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hira2050

@hira2050

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Its realy awesome...continue soon nd thnx for pm

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Oh god...I just hope nothing like this happens on the show...:/
This Is so sad...and you've done complete justice to it...
I could feel the anger sadness helplessness...
Great update!

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

loved it..waiting 4 d next update.. 😊

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

just read both parts and i definitely agree with you that the cv's deserve to be killed if they go down the he ditches her and voila she is pregnant route. but that aside, one thing struck me as i read part 2, everyone seems to be focusing on how history has repeated itself in terms of the "other woman" and what arnav's dad/chacha did and what shyam did. But it struck me that if arnav ditches her at the altar, he is also repeating the actions of anjali's first groom. wouldn't it be wonderful to have him remember or someone point that out to him, even on the show? He has been on the other side and should be able to relate to how it feels for her.

apologies for the punctuation in the paragraph above 🤓

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

loved both parts, especially the second... understand how great a shock it must have been for arnav to hear that garima was the woman who had unknowingly been responsible for his mother's death... he must have needed some time to himself to gather his thoughts and come to terms with his conflicted emotions... sadly, by the time he decided on a course of action it must have been too late and a broken-hearted khushi had disappeared!

arnav's emotions of pain, loss and regret just jump out of the page! they are there for all to see in all their throbbing intensity!

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

brilliant... the emotions are sooo heartwrenching :)

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

really beautiful...can feel arnavs pain...continue soon

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

awesome loved it can't wait to read more that was so emotional and heartbreaking perfectly done the hurt the despair was so heart wrenching thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago