FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 63

Originally posted by: *mad*

hahahaha
i like that drivers reaction.. yeah arnav seems like a mad man so the money can be fake...
hahahhah...it is soo cute to read that part with dhad dhad.. i always like that part..
so now when he ask khushi if she is alright, and when he he is going to realize he just made a fool of himself... it will be fun...now i suppose he is going to apologize and she is going to walk away.. and there start ASR all attitude in a war path to bring back his wife..

so you better be a very good at bullying ok

Originally posted by: VasantiLad

Smita

Well done you were building the suspense like the crest of a wave & I kep wondering when the crash was gonna happen - when were they going to meet- wow - i loved this bit at the end - same as when it ends in the epi on a crucial bit

Before Khushi can open her mouth, Arnav covers the distance between them in two long strides and to her utter shock wraps his arms around her. He pulls her close in an embrace, his hands caressing her head. He takes slow deep breaths, almost as if he is sighing in relief, his face buried in the curve of her neck. Then as his weight sags on her, he whispers croakily, his voice awash with anguish.

"Khushi... Tum theek ho?"

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hah! Knowing Arnav, he'll probably get mad at her for him thinking she was the one in ICU and going on a wild goose chase!! Bloody typical!

Loved how in a very few words, you conveyed Arnav's disposition through Aman. Brilliant! Your use of sentences to keep him in the misconception loop starting with Payal and continuing with Garima is so clever.

I'm probably in the minority here, but I really don't think she should forgive him - easily. I still maintain his behavior toward her was the pits. Please don't let him off easily!

After the whirlwind of his actions running around looking for her and the roller-coaster ride of his emotions, the meeting seems strangely calm. And of course, he's only thinking of himself and his feelings on seeing her physically unhurt! I just cannot wait for her to blast him off! (Right? You won't let him off easily, right?)

I do feel for him, but my mind keeps harping on the scene at the mandap. He left her at the altar. In the meanest possible way. At ground zero. There is no possible salvation for him. What on earth can he do to resolve that? There is nothing he can do or say that will make it right! On top of that, he had the audacity to demand that she leave her mum. And all because of lie that Dadi told. Which he believed. Which means he trusted Dadi over Kushi. So I'm really looking forward to seeing how you will tackle this problem.

Thanks for the longer scene. 👏😃Can't wait for the next scene. Thanks for the PM.😃

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

*And finally im un-reserving!🤣🤣
Takes a deep breath before reading...

Dhad Dhad... Dhad Dhad...

Smita( yes i just said it!)...I Hate You & ur cliffhangers!!
"Khushi... Tum theek ho?" Thats how u end!😡

Do u actually want to kill us!?😲

See, thats the point...
one minute u make me annoyed at Arnav and the next you make me feel sorry for him!
Pichle update laga tha...ki Arnav ko peeto but seeing how hes reacting, melted by heart!😭
The way he embraced her the moment he saw her! awww...
and the things he remembered on the plane.
Do you actually expect me to stay angry at him!🤔
His anxiety, pain was just beautifully written...tugged my heart!💔

Reaction of the cab vaala after he saw the 1000 rs note!
Nakli nahi hai!😆

And the air hostess is back!😆
Bechari got too concious after he was gaping at her...dnt think she has crush on him nemore!😉

LOL!
Aman...if i was him...id be really confused too.
Atleast he got to see the day where ASR isnt just angry.

And yes, Shashi is getting better...👍🏼
Really hope one day in the serial too he gets to speak again!

Lucknow, the place where everything had begun❤️

Awesome Update yaar!😃

Go, im sooo excited for the next one!!
I bet its gonna be heartbreaking!

PS - I soo saw ur PM coming!🤣

Originally posted by: smitzy

awww... heartbeats abhi se numb? Rabba Ve moments mein kya hoga tumhara darling 😉 fir to tum faintwa hui jaogi laagat hai humka hehehee

ya the cabbie scene, I had to put in filler as I was switching between the scenes.. and thought hey this is something ASR would do!

chalo, I'm happy that this chapter had brought so many varied reactions to different people! stay tuned for agla scene 😉

cheers!

hahahaha.. dekha maine 😛 arreee sab kaam ek saath khatam ho jayega to how will anticipation build up my dear 😆

yeah I know highway to hell.. but ab think kareka padi ki wahan tak pahunchna kaise hai.. I have the wooing thing figured out, just thinking about the next chapter for now.. hmmm..

stay tuned 😉

think think ...barabar hell ke through hi pahuchana

Guess all this will not be anough now Arnav bitwa...just wait and watch !!!!

Originally posted by: smitzy

hey shwethaaa 🤗

even if you're angry with me, I'll still hug you and give you kissy wissy 😳

arre my dear, don't get mad please.. I wrote such a long chapter with non stop action.. I got exhausted woman!! And moreover, I was yearning for some cuteness and some awww action... ladna jhagadna hota rahega but bechare Arnav needed to relax so badly! I definitely don't want to kill you.. mere FF ke 2 hi to stalker hain 😆

Ya I know what you are talking abt your confusion with how to feel for Arnav.. I'm also feeling the same way when I write about him. You know what, after writing 39 scenes, I have figured out that I'm actually more of a Arnav's POV writer than Khushi's. And even though I try to alternate between the two of them, I end up writing more and more about Arnav.. hmmm kuch na kuch to kareka padi

Shashi is getting better, not exactly but yes he will get better soon! 😊

thanks for the "lovely" angry comment dear hehehehe

muaaah!