Well, you would love to know that am here cursing my stupid-self for not catching up with the SS earlier on
Seriously, when I got your first PM
I read the first chapter and the title; and thinking that it was going to be sad I couldn't read more
Because, frankly I was having a hard time and planned on reading mostly light-hearted work
To lighten my mood
Given the current track nowadays though as I'm already in depression due to Arhi
I thought, Why not add to it😉
But, damn this took a major turn
NO depression whatsoever.😲
Yea, the first few chapters made me bawl my eyes out😭
Especially, Khushi's statue-like-stance, the gun-shot, Khushi's unresponsiveness, Arnav fainting, his desperation and mostly those words he whispered to Khushi to bring her back
Sigh* heart-rending indeed
But, romantic nevertheless,
Thoda filmy bhi hain😳
And so, I enjoyed every bit and here I am cursing myself
Seriously, though
Wish I had the guts to just read it without assuming point-blank
But, as that saying goes "better late than never right"
Hence, regret aside
Coming to the SS: I love it❤️
Seriously, one utterly beautiful SS👏
Fatally, Khushi loved him so much man, she proved it by braving up and taking the bullet for herself. She proved that she was ready to die for him. Awww, I loved that bit. Am filmy too you see so, not a shocker there.😉
But, I loved the feeling I sensed reading this SS: Arnav's desperation, his sense of loss, heck he's an atheist dammit and he still prayed!!! Why? Because, he loves her. I loved his talk to his mother - so painfully inspiring. And amidst all he brought her back; he proved how strong his love for her was.☺️
In away you wrote the SS so that both of their strong love was prove d actually.
It's so fascinating to read
The small arguments they have (But on a serious note I know you're impatient Arnav but, have a little patience when handling her na), Khushi's old fighting and pagal spirit. His returned green-eyed-monster on seeing NK and Khushi together again!!! LOL seriously, just like him even I had no idea we would get to see it once again. But now this charismatic Shaan is back I have a feeling ASR's green-eyed-monster is going to expand manifold.😛
"She felt a feeling of comfort wash over her as she finally had someone she knew so well, with her in Shantivan. Looking at him now, she realized how lonely she'd been for the last two days. "Come in!" she told him and led him inside."
That line really caught me, seeing Arnav in pain I nearly forgot it's not Khushi's fault and that she's in partial amnesia. And being hit by that thought one could only pray for the poor-soul to get well soon.
And until then am going to enjoy the roller-coaster ride to my hearts content...
You've written each chapter vividly, beautifully and charmingly.👍🏼
and despite sad circumstances I love the light-heartedness you've captured within
Thank You for the many PM's you've sent me Hun🤗
And my apologies for delaying reading such a brilliant wok of art😒
But, I am a pagal by birth you see😳
And I have given a long comment as my apology😉
So, forgive me yaar?!
P.S: I simply adored the way you've portrayed NK's and Arnav's bond in this SS, I always wanted them to be the brother's that they are and I loved that bit. They love each other and show it in the most absurd way still knowing it as a fact is a relief.
P.S.S: I admire how you've given everyone importance Hun, especially Payal and Akash, at least their thoughts were displayed na.😃
Well, I'm still not finished... am moving to thread two now😉
See you there
Cheers
~Cher
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