SS:Holding On To Emptiness (part 10 on page 64!) - Page 9

Originally posted by: trivedishraddha

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OMG,so touching. . .
i felt sad for anjali. .😔
its great to read shyam is behind the bars!but wait,Arnav prayed,wow. .
its truly said that-
love can decrease anyone to anything.. .

great to read dadi is gone and Arnav does not consider Garima responsible.
you brought out Payals pain too,that is wat a real writer does,you are truly awesome . ,
and OMG!Arnav fainted!
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well,your note made me 😆
waiting for more,am sure this awesome writer and a very good friend of mine( shreya,i guess you know am talkin bout you. .)

thanks for the pm,i know you have more. .bring it on!
😉

Waiting eagerly for the next update😊

Evil Dadi is out of RM and ArHi's life :P .. and like wow at your characterisation for ASR! He recognised Dadi's plan and fired it right back at her. Now she can rot at the Ashram for the rest of her effin' life ! :L THIS was the ASR I fell in love with, the shrewd calculative businessman that was at the top of everything and beat the smartest people at their own game! The ASR we've been projected to in the show for the past 7 and a 1/2 months lacks this quality hence all these added troubles in his life i.e. Shyam/Dadi/Anjali's manipulation. I bet he won't even hit upon Dadi's plan of ruining the marriage. Y'no I'm just going to assume things went according to your story because I cannot trust the CVs at all this time !! :/

It's so depressing at the moment - Khushi's fighting for her life, ASR's in shock and the family is weak. I'm looking forward to the fun-filled moments you've promised once this hospital track is wrapped up.

PS: I LOVED reading Anjali's realization and breakdown, I'm expecting no less than that in the show too. Lol you've increased the expectation from CVs ten-fold. :)

This is so interesting! Please continue soon!

Full on drama!!!

Very intense and gripping story line. It's getting interesting. Please continue.

beautiful! arnav's pain and fears just leap out of the page at you! so good to see him turn to devi maiyya because khushi is a staunch believer and because he has faith and trust in her belief! nice of you to show anjali being so strong! also liked the fact that the doctor decided to share this devastating news with payal rather than with arnav, leaving her with the need to be strong for everyone... so hope she'll share the news with everyone and they both the families will then support each other! arnav fainting is realistic because of the emotional toll on him... now he and khushi could share a room and recover nicely

Grt work...quite intriguing...plz continue soon

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waitin fr the nxt update!!!😃