U BELONG TO ME...A kriyaansh ff(ch 15 updated ) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it...
waiting for new entry...
plz update soon...
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loved the update...waiting 4 new entry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good goin gal...
nice twist, hope someth similar happens in d3 too😊
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Giiive the update fast
THIS IS AWESOME!
BUT TAANI!
OH GOD! cannot believe...atleast Rinni knows about this chudail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

NEXT DAY

kria was sleeping...sharon enters her room and she sees kria sleepin peacefully...seeing dis sharon smiled
(p.s. i told it in last update shar and swayam r stayin in kria's house)

she came sat on the bed and caressed kria's head...

sh: good morning kria..
(due to this kria woke up...)

kr: good morning sharon... and smiled

sh: so hw ur feelin now??

kr: m gud shron..thank u

sh: thnk u...for wat??

kr: bas aise hi..strange na hum kitne ladte the pura collage ko sar par utathe the...bt nw look at us

sh: haan...bt it was fun
(two looked towards eachother and burst out laughing)
(meantime swayam knoks the door and comes in)

sw: wah...kya mai dek rahan hoon vo sach hai??

kr & sh: swayamm(glaring)

sw: vo..seriously fire and ice together??
(all looked at eachother and burst out laughing)

sw: k kria...chala collage keliye der hojayenge

sh: haan kria chalo

kr: nahi guys you both go ill come little late

sw & sh: kyu??

kr: mujhe mandhir jaane ka man karraha heh..so me jakar aathi hoon

sh: kria..lekin

sw: teek yeh kria...tum jao aur jaldi aana ok
(sayin both left)

(kria got ready and went to temple)
(she was prayin in d mandir...and tells)
aaj se mai ek nahi zindagi shuru karna chata hoon...(to god) aap mera saath dijiyega...
and rey ko humesha kush rakna...usko apna sacha pyaar mile...aur kush rahe.. humesha sayin this she left)

IN COLLAGE

all were in atrium
swayam and sharon enters together..

sw:hey guys

gang: hey

rey: swayam kri..

vish: swayam were is kria??

sw: vo actually vo mandir jana chati thi...so sh'll b late

vish :k

sw: rey r u okay?

rey: smiled..ya m fine
(bt swayam understood and didnt ask further questions)

rdx msgs the dazzlers and weaklings to come to theeir cabin)

vic:nil rdx sir humhe kyu bulaya??

nil: mujhe kya pata?

sw: chalo guys dekte hai
(all enters the cabin except kria and tani(pata nahi kaha thi tani..who bothers)...and they see a handsome guy of their age...all girls were drooling him...)

meet yash mallik: sweet,caring sometime flirty,handsome,he want eerybody around him to be happy,helping nature,respects women,brother of karan mallik...

YASH MALLIK:
GUYS IF U DONT WANT HIM AS YASH I CAN CHANGE HIM>>>BUT I LIKED HIM REY KE BARABAR NAHI AAYA LEKIN CHALTA HENA

ne: wow he's so cute

si: aww hot

ri: hmmm

vis: ya guys
(all girls look towards her with a "did u just say dat" xpression)
(this convo was heared by rdx)

rdx: offcourse he's hot n smart karan ka bhai jo heh..

gang : wat??

rdx: haan guys..meet mr.yash mallik

yash: hey guys...

sh:wow karan sir ka bhai??

yash: ya miss?

sh: (attitude)sharon raipraksh

yash : so ur sharon

sh: yes

yash :nice to meet u...

sh: same here
(all boys and rdx was standin still and listening to dem)

ne: (smiling)hw do u knowing sharon??

yash: so ur neha??

ne: (blushin)hw u knowing neha??

vi: mera life meh aur kitna villians ayenge??

nil: dude plzz

si:(pushed neha)hi yash

yash: hi simmi

si: u knw me
(all girls literally pounced on him with que...)

yash: vo..vo..vo guys..i cn explain
bhai ne aap logon ke baare me mujhe bataya tha..(p.s.karan didnt tell about their lovelifes)

vish: hamare baare mai??

yash: yes...actually bhai mujse koi baath nahi chupathe...u guys r really special to him

girls: awww dts so swt:))

rdx: excuse me aap logo ka hogaya toh mai kuch bolu

girls: sry sir

rdx: so guys from today yash is joining d collage...he had born and brought up in london...i hope u guys will help him.

sw: ofcoure sir..v will

rdx: and guys he is a good dancer...so guys u all can leave...and yash welcome to st.louis

yash: tank u sir
(all goes out of d cabin and goes towards atrium)

sw:so yash..hws karan sir?

yash: as always gud

yash: guys hv i missed someone??
(p.s.karan told everythin about the gang..specially abt kria...that she se sweet,helpful etccc)
but not abt anybody's lovestory...from dat day yash hd a soft corner for kria))

sw:sorry..i didnt get u??

yash: actually bhai told everythin abt u guys...kya apki gang meh sirk itni log hai ya anybody??

sw: ya ek aur hai..kria

yash: ya kria(smilin)...where's she??

sw: haan athi hi hogi...lo their she is

KRIA'S DRESS:

(while kria was enterin d atrium a girl bumpeed her and her books fell dwn and she was kneeling and collecting books...because of wind her face was fully covered by her hair..so yash could'nt see her face..he was tryin his bst to see her face bt cant...finally kria took her books stood and was adjusting her books...then she turned towards the gang and smiled{wind was blowin makin her hairs dancin...and making her look more beautiful...yash was stunned to see the angel in front of him..all he could utter was )

yash: beautiful(dreaming)
(this was heard by rey..who was standin nxt to him)

(kria waved towards the gang and came to them)

kr:hey guys(she saw rey...who was smilin..and tani meantime came and stood nxt to rey...seeing this she ignored..a tear escaped from rey's eyes and soon he wiped it off)

gang: hey kria

sw: kria..meet yash brother of our very own karan sir

kr:(excitedly)karan sir
(all this while yash was simply smiling lookin at her)

kr: hi..yash

yash: no response

kr: yash??
(he came to senses)

ya: hi kria..heared a lot abt u
(kria just smiled)

(rey who was seein all this could'nt control)
rey: guys chale??
(meantime bell rang and every body went to their classes..bt yash was standin and smilin)
yash: gosh she is so beautiful...and he also goes from thier

precap: a new bond of friendship b/w kria and yash...rey jealous...tani happy

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Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awesome update...waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
how come u get this less comments...wait mai kuch karti hun...

i loved it...and haa ab immortal update bhi kardo i m waiting for it since long tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
haan kuch karo

immortal mujhe nahi pata
m not writing it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
oh yeah...its kreya _dance...

confusion at its best...sorry!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
LOVE IT...
JUZ LOVING IT
SIMPLY LOVING IT

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