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Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

all i can say is its amazing...the agony..the sadness...every emotion..was just perfect...

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

loving the way the SS is progressing, interspersing past and present...a fantastic update

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Gayathri

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Arnav was indeed overloaded with so much of bad incidents in life. But still i am not able to forgive him for leaving khushi in Altar for no fault of hers. I mean at that point he would not have known what to do but after knowing the truth,later he could have given a thought over it and understand that khushi was at no fault. But still he left her and that makes him unforgivable. He claims to love Khushi but he is still Lacking it big time if he leaves her. And that is what he did.So according to me he never loved khushi ENOUGH.

I hope CVs doesn't do such a thing to Arshi otherwise whatever they have shown between Arshi during the last few episodes would become fake and have No sense!

Awesome update Rae! Hugs for writing so beautifully 🤗

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

mwahahaha

-V

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I am in love with your concept... and this viewed as a stand alone OS touched my heart. :)

Thank you for the PMs. :)

-V

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Beautiful banner.Beautiful Reminder :D *Me hates Resses too!*and best of all beautiful story :)

Arnav's losses are just piling up with time isnt it? He has lost the only chance to forget it all, erase it all. A small error, a need to think is excused.But will he realise that his love is not to be blamed? Will she realise why her groom chose not the stairs but another path which would take him away from the venue of the wedding? Will she understand his need for time as a way to organise things and not as a lack of trust or love towards her?

Yet to see that. Waiting for the next chapter Rae. You have described Arnav past very very well :)

P.s I miss WWOW :(

Edited by -happilyunknown - 12 years ago

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

That was amazing...loved it!!

I loved the banner,it perfectly goes with the story!!

Arnav's feelings were beautifully described!! After reading this I was feeling bad for him but I cant forgive him for leaving Khushi!!

I was wondering where is Khushi and what happened to her?

It was very well written...

thanks for the pm..

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Gals

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awesome update..
brilliantly written..
loved it.. thanxx for d pm.

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Nameera

@Nmyra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Rae!!

Okay so I love how you actually emote the downward spiral, the way you are walking us through his thoughts, the denial, the refusal, the guilt and then the unanswered 'why'.

I think the part that got to me most though was how he reverted back to that 15 yr old little boy who kept letting it build until now, when he is finally grieving - Finally acknowledging the pain.

xoxo,

Nami