SwaRon OS: Having you by my side

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Edited, FINALLY 😆 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64911713

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mili1987

@mili1987

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

wow..what a beautiful OS👏...really loved it😊

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Okay so the response that I have got is 🤔

I had send around 90 PMs but the response is not even half.

So henceforth I will PM to those who actually READ my work and comment. I don't want to simply flood your inbox with PM's.

Will reply to the comments soon.

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drooler

@drooler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

beautifully written,awesome OS

loved every bit of it

sharon's agony and pain is very well depicted

thanks for the PM

one of your best works👍🏼

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

dis is awesome Rutu!!u wrote it so beautifully dat i cud really read the pain they are goin through!loved the fact dat swayam stood beside her all the while..no matter what he didnt lose hopes,sharon re-living the pain for the loss was best describes,the trauma dey passed through still swayam hid his grief to make her alright was just amazing..n dey found happiness again!
Dis is totally one of the best pieces I have ever read on swaRon!!