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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Hun
Well, you would love to know that am here cursing my stupid-self for not catching up with the SS earlier on
Seriously, when I got your first PM
I read the first chapter and the title; and thinking that it was going to be sad I couldn't read more
Because, frankly I was having a hard time and planned on reading mostly light-hearted work
To lighten my mood
Given the current track nowadays though as I'm already in depression due to Arhi
I thought, Why not add to it😉
But, damn this took a major turn
NO depression whatsoever.😲
Yea, the first few chapters made me bawl my eyes out😭
Especially, Khushi's statue-like-stance, the gun-shot, Khushi's unresponsiveness, Arnav fainting, his desperation and mostly those words he whispered to Khushi to bring her back
Sigh* heart-rending indeed
But, romantic nevertheless,
Thoda filmy bhi hain😳
And so, I enjoyed every bit and here I am cursing myself
Seriously, though
Wish I had the guts to just read it without assuming point-blank
But, as that saying goes "better late than never right"
Hence, regret aside
Coming to the SS: I love it❤️
Seriously, one utterly beautiful SS👏
Fatally, Khushi loved him so much man, she proved it by braving up and taking the bullet for herself. She proved that she was ready to die for him. Awww, I loved that bit. Am filmy too you see so, not a shocker there.😉
But, I loved the feeling I sensed reading this SS: Arnav's desperation, his sense of loss, heck he's an atheist dammit and he still prayed!!! Why? Because, he loves her. I loved his talk to his mother - so painfully inspiring. And amidst all he brought her back; he proved how strong his love for her was.☺️
In away you wrote the SS so that both of their strong love was prove d actually.

And then, when Khushi woke up and went on partial amnesia, seriously it broke me🥺. How much he must've hurt to realize that he doesn't even exist in her life; in the love-of-his-life's, life yet, amidst the pain his not giving up. Bravo on his confidence man.👏
I love how you're once again rebuilding their relationship dear
It's so fascinating to read
The small arguments they have (But on a serious note I know you're impatient Arnav but, have a little patience when handling her na), Khushi's old fighting and pagal spirit. His returned green-eyed-monster on seeing NK and Khushi together again!!! LOL seriously, just like him even I had no idea we would get to see it once again. But now this charismatic Shaan is back I have a feeling ASR's green-eyed-monster is going to expand manifold.😛

Yet, looking at it from Khushi's POV she must be feeling like a stranger midst most unknown faces, must be feeling lonely, and knowing everybody's hiding something from her she must be feeling a sort of apprehension so, I'm kind of relieved at the fact that she has a known face with her now.😊

But, I also got to admit I simply luuurve seeing a jealous ASR so, Shaan's character totally justified

"She felt a feeling of comfort wash over her as she finally had someone she knew so well, with her in Shantivan. Looking at him now, she realized how lonely she'd been for the last two days. "Come in!" she told him and led him inside."
That line really caught me, seeing Arnav in pain I nearly forgot it's not Khushi's fault and that she's in partial amnesia. And being hit by that thought one could only pray for the poor-soul to get well soon.

And until then am going to enjoy the roller-coaster ride to my hearts content...
You've written each chapter vividly, beautifully and charmingly.👍🏼
and despite sad circumstances I love the light-heartedness you've captured within
Thank You for the many PM's you've sent me Hun🤗
And my apologies for delaying reading such a brilliant wok of art😒
But, I am a pagal by birth you see😳
And I have given a long comment as my apology😉
So, forgive me yaar?!

P.S: I simply adored the way you've portrayed NK's and Arnav's bond in this SS, I always wanted them to be the brother's that they are and I loved that bit. They love each other and show it in the most absurd way still knowing it as a fact is a relief.

P.S.S: I admire how you've given everyone importance Hun, especially Payal and Akash, at least their thoughts were displayed na.😃

Well, I'm still not finished... am moving to thread two now😉
See you there

Love ya
Cheers

~Cher

xx

Edited by Cheryth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cheryth

Hey Hun
Well, you would love to know that am here cursing my stupid-self for not catching up with the SS earlier on
Seriously, when I got your first PM
I read the first chapter and the title; and thinking that it was going to be sad I couldn't read more
Because, frankly I was having a hard time and planned on reading mostly light-hearted work
To lighten my mood
Given the current track nowadays though as I'm already in depression due to Arhi
I thought, Why not add to it😉
But, damn this took a major turn
NO depression whatsoever.😲
Yea, the first few chapters made me bawl my eyes out😭
Especially, Khushi's statue-like-stance, the gun-shot, Khushi's unresponsiveness, Arnav fainting, his desperation and mostly those words he whispered to Khushi to bring her back
Sigh* heart-rending indeed
But, romantic nevertheless,
Thoda filmy bhi hain😳
And so, I enjoyed every bit and here I am cursing myself
Seriously, though
Wish I had the guts to just read it without assuming point-blank
But, as that saying goes "better late than never right"
Hence, regret aside
Coming to the SS: I love it❤️
Seriously, one utterly beautiful SS👏
Fatally, Khushi loved him so much man, she proved it by braving up and taking the bullet for herself. She proved that she was ready to die for him. Awww, I loved that bit. Am filmy too you see so, not a shocker there.😉
But, I loved the feeling I sensed reading this SS: Arnav's desperation, his sense of loss, heck he's an atheist dammit and he still prayed!!! Why? Because, he loves her. I loved his talk to his mother - so painfully inspiring. And amidst all he brought her back; he proved how strong his love for her was.☺️
In away you wrote the SS so that both of their strong love was prove d actually.

And then, when Khushi woke up and went on partial amnesia, seriously it broke me🥺. How much he must've hurt to realize that he doesn't even exist in her life; in the love-of-his-life's, life yet, amidst the pain his not giving up. Bravo on his confidence man.👏
I love how you're once again rebuilding their relationship dear
It's so fascinating to read
The small arguments they have (But on a serious note I know you're impatient Arnav but, have a little patience when handling her na), Khushi's old fighting and pagal spirit. His returned green-eyed-monster on seeing NK and Khushi together again!!! LOL seriously, just like him even I had no idea we would get to see it once again. But now this charismatic Shaan is back I have a feeling ASR's green-eyed-monster is going to expand manifold.😛

Yet, looking at it from Khushi's POV she must be feeling like a stranger midst most unknown faces, must be feeling lonely, and knowing everybody's hiding something from her she must be feeling a sort of apprehension so, I'm kind of relieved at the fact that she has a known face with her now.😊

But, I also got to admit I simply luuurve seeing a jealous ASR so, Shaan's character totally justified

"She felt a feeling of comfort wash over her as she finally had someone she knew so well, with her in Shantivan. Looking at him now, she realized how lonely she'd been for the last two days. "Come in!" she told him and led him inside."
That line really caught me, seeing Arnav in pain I nearly forgot it's not Khushi's fault and that she's in partial amnesia. And being hit by that thought one could only pray for the poor-soul to get well soon.

And until then am going to enjoy the roller-coaster ride to my hearts content...
You've written each chapter vividly, beautifully and charmingly.👍🏼
and despite sad circumstances I love the light-heartedness you've captured within
Thank You for the many PM's you've sent me Hun🤗
And my apologies for delaying reading such a brilliant wok of art😒
But, I am a pagal by birth you see😳
And I have given a long comment as my apology😉
So, forgive me yaar?!

P.S: I simply adored the way you've portrayed NK's and Arnav's bond in this SS, I always wanted them to be the brother's that they are and I loved that bit. They love each other and show it in the most absurd way still knowing it as a fact is a relief.

P.S.S: I admire how you've given everyone importance Hun, especially Payal and Akash, at least their thoughts were displayed na.😃

Well, I'm still not finished... am moving to thread two now😉
See you there

Love ya
Cheers

~Cher

xx


i just want you to know... that i LOVE you for this comment!!!! i'm so SO glad that you liked it so much!!!!! your comment just made my day!!!!! and since u gave me such a HUGE booster dose, im gonna start writing this SS with greater vigor... GLAD u decided to finally give it a shot... KEEP READING!!!!!! n i won't let u down!!! this is a total filmy and masaledaar ss, let me tell u... when its finished, people are gonna need to sit with a bowl of popcorn while they read it!!! 😛
thanks for commenting!!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: darkangel93

true... true... are you watching that show continuously, btw??? i havent been watching it... just saw two, or maybe three episodes... will watch it this weekend, i guess... and i see that you still haven't read the new part... kya yaar... im waiting for ur comment over there!!!! 😛 wish the writers do something abt ipkknd, for a change... ab aur nahi saha jata... this is such a shitty track!!!! they could still modify it to make it more interesting... hope they see sense and get something going... else they're gonna loose their viewers soon... Do u watch ipk regularly now???

Naah on and off, only KSG and his mom's scenes to be precise coz everyone else can't act! 🤔 You're absolutely right, the way they're treating IPK is pathetic and by dissing a large number of fans they can never make their new show a hit. Me too, can't stand this shitty track hope the makers do something about it soon. Wbu? are you watching it regularly...I've promised someone I'll watch the ME and tell them how it was but haven't seen it all this week and last week, written updates all the way. Oh so so sorry, dimag se nikal gaya tha okay I've posted a comment but it's on the new thread. Where do you want me to post from now on, here or there. I don't mind either but just so you don't miss the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome writing...

plzzz update soon dear...

eagerly waiting...

do continue...

plzzz...


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