously don't remember, I was really drunk and whatever it is I did; I did in drunk stupor

Geet looks at him

G-Good

M- Good?

G-Ye hi to kaam hai peete raho

M- To aur kya karun!!! Huh?! Kya karun?

G-Matlab????? Kya karun matlab? Aur koi kaam nahi hai duniya mein?

M-Forget it. You would never understand

G- Make me understand

Maan leaves her hand

M- You don't even care to kyun pooch rahi ho

She takes a breath

G-See I am sorry main kal nahi aa pai meri sister aa gai thi aur wo kai mahino baad aai thi aur uske fiance aur uske fiance ke gharwalon ke saath dinner ka plan tha aur cell sis ke paas tha

He shows his hand

G-Nahi suno tum. Main kya karti. I called you when I was free. Meri bhi to problem ho sakti hai naa

M- Haan tumhari hi problem hai; kabhi tumhe message padna nahi aata...kabhi tum bhool jati ho.. kabhi tumhari behen tumhara phone le leti hai. Sai hai. Galti tumhari kabhi nahi hoti hai, zidd hamesha meri hoti hai. Tumhe to apologize bhi nahi karna chahiye

G- Thik hai to matt pucho naa mujhe, kyun puchte ho. Waise bhi I never told you to ask me out then don't' ask me out and I did say sorry. Phone pe hazaar baar bhi sorry kaha. Tumhare kehne pe daudi daudi aayi. Thik hai mat pucha karo mujhe...yahan tak ki baat hi mat karo mujhse...happy?

M-Don't go home today

G-Kya???????

M-Meet me after your class gets over. Don't go home, don't ask for permission first meet me then. Go home later

G-My class is over...I have morning classes. See I am not a girl who you date frequently..I am not...so don't expect these things..I don't wanan hurt you...it would be better if we don't speak to each other

M- I know you are not like other girls and I don't wait for other girls or ask them out so many times even when they say no, I don't behave all jungli unsophisticated in front of them

Geet looks at him

G- That's bad...I am the bad influence then

M- You are good...very good. Chalo mere saath abhi...ghumne chalo

He holds her one hand tugging her to where his car is

G-Nooo nahi...chodo...ghar jaana hai

M- Why not?

G-Maa wait kar rahi hai

M-Then phone kar do, keh do extra class hai, : keh do bus nai mili. Mere saath chalo

She shakes her head

G-Main jhooth nahi bolti

M-Agar mere saath chalogi to bus to nahi milegi naa

G-Maa..manaa karti hai...dekh sakne wale logon se specially ladkon se baat karne se

M- Par hum to baat kar chuke... we are in fact holding hands. Ab to kuch nahi ho sakta

He says smugly

She tries to pull back her hand par Maan nahi chodta

G-emm...meri sister ki friend hai..Pratiksha..wo ladka dhund rahi hai..tumhari baat karwa dungi

He starts laughing while Geet raises her eyebrow in confusion

M- Mereko to tum lekin already mil gayi... uske lie hum koi aur dhundh denge, ok?

She shakes her head and shrinks, Maan ke haath pakadne se ghabrake freeze si ho gai hai

M- Chalo please

She shakes her head, looking down

M- I swear I won touch you even; not even hold hands. I'll be a perfect gentleman, I won't drink, I won't smoke, no jungli jahilness either. Chalo...

Geet looks at him

M-Please

He looks down into her eyes willing her to say yes with his eyes

She looks down quickly and swallows

G-Maa daantegi...main ghar jaa rahi hoon...ye sab sahi nahi hai...sorry

He slowly lets go off her hand

M- Kya galat hai? Tum kabhi nahi ghumi, tumhe sirf ghumana chahta hoon, sundar jagah dikhana chahta hoon

G-Mmain ghum lungi...maa ke saath..behen ke saath

M- Tumhari maa mana kar dengi

G-Tum koi guide ho kya? Tumhara office bhi hai

M-Wo bhi bnan jaunga aur office se ek din ki chutti allowed hoti hai. Maine 5 mahinon se chuttti nahi li. Chalo please

G-Sorry

Geet climbs the bus as it stops

G-Bye

Maan keeps looking at her with a grim face and pulls out the cigarette packet as she gets on the bus

Geet calls him after a while

M- What do you want?

He says as if his mouth is full...he is smoking

G-I am sorry

M- Don't apologize. You can't lie to your mom even if I die of throat cancer due to smoking or liver failure due to excessive drinking but you can't lie to your mom

G-You are..? You are smoking? Don't smoke and drink naa!

M- Why? What do you care? Tumhe to ladkon se baat bhi nahi karni chahiye

G- You said you won't smoke and drink naa

M-I wouldn't have if you had come with me

G-It's not about me...it's about you...it's about your life...I am nobody in your life...we don't even know each other

M- We can get to know each other. Aage kya ho tumhe kya pata. Tum to try bhi nahi karna chahti

G-Haan nahi karna chahti, kyunki aapki aur meri duniya alag alag hai...aur pata hai..khushnaseeb hote hain wo log jinhe bhagwan ne sab diya hota hai. Kuch log sab hote hue bhi usse gawate hain..aur kuch log usko paane ke lie tarste hain

M-Tum kyun taras rahi ho, koshish to karo sab mil jayega

G-Main aapki baat kar rahi hoon

M-Main kuch khone ke darr se kuch chahna nahi chod sakta

G-Aap inn buri addoton se apni health kharab kar rahe hain..aur kuch log 1 din zyada jeene ki minnat kar rahe hain

M- Aur um us zjindagi ke hote hue bhi darrkar duniya se durr rehkar usse guzar jaane de rahi ho. Geet bohot shawk tha tumhe duniya dekhna ka, tumne dekha kya lekin? Aakhein theek karwa li lekin unka use kya kiya? Bas ghar se akele institute aane tak ke lie? Bas... isse zyada to tum blind rehkar hi kar leti thi naa. Log aankhon ke liye bhi to taraste hai na par tum konsa istemaal kar rahi ho? Main apni zindagi kharab kar raha hoon lekin apni zidd, apni chahat ke liye; kissi aur ke rokne tokne se nahi. Ye zindagi bhi chali gai to afsos nahi hoga ki ek baar peena chahta nai peeya, ek baar kisi se milna chahta tha nahi mila

G-Sahilon ko kabhi milne ki koshish nah karni chahie. Mera aapka nazariya alag hai aur mera parivaar mere liye bohot important hai. Main rakhti hoon

Kaat dia phone

He calls her again

G-Hello

M-Who the heck is Sahil? Huh? Kaun hai ye batao

G-Sahil? Mujhe kya pata

M-Why are you comparing me to this sahilon? Huh? Anjaan mat bano tumne hi kaha tha

Geet starts laughing

M-Its not funny

G-Arre sahilll...sahil..kinara...banks...videshi gawaar

Maan is silent at his stupidity

M-Geez whatever did that line mean... pata nahi tum bhi kya kya kehkar phone kaat deti ho...mujhe heart attack aagaya yahan

G-Wo kyun?

M- Kyun matlab? Aise tum achhanak se kis bhi ladke ka naam lekar mujhe usse compare karogi to mujhe tension nahi hogi

G-Iismien tension ki kya baat hai? Tum bhi naam le lo Rina, Mina, Tina ...kisi ka bhi

M- ...you ...what did you mean your family is important? Maine kab kaha ki its not important? Huh?. Mujhse milne ko haan karne mein tumhari fmaily unimportant nahi ho jaati hai and main kisi aur ladki ka naam nahi lunga; itna awaara bhi nahi hoo n

G-Hmm? I meant meri maa jaisa kahegi jo kahegi main waisa hi karungi..my younger sis and maa knows the best. Unko sab pata hai..sab dekhne wale logon ke baare mein

M- Aur tum to ab bhi blind ho ki dekh kar khud kuch nai samjh sakti ho. Aakhein bhi unhi ke doosri laga deti, wo aur dekh kar tumhe ab bata dete

G-Dekhne se kuch nahi hota, samajhna hota hai. Aise dekhne wale log fraud dhurth , chalak, beimaan type ke hote hain

M-Ok ok...I have to rush to a meeting...bye

Maan hangs up

Geet ghar pohonch jaati hai

G-Ma!

Ma- Aa gai meri bachhhiii

G-Haan, roz hi to aati hoon

Maa- Jaa haath muh dho le akar khana kahale

G-Haan...wo maa...wo maa..wo...aap kehti ho naa...har insaan bura nahi hota...I mean...kitne andhe log bhi to bure hote h naa

Ma-Haan to?

G-Aur waise hi sab dekhne wale log bhi to bure nahi hote honge naa

Ma- Main buri hoon? Main bhi to dekh satki hoo

G-Nahi maa ...haan wohi to

Geet's face lights up

Maa looks suspiciously at her

Maa- To? Teri baat hui kisi se? Kitni baar kaha hai ki anjaan logon se baat nahi karte. Main to maa hoon, main to achhi hi hongi naa. Wo anjaan hai, wo do baar nai sochenge tera fayda uthane se pehle

G-Nahi...anjaan nahi

Ma-oh? Kaun hai phir? Kiski baat kar rahi hai?

G-Kisi ke nahi...main to aise hi pooch rahi thi

Ma-Teri koi nai saheli bani hai?

G-Haan haan saheli...nayi..nayi saheli

She nods her head vigorously

Ma-Achha, kya naam hai? Ghar wale kaise hain uske? Kya kaam karti hai kahan mile?

G-Uss..uska..naa..Maan..-Si...Maansi naam hai

Ma-Tujhe mana kiya tha na kisi se bhi baat kane ko, phir saheli kaise bani hmm?

G-emm...wo bass...aise hi...usne meri ek din help ki thi...to aise hi baat ho jaati hai...maa, wo..kisi achche insaan ko hurt karna bhi thik nahi naa...vaada karke todna bhi achi baat nahi naa

Ma-Usne tujhse kuch kaha badle mei karne ko?

G-Nahi

Ma-Phir kaunsa vaada? Kya kaam karti hai ye ladki?

G-Wo...main fresh hoke aati hoon maa...bohot thak gai hoon

Ma-Yahin baith chup chap aur meri baat ka jawab do

G-Arre wo karti hai kisi office mein kaam...aap bhi naa maa...you should have been in CID

She makes up after realizing that she had revealed to much and now Maa was curius

Ma-Baat mat badal! Tu bhi avoid kar rahi hai. Kya baat hai? Kuch galat kaam kiya hai kya iss ladki ne?

G-Maaa...sab pe shakk karna band karo aur mujhe bachcha samajhna bhi

Ma- Tu kuch nahi bataegi to mujhe shaq nai hoga to kya?

G-Kiara pe to koi lagaam nahi hai aur mujhpe...

Ma-Kaunsi lagaam? Ab meri fikar lagam lagne lagi hai? Ye sab teri nayi saheli ne sikhya hai na tujhe, wo bhi apne ghar par aise hi ladti hogi, haina

G-Maa bass. Hum iss baare mein baat naa hi kare to acha hai

Geet goes into her room and dhaammm se door band

She calls Maan after a while in the night

He is at a party for his image damage control

Besides he was trying to get interested in another girl... dekhein to aisa kya hai Geet mein o party ki sabse sundar ladki mein nahi hai

Geet calls but paty ke loud music ki wajah se Maan ko sunai nahi diya

Geet bhi call kare jaaye

Maan nahi uthata to Geet ko aur chinta ho jaati hai aaj kal

Maan ko wo ladki hi keh deti hai ki your coat is buzzing

When she keeps a hand on his chest and wahan phone vibrate karta hua touch hota hai

Dono haste hain hahahaha

He sees the number

M-Ek minute

He says to the girl, moving out of noise he answers

M- Kya hua hai?

G-Phone kyun nahi utha rahe the

M-I didn't realize it was ringing

Peeche se wo ladki is calling

M-Huh ! Excuse me

Gal-Maan c'mon its my fav song...-

M-i'll come in a minute. Bolo kya keh rai hti tum

G-Tumhari behen bula rahi hai?

M- Meri koi behen nai hai, bas ek bhai hai. Tumhe bataya tha maine

G-Mooh boli behen?

M- Meri behen kyun banane mein lagi ho tum saari ladkiyon ko? Tum meri behen ho? Meri muh boli behen ho? Nahi na, to wo bhi nai hai

G-Haan

M-Haan? You think of me as your brother?

G-Khair, faltu baatein to main karti nahi tumhar tarah

M-Faltu baat nai hai. You think of me as your brother? Batao?

G-Tum pehle kama hi baat suno. Yaad hai tumne aaj kya kaha tha

M-Nahi mujhe yaad nahi hai. You think of me as your brother or not? Bolo

Peechhe se- 'Maaannn chaloo naaa'

G-Tumne kaha tha...ki tumne 5 mahino se chutti nahi li hai. Kaha tha ki nahi?

M- Haan to?

G-Aur ye bhi kaha tha ki 1 din chutti to chalti hai

M-Main tumhara bhai kaise ban gaya? Come to the point Geet

G-Tchhh! I am in the point. You come to the point. To baat ye hai ki kal chutti le lo

M-Fine...main chutti le unga par main apne bhai ke ilawa kisi ka bhai nai hoon. samajh aaya?

G-Thik hai thik hai

M-I'll pick you at your home then?

G-Nooo bus stop

M-Fine. I'll see you then

G-yeah...ok..chalo. Suno

M-Hm?

G-Maa ne kya kaha? Daanta nahi?

M-Doesn't matter. It's the usual thing. Sorry you had to see that yesterday

G-What????????????? You pee in the pool every day????????

M-I've never done that before...guess I really was drunk

G- Jungli

As he cuts the call, suddenly he feels that he is losing all the interest in the girl with him.

He is mind gets busy on planning his tomorrow's outing with Geet

Kal kafi amazing plan karna chahiye to gain Geet's full interest

Gal-Maan Maan Maaan

He fakes a head ache

M-Babes, get me an asprin please

Gal-But...Maaan

Wo gai asprin lane peeche se Maan khisak liya

Next day-

Subah Geet khadi hai wahan

Waiting with her huge violinn bag

Maan aaya gaadi mei...smiling till his ears; really pleased

Bahar aya, Geet se uska case liya

She looks at him...touches her watch..

G-5 min late

M- Tit for tat

Maan ne case ko peeche rakha car ke. Fir Geet ke liye door khola

M-Your carriage awaits...

She sits

Maan ne poocha

M-Is there somewhere you specifically want to go?

He says starting to drive

G-emm...tumhe jana tha kahin? Nahi jaana to mian class chali jaati hoon

M-Maine to sab plan kar rakha hai. Tumhe koi aur jagah jaanae ka mann hai to bata do. wahan bhi jaa sakte hain

G-Nahi

M- Good

She looks out of the window

M- When is your curfew?

G-Curfew?

M-When do you have to be back?

G-At home? Same time I go; 1.30-2

Maan ke saare plan par paani phir gaya

M-So basically you are lying to your mom about attending class

She looks down

G-Dekha, sab tumhari wajah se

M-Yeah yeah. So since its just for 3 hours. We have only time for movie... that would be the best...baaki sab tumhe kabhi aur dikha dunga

G-Baaki kya?

M-Baaki bhi hai... tum rukti to dikhata, batata but...

G-Abhi batao

M-Beaches... fire shows... etc etc

G-ohhh

M-But tumhe zyada interst intrest hi nahi hai, I guess

Ab wo log hall pohonchte hain

Geet is looking at posters

G-Kaunsi dekhein?

Maan points to one

wo 3d wali hai

G-Nahi ye wali dekhte hain..

She points to penguin posters

G-Ye lagta bhi tumhare jaisa hai...

Points to a penguin

M-Geet...

G-Haan?

M-Pakka, agli baar yahi waali dekhenge

G-Agli baar?

M-But since main ghumaane laya hoon to first choice meri

G- Thik hai...

Geet about turn...jaana shuru

M-Tumhe nahi dekhni?

Maan holds her hand

M-Kahan jaa rahi ho?

G-Tumne hi to kaha agli baar dekhenge

M-Tumhari paand ki agli baar dekhenge is baar meri pasand ki dekhenge. Chalo

G-Tumhari pasand to wiase bhi bekar hai. Khair, kya dikha rahe ho?

M-Tum khud ko bekaar keh rai ho, Geet? Nahi aesa mat kaho...

She frowns

He keeps a firm grip on her hand

Dono haath mein haath daale jaate hain ticket counter

Maan ticket kharidta hai

Geet purse se paise nikaalke adhe paise Maan ko deti hai

M- Tum movie dikhana agli baar. Abhi rakho ye sab

He says handing it all back

Dono ticket lekar, 3Dglasses lekar hall mein ghus jaate hain

Andhera tha as they were a little late

Maan holds her hand but Geet is more comfortable in dark, thus she has no problem finding her way

Wahan dono chashmein lagakar movie dekhna shuru

But after a while Maan notices Geet is sitting bending her back with her 3D glasses removed; and she is vigorously rubbing her eyes

M-Hey, what's wrong? Are you ok?

She shakes her head

G-Surgery. My eyes are still sensitive. I cannot glare at the huge screen for long. The rays cause me eye irritation

M-Oh

Maan promptly gets up and gets her a bottle of ice cold water and tissue

M-Put some water. You will feel better

After few moments, people sitting close to Maan and Geet were sneering and glaring at them

But Maan was least concerned

He was busy narrating what was happening on the screen to Geet while she shut he eyes and pressed her face to his chest

As her moved her hand around her head, she felt relaxed. While Maan felt nice narrating her scenes, even if she was unable to watch it herself, he was glad he could narrate her each and every movement

Ab Maan Geet bahar aate hain

G-Thanks for the movie, but I am sorry

M-About what?

G-About what all happened and my probem..and for spoiling it

M- Hey its nothing. Nothing was spoiled at all

G-If I would have known I would have never come...but it was my first time naa

M- Well now we know. So maybe we'll buy books on penguins instead hmm? or does reading give you headache too?

Geet giggles

G- I can't read

M- What? You can't read?

She shakes her head

G-I told you

M-Yeah but I though like you would have learned some by now

She shakes her head

G-I am searching for a tutor

M- I'll teach you

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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wow...nw maan ll b d teacher fr geet...gr8...maa narrated whole movie fr geet...amazing...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow amazing awesome love it

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