FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally.. he finds her... yippee!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur post is 😭.me.
asr condition his pain just mindblowing.ur written method is oustandin.
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 11 part 3
amazingingly written
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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn awesome update:) am glad i came across this ff...and got a chance to read something so well written...read whole update with baited breath...hats off to you...arnav's emotions man seriously wow...thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loving the intensity of the story Smitzy...great read. thankyou for penning it and letting us enjoy it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy



stalkers hahahaha 😆

🤗

jaldi padho and unres karo!! I'm waiting 😉

Hello you ...unres toh ho gaya, comment bhi ho gaya ...abhi we are waiting again :D
and ipkkndforeva, I agree with you girl about cliffhanger...ye aisa hi karti hai, its the IPK infection , no worriej 😉 ...only Dhud Dhud now till next update Tongue ...
Yaar ye ASR ne na Jaan le ke rakhi hai , ek pal ko lagta hai ki sahi lagi padi hai ..well deserved ...Tongue, kya likha hai likhne wale ne Tongue ...aur doosre pal, my heart goes out to him ...awww 🤢 ...
But then, I remember khoon ke aansu, and the highway to hell and back ...and I know smitzy, you are loving it as much as we are 👏 ...the fact is that is NO justification for what he did to both of them ( flashback Mandap scene ... her holding her Lehnga and crying...him saying she needs to leave her mom !!!! )...can he actually ever redeem himself ?
Looking forward to some spicy, full on KKG ishtyle Dhamakas ...and yeah, I'm waiting !!!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva



Finally un-res!😆
How was the wait?😛


meri neend ud gayi hai... mera chain kho gaya hai
unres ki wait kar kar, ye kya ho gaya hai 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Annie12

Smitzy awesomeness. ... This chapter was crackling with intensity.. I was feeling as anxious as Arnav...superb!,


Originally posted by: nazibah

After reading the last line has cracked up laughing because I could so imagine Arnav saying that! I can't wait for Khushi to come out of shock! That'll one heck of an update!!! I adored this update!!! Thanks for the PM!!!


Originally posted by: Princessbride

Smitzy, you brought tears to my eyes with the end !


I love how you seamlessly drew a connection between the safety instructions on the flight and Arnav's memories, how everything reminds him only of Khushi. Also loved how you conveyed the sense of urgency by the way you write...I, too, was impatient for Arnav to get to the hospital. so I gobbled up this chapter really fast! I will read it again slowly and savour it this time...


Originally posted by: ridizzz

awesome update

loved it

You are one exceptional writer''love the way this story is progressing''.so far you have shown so many different emotions with each chapter'..just simply superb

Waiting for the next update eagerly


Originally posted by: Natasha333

Wooww...Superb Update...u write very well...👏


Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

What a beautiful chapter...could feel his pain and anguish through the flight..in everything he saw and felt! The words were beautiful...I know u want long feedback... But am as shocked as Khushi right now...


Originally posted by: pup03

God it was mind blowing...how eagerly i was waiting for this update...and it has come up so nicely...lovely...words are short of explaining who i felt reading this chapter...It was marvelous...😃


Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Damn awesome update:) am glad i came across this ff...and got a chance to read something so well written...read whole update with baited breath...hats off to you...arnav's emotions man seriously wow...thanks for pm:-)


Originally posted by: minnuma

just loving the intensity of the story Smitzy...great read. thankyou for penning it and letting us enjoy it...



Thank you to each one of you who takes the time to read and comment on my story 🤗 it's your lovely words and feedbacks that make me strive harder to write better.

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

Dhud Dhud Dhud Dhud


OMG what an update Smitaaa ... Jaan logi kyaaa ? Phir se rula diya yaaar !!! You've potrayed Arnav's pain, his desperation beautifully ...mwaaah !!!

My hands still are numb...heartbeats ka toh poocho hi mat ! 😉

Sab kuch aankhon ke samne ghoom raha hai ...
from the time he remembers the kitni baar kaha hai tumhe apni seatbelt lagao...
to what if I lost you ? ...
to him telling himself she'll be fine ...
to mujhe bataya kyun nahi ? ...sirf 3 ghante lagte yahan aane mein ...
To his relief when he sees his life in front of him ...aah the Tum theek ho ? after ages ...

Amazing !!!!
His 1000 rupee trick made me smile , oh so typically ASR !

Waise, btw Khushi ki haalat Kya hui hogi jab Hamari ye haalat hai lol😛



awww... heartbeats abhi se numb? Rabba Ve moments mein kya hoga tumhara darling 😉 fir to tum faintwa hui jaogi laagat hai humka hehehee

ya the cabbie scene, I had to put in filler as I was switching between the scenes.. and thought hey this is something ASR would do!

chalo, I'm happy that this chapter had brought so many varied reactions to different people! stay tuned for agla scene 😉

cheers!


Originally posted by: asr13

Hello you ...unres toh ho gaya, comment bhi ho gaya ...abhi we are waiting again :D
and ipkkndforeva, I agree with you girl about cliffhanger...ye aisa hi karti hai, its the IPK infection , no worriej 😉 ...only Dhud Dhud now till next update 😛 ...
Yaar ye ASR ne na Jaan le ke rakhi hai , ek pal ko lagta hai ki sahi lagi padi hai ..well deserved ...😛, kya likha hai likhne wale ne 😛 ...aur doosre pal, my heart goes out to him ...awww 🤢 ...
But then, I remember khoon ke aansu, and the highway to hell and back ...and I know smitzy, you are loving it as much as we are 👏 ...the fact is that is NO justification for what he did to both of them ( flashback Mandap scene ... her holding her Lehnga and crying...him saying she needs to leave her mom !!!! )...can he actually ever redeem himself ?
Looking forward to some spicy, full on KKG ishtyle Dhamakas ...and yeah, I'm waiting !!!!!😉


hahahaha.. dekha maine 😛 arreee sab kaam ek saath khatam ho jayega to how will anticipation build up my dear 😆

yeah I know highway to hell.. but ab think kareka padi ki wahan tak pahunchna kaise hai.. I have the wooing thing figured out, just thinking about the next chapter for now.. hmmm..

stay tuned 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: babli0204

As I was reading this update my heart was constantly going:
Dhad Dhad.
Dhad Dhad.
Dhad Dhad.
Dhad Dhad.
Along with Arnav and Khushi.

Really!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read it in one breath!!!!

Arnav's despair...his pain at the mere thought that Khushi is suffering...it is breath-taking...

I got scared when in the plane he could nto hear the airhostess, that he is going to faint because of the exhaustion due to anxiety over Khushi. And instead of his thinking and worrying that Khushi is in hospital, he will land there himself!!!!!Thanks god nothing happend to him though!!!!

The confusd cabbi...is funny with his expressions at the 1000 Rs notes!!!!!!!!

Khushi's stunned expression on seeing him in the hospital...just WOW !!!!

THANKS a lot for the PM!!!

It started to like the fact that now my mornings always start with your beautiful creations!!!!!!!!!!!


thanks so much for your beautiful comment dear! I'm glad you liked it so much 🤗

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