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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: segad
my first clue that something was up, khushiji. Arnav has never called her "ji"

you must be down on arnie today to write this so poignantly. Have faith my friend, aage aage dekho hota hai kya.

The 'Khushiji' was just meant to be a light teasing between Arnav and Khushi and I actually wrote this yesterday...and I may be one of those few people, considering the general POV of the forum, who sympathise with Arnav today.

Anyway, Thank You for commenting. :)

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

This update was heartbreaking!! What a beautiful memory or a nightmare for Arnav!!! I wonder what happened for them to be separated!!!

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Great update.sorry abt that rushed comment.bt i read the 3 parts in one go.
Now coming to 4th part,arnav's dream brought a wistful smile on my face.bt the very next moment realised it was just a dream.u penned his feelings beautifully.
Thanks for the pm!

'khushiji' really?.it reminds me of that creep.i prefer arnav's husky khushi

Edited by Crazy_soul - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update rae beautifully done loved the emotion very sad and heartfelt very heart breaking when he worked up and realized it was a dream thanks for the pm awesome and the problem is not you work but your page its giving trouble it took me five minutes to get the page to accept my like and 20 minutes to load the page and i tried from to different computer and homes and coming to comment well this is the third time i am posting

Is it? It's opening normally for me and the 'Like' button is working fine too. Must be some one off thing...anyway, thank you for telling me this.

Also, glad you liked this part. Thank You for conmenting. :)

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amritab

@amritab

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

The dream was absolutely lovely - everything that he could possibly have had - but he chose to be alone, chooses to be alone.

A heartbreaking chapter - you write beautifully.

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Rae u have finally made me feel sorry for Arnav although he doesn't deserve any sympathy from anybody... Plz let them meet now ,it's not only his punishment but hers as well.

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Your update... I got tears in my eyes today! Such a sweet incident, and to know reading it that it was just a dream... And the harsh truth that they are not with him!

Rae, you are a wonderful story teller...

Thank you!

For pm and update!

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

I think its the time of the month for me because I cried when I watched the episode, I cried when I read other stories and I am crying now reading your update! Damn my face is flushed and I have an empty Kleenex Box lying around, witness to my emotional upheavel.

A dream of a bright future, a loving life with his Khushi and the gifts she would have bestowed his existence with would be just that - a dream.

That line along with name Muskaan did for me! And the lyrics were apt with the update :)

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

I knew it was a dream.but I wished it was reality..

His pain,love,loneliness.. everything was beautifully written..

A dream of a bright future, a loving life with his Khushi and the gifts she would have bestowed his existence with would be just that - a dream.

This line just touched my heart..

This OS is just getting better and better

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

that dream arnav had was so damn real it fooled me... for a minute I felt happy at how content he was before his world came crashing down around him... even if he's to blame for losing khushi, his pain leaves you with a pang in your heart and the hope that he might yet find khushi and regain his lost happiness... hope that dream has a chance of becoming real

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