OS: Night Of Honour - Page 13

it was too good...

the flow the emotions...

evrything...

just loved it...

Whoa rafa..didn't know you write this kind of stuff..emotional to the core... Great work..but does khushi have to be so self sacrificing..

OS like these, makes me hope for a mature separation..! ❤️ =/ i would rather see THIS than a bunch of mad RM people giving cold shoulder to Khushi after marriage and all saas bahu crap.. =/

Beautiful, simply beautiful piece of work..! <33

i'm literally crying😭😭😭

Beautiful. Loved Arnav's dialogues, especially when he mentioned about naming thier first child 😭

oooh cold! I don't know if I agree with Arnav though..."no man shall be punished for the sins of their fathers" etc but also I don't think I'd be able to do it if I were in his place. sure momentarily maybe you wouldn't be able to handle it, but to forever cut someone you love out of your life...I don't know if many people would have it in them to do that...okay now I'm just thinking out loud 😛

but heres an interesting (and fitting) quote from one of my favourite hindi movies of all time
"mare huon ke saath zinda raho aur jo zinda hain unhain...unhain maar do"
(live on with the memory of the dead and let the living die) said mockingly of course for a somewhat similar situation.

M i late?...i feel so.. I loved it to bits and pieces..i was actually missing your deep emotional writing

Greatt work yar..this is wht v call PERFECTION.
Absolutely amazing.. Mind numbing..shockingly loveable...
Thumbs up..hatts offf
Keeep the spirit uppp:-)

You have beautifully etched the pain and dilemma,The reason he is freeing her is because he loved her...yes this should and ought to be the sole reason..love you for it..