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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

That was a di-licious update.arnav-anjali are the best bro-sis bond i'v ever watchd in television.and ur update just proved it.bt right nw i'm very much irritated with real anjali and this arnav.i mean,he ditched her just like that!.
Wer's my khushi?.i want to knw abt her.please include her whereabouts in coming updates

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

a beautiful portrayal of a very sensible woman... loved the depiction of how much of a mother and support she had been to him... blaming herself for arnav's actions that hurt khushi so, was painful to read! thank god there are no more secrets even if it leaves behind a world of pain!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

I absolutely love your Anjali.

She is more sensible, mature and truly the older Raizada.

And the storm of emotions that you portrayed on both Arnav and Anjali's behalf was brilliant. Each new emotion that was brought into the picture was so apt and fitting!

And Anjali's dialogues were perfect. Truly brilliant.

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

This was such an emotional update!!

You wrote is amazingly!

Love your Anjali as well!!

Ahh this was a great update!

Loved it. Thanks for the PM x

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Y do you do this to me Rae
U know I hate Anji so much being so selfish n all but your SS Anji is just what I want
That was just amazing
Learning everything from Arnav's point is great
Awesome work

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

You did show better parts of Anjali! I'll take this Anajli to the one in the show!

Painful update! I can't imagine how you write this, hope you are feeling ok after writing about this hurt!

Take care and thank you for the pm!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

dammit woman your anjali is smart loved it hope she back up her words when he tell her about garima i liked your anjali better than the show wait should have waited for the next part fist loved how she asked the right question and insited in getting answers very emotional update well written beautifully done thanks for the pm

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Wow nicely written!!

I guess my quick thing is the story moving forward really slowly... I understand it's all in flashback and Arnav is going through what he has done and lost! But the story is moving a little slow...

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Are you on a mission to make us cry??

God ..your updates are so heart wrenching...but well written

I like your Anjali..

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Nice update...

I loved this Anjali...she is so nice!! I loved the part where she was saying to Arnav that she was not a mother for Arnav,she didn't raised him well!! that was very emotional and painful!!

I feel so so sad for Arnav...He has lost almost everyone he loved!! Poor guy

Do continue soon...thanks for the pm...