SS:Holding On To Emptiness (part 10 on page 64!)

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Poor Khushi yaar, how much will she suffer?

umm.. i think u mean arnav.. coz khushi is merely unconscious here... arnav's the one who's suffering... n don't worry.. he won't have to suffer much.. maybe just a LITTLE bit more!😆

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adithyan

@adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

loved the update...thanks for pm..

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SARUN.fangirl18

@SARUN.fangirl18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

LOved it
Loved it
Loved it
Continueee
N pm me the next part plzzz
I'll be waiting 😃 👏

😳

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spurthi

@spoorthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

this part was awesome
beautifully written buddy
loved it
hope everything will be fine
update soon

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

lovely piece

can i have a pm for updates

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

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OMG,so touching. . .
i felt sad for anjali. .😔
its great to read shyam is behind the bars!but wait,Arnav prayed,wow. .
its truly said that-
love can decrease anyone to anything.. .

great to read dadi is gone and Arnav does not consider Garima responsible.
you brought out Payals pain too,that is wat a real writer does,you are truly awesome . ,
and OMG!Arnav fainted!
***
well,your note made me 😆
waiting for more,am sure this awesome writer and a very good friend of mine( shreya,i guess you know am talkin bout you. .)

thanks for the pm,i know you have more. .bring it on!
😉

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I am keeping full faith in your storyline and so i am totally enjoying the track though the current one was heart wrenching. But nevertheless loved it!!!

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: shagun05
I am keeping full faith in your storyline and so i am totally enjoying the track though the current one was heart wrenching. But nevertheless loved it!!!

thanks!!! just a bit more of drama... because 'woh story hi kyajisme drama na ho?' 😆

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ayu_tripathi

@ayu_tripathi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

loved ur story...its beautiful..can really feel the emotions its been written with...amazing work...please PM me when u update...thanks..!!!...n continue soon..!!

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Mishika Bedi

@KeyCat

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

It was sooo intense, I feel soo saad!!!!!!!
Hope this never happen in the show and the whole mess is cleared it a lot more easier way!!!!!!!!
You are an amazing writer!