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Jaya Devi

@Aphrodite88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

I love it!!
soo heart renderingly written!!
awesome!!!

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

beautiful and extremely sad :(

Loved the way you wrote their emotions, and Arnav's reasons :)

magical OS :)

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

So sad and yet to so poignant. Now if we have to see a separation, this is what I would love to see. None of that idiotic blame game, but rather him letting her go because he doesn't want her to leave her family for him. Beautiful OS! :)

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

So I'm crying. Sitting at work, hiding my face behind the desktop, bawling my eyes out.. Why, when its just a small piece of fiction written on a website? Because its real. This, given what ive been watching, with dread and shock and yet deep pleasure, is how the story SHOULD go. And this hurt, this pain is so well embodied in this small little one shot, it got to me, right between the ribs, right on target.

And right while I'm at work, for God's sake! Now I'm going to have to pretend to my colleague who just walked in with tissues and a concerned expression that i just got the bad news on the bonuses for this year, Damn you, wonderful writer! Damn you to hell!

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Edited by napstermonster - 13 years ago

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654772

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

awesome awesome awesome!! and a little sad too... that poolside will always hold so much magic for me!

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Loved the awesome ! It was a sad but a really nice read ! Thank you so much for the PM dear 🤗

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

it is just beautiful...so sad...but i loved it..

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

honour or horror???

hope this doesn't happen in the show...a love so pure as theirs doesn't deserve such an end!! but must say you wrote the whole thing beautifully...arnav's justification was apt but still heartbreaking...