FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 64

Originally posted by: asr13

haan faitwa ...pakka !!!! I did not actually miss Rabba Ve in your story uptill now, it is as intense and addictive ...but haan faintwa toh pakka !!!!😉

think think ...barabar hell ke through hi pahuchana 😛

Unki chuppi me bhi raaz hai, unke pyaar me bhi andaz hai

Gusse mein mohabbat lipti hai, ye baat aankhon me dikhti hai

Guess all this will not be anough now Arnav bitwa...just wait and watch !!!!👏

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

I agree...

Iv actually not missed the romantic moments, wooing at all!

The way the story is being written and the emotions being dispalyed and obviusly the drama is entertaining enough!😃

Originally posted by: asr13

Satya vachan !!!!!

Smitaaa ...ab chane ke jhaad pe mat chadna ok 😆

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Okay...
What does chane ke jhaad pe mat chadna mean?
Yes i suck at hindi!

Originally posted by: asr13

It's not you, it's me being too fluent in Hindi maybe, and taking everyone for granted ...😆

Chane ka jhad pe mat chadna means don't get over confident, because people are praising you 😛 ...no offence intended 😳

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Smitzy, I think you really love writing cliffhangers like the author of Nancy Drews book series. I feel betrayed as a reader...chappals and tamatar throwing time 😆 Joking dear!

I would be serious in my complaining if you didn't write such a good piece. The way Arnav broke internally when he misunderstood Payal and thought Khushi was in ICU. How he read the instructions in the plane and kept assuring himself that she will be fine...all he was feeling was numbness and daze. You've penned it out perfectly. To add to this feeling, he was feeling double guilty knowing his father's mistake and Garima's innocence. I was impressed when he offered the cab driver money to reach faster 😲 itni jaldi thi isko. But it just shows his urgency.

When he reached Garima, I was like "oh ho, he won't even clarify here who is the patient." But then the best part so far, Khushi walks in and here come the dhak-dhaks 😆👏 Bas, jaldi update ker. And just because I didn't complain earlier that scene 2 was short does not mean you can write short ones😆 Like scene 3, write looong ones. Dil khush ho jata hai 😊

Originally posted by: smitzy

ROFL!! 😆

you two lovelies have spammed an entire page with your chattering awww 🤗 dost ho to aise 😳

nai re, hum chane ke jhaad pe nahin chadenge.. tension not.. coz I never feel completely satisfied with the way I write.. when I reread the chapters I always find something wrong, some grammar incorrect, some his/her messed up.. These errors never show up when I run the spell check before updating hahahahaa

I'm writing the next chapter and I've already cooked up a storm 😆

Originally posted by: asr13

It's not you, it's me being too fluent in Hindi maybe, and taking everyone for granted ...😆

Chane ka jhad pe mat chadna means don't get over confident, because people are praising you 😛 ...no offence intended 😳