U BELONG TO ME...A kriyaansh ff(ch 15 updated )

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow yaar... Jst loved it ... Read all parts in one go... Nice story...wo grl misha ho toh mja aa jaye... Rey deserve this... Plzzz pm me nxt whn u update... I already send u buddy rqst...:)

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Omg. .. . .
Hw can i miss such an awsome ff and tat too on kriyaansh . . . . .
Jst nw read all the 7 chap of this ff. . And Woww it was superb. . .
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I so so so lovd it. . . .
I hate taani like hell. . .
And m glad tat u made her villon. . . .
Rey 4got kriya and startd loving taani. . .
Urrgghhh. . . .
Tats so discusting. . . .
Achha hai,
tadpooa rey ko,
jitna ho sake tadpaoo. . .
Achi punishment mil rahi hai usse,
he deservs it. . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . .
M vry much egar to read more. . . . .
And,
pls pls pls pls pm me wen u update. . . .
Update soon. . . . .

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Jaanvi

@J-chan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Just read all the parts..they were amazing ..plzzz update soon and do pm me..:-)

Edited by jaanvi_Arsha - 12 years ago

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Double updates..wow..dey were awesum.. Kriya mising her mom...:(i luv it..rey being jealous n tani ka toh aankh fodne ka man kar rha hai..she is to iritating ...hate her to d hell...thnx for d pm..

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deepshakriya

@deepshakriya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Hey I just read all updates.. Amazing ff..I loved it...I was imagining Siddharth malhotra as yash..update next part soon n pm me m sending u buddy req

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

IT'S AMAZING...PLS PM ME WHN U UPDTE...I HAVE SEND U BUDDY REQUST

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

CHAPTER 8

kr: w*f

(when she saw rey she froze...he was angry uske face par saaf dik raha tha)

seeing this swayam understood the situation and eyed sharon to take kria from here...

sh: kria chalo na chalte hai...

(rey was holding her arm tightly...sharon saw this)

sh: rey chodo

(but rey was staring kria...but sharon pulled kria with force and took her from their)

rey left canteen and went somewhere(kahan gaya hoga obvio f.E)...he dashed the fire exit door and banged his hand on the wall...

rey: (angry)kaise...kaise?? mere awala kisi aur ki itna kareeb kaise jaa sakti hai (😡excuse me aapne kya kia tani ke sath mr.RS😡)

IN GIRLS LOCKER ROOM

sh: kria ye sab kya hai??

kr: kya hai matlab???

sh: tum aur yash

kr: vo sharon (giggling) vo gadha mere upar sandwitch peka tha issiliye

sh: kya tumhari aur yash ke beech kuch??

kr: sharon tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho...we r just friends

saying this she went to clean herself

IN BOY's LOCKER ROOM

yash: (thinkin ) ye rey aise kyu behave kar raha tha???

he cleaned himself and left'

seeing all this one person was happy(😡tani...)

NXT DAY

kria was waitin for auto ...suddenly a guy with a speed stopped his bike in front of her...she jerked a bit ...the guy removed his helmet

guy: hey cutie

kr: yash aise koi bike chalatha hai kya(yes the guy was yash)...

ya: arre vo sab chodo hop in...

kr: kya??

ya: tum collage jaa rahi ho na??

kr: haan

ya: cum hum saath mai chalte hai...(and started his bike)

kr: mai nai ahoongi///

ya: kyu??

kr: mujhe dar lagtha hai...

ya: dar kis baath ki??

kr: mai kabhi bike pe nahi baiti hoon toh mujhe dar lagtha hai(she said so cutely...that he smiled himself)

kr:yash?? yash(shouted)

ya: haan hann kya hua??

kr: tum jau mai ajauoongi

ya: kria its so simple yaha pair rakkar chado and hold me simple..

kr: par yash

ya: kria mai hoon na...dnt worry...mai tumhe nahi girahoonga(giggled)

kr: aisa sochna bi mat...

ya: ok mari maa nw hop...

(kria sat on the bike...)

ya: ab mujhe pakdo

kr: nai mai aise hi teek hoon

ya: ok(he started his bike...she caught the rods tightly...after sometime they got stuck in signal...he removed his helmet and was talking with kria...someone saw them...it was rey...uski car yash ke bike ki baju mai hi tha..he saw them

rey: kria??yash ke saath uski bike pe kya kar rahi hai??(signal got over and yash drove...rey also drove...)

they reached collage...at the same time

kr: ufff!!! thanks yash

ya: anything for u

kr: flirt

ya: maine kya kiya??

kr: nothing chalo chalte hai

ya: ok

(rey got out of his car and slammed the car door)

precap: kriyaansh in fire exit...

kaise tha ??

achha ya bura?

plzz gv ur reviews😃

Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Yupppiee. .
Me 1st. .
Me 1st. . .
Me 1st. . .
Vaise nice update. . .
Rey ko aise dekh ker maza aa raha h. . . .
Kriya and yash kuch zada hi kareeb lag rahe h. . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna,
and thanks 4 d pm. .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago