ARSHI SS: ~UMBRELLA cr~(BFTW4) IMP NEWS pg53 16/10 - Page 17

Originally posted by: shraddska

But dark or not... you always write wonderful stuff and I am a BIG FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

reserved by me the great. .😛


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woah,i was so lost in the descriptions of the surroundings,that i dint realise when i passed the line "she was expecting"

woah,where is she?in na pub or what?
ya,am right!😉
why is there loud music?(btw,i was also hearing much loud music when i read that line..😛)
and ya,Nia is really a darling..😊
😲 she will work for/under ASR!😲
the name itself gives me goose-bumps,and imagining the situation,my heart slipped 100 beats at a time..
awesome meeting. . .i can't praise it using mere words..
am still lost in it,already read 3 times before commenting,and going back to read one of the loveliest encounters i have ever read. .
am so ☺️ k hero ne heroine ko bacha liya..(aur woh bhi baccha dene ke baad..😆 stupid me.. )
(one confusion,she is carring his child,does not the know him?
🤔 hmmm,that's the biggest twist i guess..
well,i guess you will ask to wait for next update,so i would say- )
hell am waiting for more..plz update asap..😊

lovely start temptation has gone very high to read more lol... awesome start...

Great start..Though its been shown as if Arnav and Khushi are meeting for the first time.. But somewhere I still think ASR is the father of the child Khushi is carrying.

Lets see how this goes ahead.. I mean how they end up being together and if he is the father of tht child then how and when do they both realise that..

I am just waiting for the next parts.. Trust me Appy.. Its quite hard to wait desperately for the next updates when they are so tempting..

I am realy confused after reading it or i think o m misunderstood who is nilkhil Nia's boyfriend or khushi's bcuz he introduced her as khushi his girlfriend in front of ASR uhhh!!!! I am confused

oh my god

Wow... Awesome superb start... Loved it :)

Awesome.so diff in story tellin.all frm kushi's POV.so arshi meet in 1st chapter itself.hope d rude business man who is d father of kushi's child is not asr frm his description as a clean man..but dont want kushi 2 bear any1 else's child.

nice update
as per d first part arshi s meeting for d first tym
he s sweet n khushi s sumwhat blushing around him


readng d prologue i thought sumhow both wll be d same man

it wll be intresting to know how r they bonded 4 d womb??

wow this time am here without the PM😛