ARSHI SS: ~UMBRELLA cr~(BFTW4) IMP NEWS pg53 16/10

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Koeli

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+ 15

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Dilsay
lovely start temptation has gone very high to read more lol... awesome start...
From this start it seemS that ASR is not the father of the baby Khushi is carrying

Looking forward to see more updates of this one ...

continue soon😊

to bond with a baby you dont need blood relation right? ONS2 gul and khushi is the biggest example. if a girl can bond why cant a guy? think about it. ASR is a positive character here.

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priya

@silvia1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

LOVED THEIR FIRST MEETING...NICE UPDATE.WAITING FOR NXT PART.

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Koeli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Madhu123
Great start..Though its been shown as if Arnav and Khushi are meeting for the first time.. But somewhere I still think ASR is the father of the child Khushi is carrying.

Lets see how this goes ahead.. I mean how they end up being together and if he is the father of tht child then how and when do they both realise that..

I am just waiting for the next parts.. Trust me Appy.. Its quite hard to wait desperately for the next updates when they are so tempting..

Madhu the story is about unconditional love. thats the hint.

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Fleur_de_Lis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

nice...liked it...

Does nikhil knew about Khushi's pregnancy????

or she is still hiding the fact...????????

Why did she mutters Arnav's name like that???

were they known to each other before through any way???

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

wonderfull one...I think u should hav planned some twist...

Here i am breaking my brain and trying to figure it out if the baby is Arnavs or not...

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

I liked it.. Initially I thought the man responsible for her pregnancy will be ASR but thank god, he's not. And he's actually a very sweet guy till here at least.. It seems nice, light. I love it... BFTW3 & 4 seems pole apart.. liking both of them.. perfect balance for me😉

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Brilliantly written...Awaiting the twist and turns you bring out in the story...Thanks for the PM

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Uhh :P I'em nt undstndng nythng here appy .. 1st of all khushi iz pregnant with ASR's child.. bt thn hw kum they r meetin here fr da 1st tym.. huh :P Xplain karne ki aap plz takleef karogi appy? !)