OS: Night Of Honour

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@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

This was beautiiffuull! So very beautiful!

The emotions, the turmoil, the love! Aaahhh this was heaven!! Loved it !

Loveed how khushi thought she just HAD TO HAD TO talk to him.

Loved how arnav didnt amt to force anything on her againn!

I thought by the end of it, it'l be a happy ending but *sigh* guess not! But the prayer in the end is what completed it.

The prayer that even if she wasnt going to be with him, she wished him to be happy! Happy without her! I loved it!!

You should write more OS's! Not that i need to tell you but just saying! 😆

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Chandnii2

@Chandnii2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

wow...this is just..Have no words for it yaar! it;s too beautiful!! Loved it!

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Woah. I dont want this to happen.EVER. But somewhere I know that Arnav wont be angry at her. Why would he be? She's as innocent as him in this, maybe more. But there's pain ahead for them. I just hope not something like this. But you rock girl! Such a nice flow of word you have! Do write more OS's and some happy ones too plz! :-P

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surenkal

@surenkal

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

beautiful...i wish they would do something like this

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

a very well written os..
loved it

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

"Because I love you, Khushi Kumari Gupta. Because that love will never stop and because you don't deserve its curse. So please," he pressed his hands together in prayer as the first tears began to roll down his cheeks. "Please Khushi. Go."

"If you're up there and listening, I don't mind that you didn't think I was the right woman for your son. But please," she clasped her hands and closed her eyes, ignoring the looks of a passing woman startled by Khushi's wedding finery. "Please ask God to make it so that he doesn't have to suffer any more. I'm sorry that to the end I brought him nothing but pain, but please. I will leave him so don't let any more anguish come into his life."

Both want the same thing for each other but not together. Sigh, the tragedies of love.

Edited by AllSmiles86 - 13 years ago

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tahseenghori

@tahseenghori

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Wow... that made me teary... I love the fact that he is asking her to leave because he loves her so much that he doesn't want to make her choose rather than just hating her because she is Garima's daughter... And that confession is to die for... Loved it!

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darkninja

@darkninja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

i think ive forgotten how to breathe
i swear if this comes true you're gonna have have a mob after you with sacks of rotten vegetables 😆
rafa this was one sad, awesome, beautiful and intense OS and i loved very part of it and your song choice made me almost cry and im not mushy person that is an acheivement for you good job 👏😆