ARSHI SS: ~UMBRELLA cr~(BFTW4) IMP NEWS pg53 16/10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wanted to start this story for quite sometime now. I tried to hold it but i couldnot anymore. Initially i wanted this to write as BFTW3 but i ended up writing a different genre for that. I named this as Umbrella (under my BFTW series). I hope you will like it.

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~ PROLOGUE ~

I was on my way to one of my friend's party; he has sent me his car to pick me up. It has been few month now I have started my own business after dismissal of my father. And Nikhil is the man who believed in me and gave me an opportunity to work in this highly competitive market. I will be ever grateful to him for this.

Some people know me by my name now a days and it feels good. After all I am doing it for the life which is growing inside me.

I closed my eyes remembering the day when I helplessly ran to an unknown business tycoon and lost everything before him to save my dad.

He brutally f*cked me and then threw some money on my face.

But Kismat ke agey kuch nahi chalta hai, when I came back to the hospital to pay my father's due I saw him sleeping calmly on that white bed spread, the doctors declared him dead.

That day I felt like as if my world had ended and I don't have a reason to survive. I have lost all hopes. I wanted to commit suicide but then I remembered my dad's words, "You are not going to be a coward like your mother".

I brushed of my negative thoughts and gathered myself to start a new life away from my native lucknow.

With that cash which I had, the one which is responsible for losing my most precious thing to that man, I came to Mumbai in search for a job.

I struggled for a month. One gave me any job.

One day I came to know that I am pregnant. And my whole world turned upside down. I felt so helpless. I did not know what to do. I cannot kill this baby, it's a sin but how can I take care of her when myself don't have any concrete future.

I was about to run down a bus when someone saved me. I fainted at the stop and when I opened my eyes I saw my school friend Nikhil.

He had been a very good friend of mine during my school days so I narrated my story to him.

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I don't think I will be able to love any man.

I don't think any man will love me.

Can there be any man in this world woh will be able to accept me like this? My answer was No until I met Him.

Hi I am Khushi Gupta and this is my story.


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Gust Of Winds




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MayaraaSobti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy me first
WoWww it's fab yaar
i'd like to read this story
Nd of course great story as usual

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Appy,
Good start! I love reading One night stand... I have not read BFTW so I will do that soon. Looking forward to reading this story... Hopefully you will be updating this one just like One Night Stand 😉
Dhrashtee😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept:)vll love to read more...plz plz plz pm whn u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
I like this concept. Seems pretty interesting.
Who's the business tycoon Khushi is referring to and who is the person who she refers to as HIM ... Are they the same two people ...
Well whatever the case, I can't wait to read more.
Please PM me for the next update. Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Appy ... Interesting concept ...
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this looks damn promising...then again its ur writin...😉
love u apppy...for making our days a little brighter with ur FF's

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the concept and looking forward to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another BFTW, wow.
Curious why you named it umbrella. Is someone going to like an umbrella for Khushi, or she herself is.
Waiting for this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..interesting

But i was wondering..is he arnav..whose baby she is carrying..then why she said until he met him..
means 2 different person

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