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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Ooh! You made me cry.

I love that song.

The concept is pretty nice. Though I don't want them to separate but there is no harm in imagining things :)

I'm in love with the fabulous concept & I loved those flashbacks. It was such a beautiful epi

Continue soon!

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Eeek! That was amazing!! You should definitely continue this!! Loved it xx

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Loved your interpretation of their night together :) Very well written! You should continue this as an SS😃

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

That was beautiful! *Sniffs*

Its sad and emotional! Well i am just getting frustrated on seeing Arnav. If he claims to say that he loves her then why the hell did he leave her in that Altar! 😡

*Calms down*

You write it beautifully Rae! How empty is arnav's life without Khushi was portrayed Beautifully!

And he reliving the old moments was making me cry 😭

Waiting for the next update!

PS: Don't be so hard on them.Please 😔

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Nameera

@Nmyra

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Loved it!! Here without you is one of my all time favorite songs and I love how insanely appropriate the setting of the lyrics and music is with the story-line.

Would love to read more!!

xoxo,

Nami

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I was wondering how the CV's are gonna show Arnav being separated from Khushi after all that has happened between them (If they chose that track) and this SS seems very promising! 😃