U BELONG TO ME...A kriyaansh ff(ch 15 updated ) - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

796

Views

105.4k

Users

66

Likes

830

Frequent Posters

Shinning_Angel thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#11
hey i am a big fan of ddd but i stopped watching after kriya went ...well i loved your story it is really nic i would be glad if you pm me ur next updates
love marrie
aTTiTude_dIvA thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
update was really really good...
really hope kria cumz back!!..
ur concept and the way u potrayed it so far was fab!
update jaldi!
only_kriyansh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#13

CHAPTER 3

recap: swayam came to know d truth sw and kr in hospital smrithi dead...

sw: dr dr dr...

dr: excuse me!!!! y are u shouting this is hospital apka gar nahi..

sw: vo sorry dr.. actually kria behosh hogayi heh..can u plz come and check her..

dr: ok ..come

They both go to the ward..dr checks kria and gives her the injection and goes near smrithi checks her and covers her with the white bdsheet and goes out..swayam follows him

sw: kria ko kya hua dr??

dr: vo kria shock bardaash nahi kar payi issiliye vo behosh hogayi heh..dont worry 1/2 an hr me teek ho jayegi...and uski mom ki body...

sw: me sab kuch dekloonga...thnk u dr..

dr: its ok...btw u r??

sw: vo meri maa aur kria meri behan!!!

dr: ohhh ok formalities sab kuch karke u can take her..

sw: ok...

he goes inside the ward sees kria who was still sleeping and goes towards the reception...

IN COLLAGE

In the canteen

the whole gang were their even rey and tani

(swaron are official)

rey: shron relax vo ha jayega

shoron walking to an fro

tani: haan baabi bhai hayenge aap tension mat lijiye

(rey and taani's llhh)

sh : rey rey reyyy(screams)

rey: kya hua??

sh: swayam tumhe call kiyaa???

rey: no shar...i called him he is nt recieving...

sh: oh god meh kya karoon??

rey: shar relax ...vo

just then sharon gets a call a smile crept on her face...

rey: shar kaun heh??

sh: swayam

rey :then recieve na

she recieves d call...

sh: swayam tum pagal ho kitne baar maine tumhe call kiya y ur nt recieving??? pata heh i was so tensed kaha ho tum?? abi tak collage kyun nahi aaya ??where r u??

viky: bapre itna questions??

shoron glared at viky and he becomes silent..

sh: swayam kuch bolo??

vi: aur ek que!!

sh: swayamm..

sw: haan vo vo vo shar..shoron kaha ho tum??

sh: vo mujhe puchna chahiye where r u??

sw: pehle tum batao tum kaha ho??

sh: iam in canteen

sw: kya tum aur hamara gang city hospital ha sakte ho??

sh:(shocked) swayam hospital kyu?? kya hua?? tum teek to hona??

(hearing hospital the gang stood up)

sw: sharon meh teek hoon... vo vo kri..

sh:(tensed)haan bolo swayam

sw: vo kria

sh: wat kria??

(hearing kria's name everybody was shocked ,rey went numb, tani was seeing rey)

sw: haan kria... uski mom ki death hogayi heh aur kria...

sh: kya hua kria ko??

(rey was just staring at sharon)

sw:kuch nayi hua heh usko vo shock se behosh hogayi heh vo teek ho jayegi...u all come here and haan kya rey waha heh??

she sees towards rey who ws rooted to d place

sh: haan he is here

sw: usse kuch mat bolo u all come

sh: lekin..

sw: sharon plz yeh sab kuch situation dekhe rey ko batana heh hope u understand...

sh: ok

(she cuts d call and turns towards the gang)

sh: guys

(all bounced on her)

vish:wat happen shoron?? wat happened to kria?? where is she?? is she alright??tell na

sh: guys listen vo actually kria ki mom ki death hogayi heh and kria(she sees rey who was looking down)

sh: guys chalo na we have to reach to the hospital asap..

gang: par(but she walked out of the canteen everybody followed her even tani. rey took few steps but stoped.he remembered all things which happened in pre-val day unknowingly a tear escaped through his eyes, he dont know wat to do after few minutes he decided he will go to d hospital coz he thinks that "if she didnt love him... bt he loved her a lot" and goes to d hospital)

IN HOSPITAL

Everybody reached..swayam was waitin for them in the reception

sh: swayam

sw:chalo guys

(everybody followed him..he went into the ward and saw kria who was still sleeping and stood near her..everybody saw kria and was happy,sad to see her in this state. meantime rey reached d hospital and asked receptionist..she told room no 108 and he headed towards the door of the room and heard someone crying in the room(p.s. vo log kitne bi roye kria will nt get up coz dr had injected her remember)rey stood near the room

Inside the room

sh: swayam y r u crying wat happened??

sw: sharon me kitna bura hoon meh apni friend..bst frnd ko samaj nahi paya(crying)

(rey can hear their convo)

sh:swayam yeh kya bol raha yeh??

sw: haan sharon kria humare liye apna dil dosti dance sab sab ko chodkar chali gayi...sab kuch yrh weaklings ke liye...

(hearing dis evrybdy was shocked but they didnt utter a word all were silently crying except tani even rey bt he didnt understand wats happening in his life)

sh:swayam wat teek se bolo..mujhe kuch samaj nahi aara

sw:vo kria and he narrates the whole story to d gang and wat happened in d hospital(rey was shocked)

sw: and vo rey ko ditch nayi kiya...kitna dard hua hoga rey ko vo sab cheez bolne meh..vo hamareliye apni life apni rey sacrifice kiya

(rey was literally shivering hearing d truth)

ne:krai hamare liye itna kuch

vis:mujhe pata tah hamari kriya itna bi buri nahi heh ki vo kisi ke saat aise kel sakti heh

nil:(crying)man v guys r so lucky to hv a frnd like her

vi:(crying)haan dude and he hugs neha and both starts crying..

(bha,amar,sim ,rin all were crying)

(sharon didnt say a word and went towards kria caressed her hair and kissed her on forehead)

OUTSIDE

rey(thaught): kria mujhe joot boli,kria mujhe ditch nayi kiya vo mujhse pyaar karti heh(he couldn't control and went frm their and entered the hospital fire exit) (lol ar jagha fire exit hoti heh)

he entered and collapsed on d stairs

rey: kria mujhe ditch nayi kiya(crying)..she loves me..meh uss din uski aankon meh mereliye pyaar nahi dek saka aise kaise hua??kaise kaise kaise(he banged his hands on d wall 2 to 3 times )meh tumhara pyaar nahi samaj saka meh kaise use face karoonga...vo humareliye itna kuch...aur meh use buladiya...how could i???how how how(and started crying badly)

IN THE ROOM

sw: guys a request

sh: haan bolo swayam

sw: jab kria wakes..dont ask her anythin

sh:par

sw:vo humare liye kitna kuch jela yeh...meh use aur dook meh nahi dekh sakta so plz

sh:ok swayam...and guys

gang:(crying ok)

sw:humeh pehle aunty ki sab funeral ki rituals pure karna heh..

vish: swayam lekin hw kria vo ladki...

sw: meh karoonga aaj se kria meri behen heh and meh uski bhai...aaj se she is my responsibility...meh use kush rakoonga (sharon was smiling with tears she was so proud of swayam...swayam saw sharon who was smiling and he too smiled)

lekin

lekin(someone was jeaulous)

its tani

{I HATE HER SHE IS THE VILLIAN OF MY STORY😡}

meantime kria got up she saw evryone bt didnt react she was simply sitting and was lookin dwn

everybody went to kria's house except rey(he was still in f.e)

(I DONT KNOW WAT THEY WILL DO IN FUNERAL SO M JUMPING A LITTLE BIT)

IN kRIA'S HOUSE

Kria was simply sittin leaning to the wall and staring at her mom's body ...all rituals finished...sw,bha,amar,viky lifted smrithi on shoulders(nt like dat only i dont knw wat they call... i thnk u all understood)

kria who saw dis and shouted ruko...and went towards swayam an asked

kr: heh kya kar rahi ho??

sw: kria aunty ko...

kr:nahi tum aise kuch nahi karoge(angrily)

sw: kri..

sh: kria control urself... guys tum log jao..

kr: nahi..

shron through her eyes said swayam to go...swayam and d boys kept two steps...kria shouted...

kr: mene kaha na mom yahi rayegi mere saath..and went towards her mom (still the body is on d boys shoulders) and caught her hands

sh: kria chodo(crying)

kr:nahi(crying)

all started crying bitterly

sh: kria

kr:nahi...nahi...nahiii

(all girls came towards kria and were literally pulling her)

(boys kept d body dwn,,,kria went and hugged her mom(crying badly vry badly imagine karlo she was shountind and crying badlly...with lot of force girls pulled kria...all boys lifted agin the bodyand walked)

kr:(shouting and crying)swayam plz mujhe mumma chahiye

kr:(shouting)ruko mumma, momm,mumma(girls couldnt control her...she tried to run...but but but a strong muscular hands caught her waist and pulled her towards him(guess) ofcourse it was rey...he was also crying seeing her condition...kria didnt see his face...and shouted

kr: chodo mujhe mumma,mumma(the boys disappeared from d door)

kr: mumma mujhe chodkar mat jayiye mumma plzzz mummma(saying this she fell on the floor...rey is still holding her...he wanted to her her,,,console her bt he cant...and he slowly left her and went behind the boys...sharon came and hugged kria ...kria hugged her tight and both cried god knows for hw long...

phewww

tak gayi

precap: kria joining collage, tani emotional blackmaling kria, kriyaansh conversation

guys in future updates meh rey ko thoda tadpana chati hoon

its my punishment to him for forgetting kria so easily😈

so bare me

plz like and comment guys

ill b on cloud 9😊

Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
Shinning_Angel thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
lovedd the update and i also hate tani btw can you plz continue in english its much easier plz and thanks for the pm
love marrie
Edited by mariumsaeed786 - 12 years ago
ArShiDelena thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊
Diya_luv_D3 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
WOW

I was wishing from so long ki koyi rey ko tad paye
make their LOVE SOOO STRONG
kabhi thut na paye
OH GOD...U JUST GRANTED ME MY WISH
THANKSSS SOOO MUCH DUDE
Edited by Diya_luv_D3 - 12 years ago
dancersqueen thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#17
loved the update...pls update next part asap...thanks 4the pm...
only_kriyansh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Thnks guys for likin my update
Ill continue vry soon
GoldenLuna thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesome ff yar👏...
read all parts n u made me cry😭...
plz update soon n plz pm me n ha rey ko tadpa is an awesome idea...
waiting for update...
only_kriyansh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
chapter 4

recap:gang comes to knw d truth...

all boys headed towards kria's house

sw to sh: kria kaha heh??

sh: vo andhar so rayi heh..vo faint hogayi thi issiliye

rey: wat faint(he was moving towards d room...bt swayam stopped him)

sw: sone de usse..better feel karegi

rey:ok

the day passed evry body involved in their work..bt kria was low all d time gang tried to cheer up bt nothin worked..3 weeks passed(p.s swayam and sharon stayed in kria's house oly..rey insisted swayam dat he will stay with them..bt swayam refused)

one day at night swayam n sharon was in d living room..kria in her bedroom

sh: swayam ab humhe kya karna hai...i mean look at her na kisi se baat nahi karthi hai..akele room meh rehti hai i cant see her like this

swayam got up from d couch..

sh: where r u goin??

sw: near kria..

sh:??

sw:aaj kuch b ho meh humari fighter kria ko wapas lahoongi

sh:lekin hw??

sw: chalo mere saath

(they both went to kria...kria was sittin on the bed and leaning to it)

sw:kria??????

kr:(no response)

sw:kria

kr:(no response)

(kria was lookin at the bed...even she was not blinking hr eyes...swayam came and sat in front of her)

sw:kria mujhe dekho..
(she ws still lookin dwn)

sw:deko kria..
(he cupped her face bt still she was lookin dwn)

sw;dekho kria jo hagaya use bula do...tum aise nahi rehsakti...tumhe b apne life jeena hai...tum aise rahogi toh jo tera mom jo upar bagwan ke pass hai..use kitna duk ho raha hoga...
(he was tellin her as if a dad is sayin to a baby)
hearing this kria looked towards him with teary eyes

sw:mai manta hoon tere saath bohut galat huha hai...lekin tum aise apne aap ko duk nahi de sakti...tere mom hamesha chati thi na that u should b happy

kr:(kria nodded her head as yes)

sw: then y r u like this?? vo apne last breathe pe yahi kahi thi ki u should live ur life to the fullest...tum aisi rahogi toh unnhe kitna boora lag raha hoga?? kya tum apni mom ko kush nahi dekna chati??

kr :again(kria nodded her head as yes)

sw:ok then aaj se tum apni llife kushi se jiyoge...ill be always with u...tum apne ap ko kabi akele nahi samjho...
meh hamesha tumhare saath hoon
(kria nodded her head as teek hai)

sw: ok then promise me kal se...nahi aaj se...infact abi se tum ek nahi life shuru karogi...promise me
(kria smiled and promised him ...all trio hugged eachother...

NEXT DAY IN COLLAGE

all were in the atrium except rey...

kria entered with swayam
the whole gang ran towards her and gave her a tight hug...even she responded to it..

vish:man m soo happy..finally

ne:and haan dont leve neha and go again(swayam cut b/w)

sw:guys forget the past...she is back with us so lets celebrate

gang:yayyy!!!

sw:so chalo guys canteen chalte hai
(evry body was so happy...and headed towards d canteen bt someone stopped her,,,and she looked towards d person)

hi kria m tani..

kr:hi..

ta: mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai

kr: haan boliye

ta: haan... vo meh jaanti hoon ki aap rey ki grlfrnd thi(kria didnt react)

ta: kria...kria(kr came bck to senses)

kr: mujhe principal ke office me kuch kaam hai baad me baat karti hoon

ta: nahi aapko abi sunna padega

kr: nahi ab nahi

ta: plz ..yrh meri zindagi ka sawal hai

kr: teek hai bolo

ta: jab aap rey ko chodkar gayi thi vo toot chuke te...jab se meh aya hahi hoon vo phirse zindagi jeene laga hai...vo mujhse bahut pyaar kartha hai...humesha mera saath dete hai...mujhe hamesha protect karte hai...rey mere sab kuch hai...uske bina meh mar jahoongi..
(kria had tears in her eyes)

ta :i love rey alot...lekin ab(😡magarmach ke aahsoon bahane lagi_😡)vo apke sach jane ke baad he will leave me...meh unke bina mar jahoongi...aap plz

kr: aisa kuch nahi hoga

ta: kya??

kr: rey hamesha tumse hi pyaar karenge..dnt worry

ta: lekin

(bt kria walked from their..and went to canteen)
bt someone heared therir convo..and it was rinni..

IN CANTEEN

kria entered..
sw: kria kahan thi tum??

kr: bas kuch friends se baat kar rahi thi

sw:ok cum sit
(she wnt and sat nxt to swayam)

sw:kya hua kria??

kr: kuch nahi(and she smiled_)

rinni entered d canteen
ri:guys i want to tell u something

nil: tum humhe batayegi??

vi: seriously??

vish: ya dude

ri: guys
(meantime amar came towards rinni)

am: linni ye lo tumala favolat juice
(rinni forgets wat she came to tell and goes to amarland)

ri: mere liye

am: haan
(gang hit their heads)

after sometime kria was walkin in d corridors suddenly someone pulled her in d f.e...she could say easily who it was...yes it ws rey...their llhh started...after mins she came to senses

kr: rey aap kyun mujhe yahan layi??(calmly)

rey: vo mujhe tumse maafi mangna hai

kr: kis keliye??
(he couldnt control himself so he hugged her tight...bt kria didnt respond to it...she was silently sobbing)

rey:kria mujhe maaf kardo...meh tumhe samaj nahi paya meh bahut boora hoon...plz kria mujhe maaf kardo I LOVE U KRIA...
(hearing this she remembered her convo with tani...and jerked from his embrace)

rey: kya hua kria??(crying)

kr: kuch nahi...rahi maaf ki baat isme apki koi galti nahi(she was controlling herself..)

rey:(with his million dollar smile) toh tumhe mujhe maaf kiya??

kr:haan
(he again goes to hug her...bt she shows her palm to stop...he hd a question mark face)

rey: baatcutter(he comes forwad)

kria: rey plz(going back)

kr: aaj se aap mujhe baatcutter nahi bulavoge

rey: lekin kyun tum meri baatcut...

kr: nahi meh apki baatcutter nahi hoon..

rey: kria...

kr: rey plz
(and she was walking towards d door...bt rey pulled her and pinned her against d wall)

kr: rey chodo

rey: tumne aisa kyun bola(little angry)...bolo kria aisa kyun kaha??

kr: maine kaha chodo

rey: kyun bola aise??

kr:( she couldnt control herself..and shouted )
kyunki aap tani ko pyaar karte ho

rey: (flinched back)kya??

kr: haan aap tani ko pyaar karte ho?? heh baat aap b maan lo
rey: (came forward to hug her) aise nahi hai kria i can explain

kr:(flinched bck) plz rey ...aaj se apke aur mere beech meh kuch nahi yeh...agar meh aaj yahan nahi hoti toh aap zaroor tani ke saath hote...mere haane se apne pyaar ko kaise bool sakte ho??aaur meh kisi se uske pyaar nahi cheen sakti...tani apkeliye bani yeh..aap mujhe bool jayiye...samajlo ki aap mujhe kabi nahi mila ho...itne din aap kaise te waise rahiye(sayin dis she goes from their)
(rey wwas dumbstruck...tears were rolling down his cheeks)

kria goes to her house and starts crying loudly...after sometime she straightens herself wipes her tears)
kr: nahi meh kamzor nahi pad sakti...me phir rey ko dukh nahi de sakti...tani aur rey ek doosre ke liye bane hai...mujhe rey se dur rehna hoga(crying)...


precap: a nw entry who falls head over heels for kria...

guys thoda long long comments dona😭
and say ur views...😊
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 6 months ago

छलावा (Chhalawa) ~ A Kriyaansh Three-Shot

Book cover by @ExoticDisaster Thanks a lot for this brilliant book cover Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @SarafWasima in Submit Writing...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse · 11 years ago

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".